I don't own Bleach or any of the character in this story, just this idea.

I know most of you are wanting me to continue on with my stories, which I will do, but these ideas I just got to write these stories down once they pop into my head.


Bleach - Vortex

Ichigo is suddenly sent to the past with a couple of friends, now she has to live through the past to return to her original timeline and perhaps find something more. F!Ichigo, kids!Nel/Don/Pesh

Chapter 1

"Do you think it will work?" Dondochakka asked worringly as he looked at the other two people in the room.

"Of course it will" Pesche exclaimed happily, pinting at the object in the middle of the group.

"Its a surprise, how else are we going to show our appreciation?" Nel asked looking at her brothers.

"But what if something goes wrong" Dondochakka asked worryingly. "I don't want to get grounded again."

"If you keep saying its going to go wrong, your gonna jinks us or worse" Nel continued, "they'll find out and it won't be a surprise."

"But..."

"Stop complaining bro-" Pesche started but was cut off.

"Oi, you lot. Its time to go" Ichigo called as she made her way upstairs.

"Crap, we forgot to tidy this room up" Dondochakka exclaimed as they suddenly began running around the room, trying put things away.

"What's going on?" Ichigo asked as she opened the door, before stopping suddenly as they all heard a click.

Nel, hearing the click the loudest. Looked down only to see the object she thought she had hidden, was actually crushed under her foot. Ichigo would have laughed at the looks on their faces but didn't when something began to appear behind Nel. It looked like a black line, like you would see when a garganta had appeared.

"Nel, get a way from there?" Ichigo yelled but it was too late.

The odd like garganta split in two, but unlike a garganta, this on had arms. Two black arms, that reminded each of thek of hallow arms were thin and bone like. The moment Ichigo had spoken, the two arms struck fast. Grabbing them before any of them could react, they were quickly dragged inside.