I'm trying my hand at Thor Fanfiction. Tell me What you think everyone.


Thor awoke from a nightmare he has had for the past week. Loki falling into the Bifrost after being crushed by the All-Fathers words. He knew it was but a dream though. Thor had caught Loki just in time and used Mjolnir and brought them to safety. Loki was currently locked into his room. The All-Father punishing him for his almost destruction of Jotunhiem.

Thor pulled himself out of bed and cleansed himself of the sweat from the nightmare and dressed for the day. He walked to his usual morning destination, Loki's room. Knocking Thor entered the room. Loki was still asleep on the bed, sunlight was shining down onto his pale skin making it glow. Thor walked over and carefully sat on the bed and ran his fingers through Loki's hair, waking him up.

Loki slowly opened his eyes and stretched "Thor..." he said with a sleepy voice.

"Brother" Thor responded

Loki sighed "How long are you going to keep calling me that?"

Thor chuckled they had argued this before, when Odin and Frigga had told Thor about Loki's true origins. "I told you Loki, no matter your birth, you are still my brother."

Loki rolled over until his head was in Thor's lap, Thor stroked Loki's hair, knowing his brother relished in the attention. "Come on Loki, get up and get dressed the servants will be bringing breakfast in soon."

Loki rubbed his cheek against Thor's leg before rolling off to the other side of the bed where he stood up and stretched once again. Loki used his magic to cleanse his body and get dressed as well. "Why do you continue to break your fast with me every morn?" Loki asked

Thor huffed and moved to sit in one of the chairs his brother kept around the room, while Loki sat in the other chair, picking up one of his many books on seidr. "I have still not forgiven our parents for their lies, I will return to eating with them when your punishment is over."

Loki looked up at Thor in fondness "You punish them on my behalf how sweet of you."

Before Thor could reply there was a knock on the door. "Enter" Loki responded. The servants entered quietly and left the food before bowing and leaving.

"I will punish anyone for hurting you Loki, you know this." Thor said once the servants had left. "Just as when we were kids and you would come crying to me about some slight someone had made against you. Did I not punish them for you?"

Loki smiled and picked up a grape from his plate and ate it before responding. "Of course, but I can stand up for myself just fine now."

Thor picked up the meat and took a bite and washed it down. "I know, but would you take away my fun in punishing those who dare go against my little brother?"

"No, have your fun. What are your duties for today."

"I have to oversee the rebuilding of the Bifrost. We also have guest from Vanaheim arriving in a week's time. Father wishes for me to prepare for their visit. I will also be training the warriors today as well. I will return to have lunch with you though."

"Bring me back a book from the library. The one about elemental magic." Loki requested

Thor nodded "As you wish. Since, when have you been interested in elemental magic?"

Loki starred at Thor for a moment before looking down "Since, your return from Midgard."

Thor sensed something more and stood up and walked towards Loki before kneeling in front of him. "Loki?" he questioned

"When I almost killed you, I sensed something when your power returned. I want to study it, to find out what it was."

Thor sighed and reached his hand up and stroked Loki's cheek. "I hold no ill will towards you. You know this don't you."

Loki nodded and leaned his cheek into Thor's hand. "You have tried to kill me multiple times, what is one more?" Thor chocked

Loki snapped his head up and glared at Thor. "I have never tried to kill you. I simple wished to hurt you, I knew you would not be seriously hurt."

Thor laughed "Yes, because you always believed me invincible."

Loki huffed "I simple want to keep you on your toes. A warrior should never let their guard down."

Thor smiled and pulled away from Loki "I appreciate your continuous reminders on this point Brother."

"Leave me Thor and go about your duties I tire of your presence" Loki grumbled

Thor smiled "As you wish, I will return."

Thor ate the last bite of his food before leaving, but not before stroking his hand through his brother's hair. Thor walked down the hall with a small smile on his face. He always felt happy after being with his Loki.

"My prince, the All-Father request your presence" A Guard said when he saw Thor walking down the hall.

Thor nodded his head "Very well, lead the way."

The guard bowed then turned to lead Thor to the All-Father. Odin was found standing in one of the castles many towers overlooking the Bifrost.

The guard bowed silently then left. "Father, you requested me." Thor spoke as he stepped up to stand next to him.

"My son, how fairs Loki."

"He is well." Thor responded

"The Bifrost will be fixed by then end of the week. Loki's punishment will end upon its completion. Vanaheim queen will arrive the week after. I do not have to tell you that you and your brother both must present yourselves well in front of her."

"We know our duties Father. Loki more than anyone."

Odin turned to Thor then. "Has he said anything about his time as King?"

"He told me very little, only that the throne was lonely while I was on Midgard."

Odin turned to look back out over the Bifrost. "I made no secret about what I planned for you and Loki, once you took the throne. However, I worry that Loki's feelings for you remain that of siblings. You were both born to be Kings, you to rule the Throne of Asgard as King, while Loki rules as its King Consort."

Thor smiled "Father, your worries are not needed. Loki shows his affection for me every time he plays his tricks on those I turn my attentions too. This time he punished me knowing I could take the punishment better than a mortal."

"Yet, you promised to return to her." The All-Father said

Thor sighed "Yes, I will have to let her down when I see her next."

Odin nodded "See that you do. I will not have Loki upset over her more than he already is. He is a God, she is a mere mortal, his jealousy is unbecoming."

"His jealously was valid. I admit I held some affection for her. Only because she reminded me so much of Loki. Jane is a good friend and nothing more."

"Good, carry on with your duties, my son. "Odin said as he walked away.

Thor sighed his father brought up a good point. He had not talked to Loki about his feelings on Jane. He would have to do that before the Bifrost is fixed.

Thor walked down to the edge of the Bifrost where Heimdall stood with the Lady Sif. Sif turned when she heard Thor's approach.

"Thor," she called with a smile.

"Lady Sif, how goes the repairs?"

"Well, Heimdall says we can begin remaking the bridge now. The magic has been restored and is waiting for construction to being."

Thor nodded "Then there is no time to waste. Father wants it done by the end of the week."

Sif nodded and waved to the men standing off to the side. They began taking out their tools that were designed to harness the magic of the Bifrost .

"Will you take lunch with me and the others? Sif asked in a hopeful voice.

Thor shook his head "No, I have promised Loki I would eat with him today."

Sif frowned "You, have been spending all your meal times with Loki, even after he…

Thor cut in "speak your next words carefully Sif, I know there is no love lost between you and Loki."

"You take his side on everything Thor. He almost killed you." Sif said with frustration

"He did not mean it truly and has apologized for his behavior." Thor responded calmly

Sif huffed but kept her mouth shut. Knowing not matter what she said Thor would not listen.

"Dinner, then?" Sif asked

Thor nodded "I will come to dinner."

Sif smiled appeased that she could spend some time with Thor in private. A few more hours passed with Sif and Thor watched to make sure all was going well with the Bifrost. Eventually, they both left to train the warriors. Fandral, Volstagg and Hogun met them in the ring. They were overjoyed to learn. Thor would be eating dinner with them. Before Thor knew it, he was walking into the library and grabbing the book Loki wanted and then making his way to Loki's chambers.

"Loki" Thor called as he entered

"I will be there in a moment." Loki responded from another room

Thor walked over and sat in the chair he had sat in that morning and placed the book on the table. It was not long before the book floated into the hair and traveled to land in Loki's hand as he sat down on Thor's lap.

Thor wrapped an arm around Loki's waist. "I must speak with you." Thor said

"Go on." Loki said as he opened the book.

"Father is lifting your punishment, when the Bifrost his finished, He has also expressed his concern on your feelings about Jane."

Loki stiffened "I do not wish to speak about her." Loki growled

"Loki" Thor sighed

"No, as long as you never see her again. I will forget she ever existed."

Thor leaned his forehead on Loki's shoulder. "I promised I would return."

Loki moved off Thor's lap and turned to glare at him. "Did you now?" Loki said coldly

"I have no feelings for her Loki, next I see her I will explain that she but a friend."

"Like any other maiden has backed off. Even now Sif still tries to sway you into her bed. Even after I cut off all her hair."

Thor sighed and leaned back in the chair. "She is but a mortal Loki, her life will be over in a blink of an eye. You will live forever and will be the one to remain by my side. Sif knows her feelings will never be returned."

Loki huffed and sat down in a chair across from Thor. "If she does not get the message, will turn her into a toad."

Thor laughed "My Loki always full of mischief."

"I am the God of Lies, mischief and chaos. It is in my nature."

Thor smiled and nodded "Aye that it is. Enough of this talk let us eat"

Loki nodded and began to eat the lunch the servants had left before Thor's arrival.


Night had fallen and Thor was returning from his dinner with his friends. He pushed open Loki's door and quietly crept into his room. "Loki" Thor whispered

When no response came Thor walked into Loki's bedroom to find him already asleep. He walked closer and saw Loki sweating and tossing in his bed. "Loki" Thor called louder, this time to wake him up. Loki groaned and opened his eyes. Thor walked over and kneeled beside his bed. "What troubles you?"

"It's too hot. Make it rain" Loki whined

Thor leaned forward and kissed Loki's forehead. "Of course." With little effort Thor called for a storm and rain began to fall. The wind started blowing in and the room quickly became cooler.

"Better?" Thor asked

Loki nodded and closed his eyes "Sleep with me?" Loki asked

Thor grinned and stood up and stripped down to his underthings and climbed into bed beside Loki. Loki turned and curled into Thor's arms. Thor stroked through Loki's hair and closed his eyes. They both fell asleep to the sound of Thor's storm.


That's it for the first chapter. What does everyone think?