Hello readers, I am new to writing so i welcome constructive criticism oh and sorry about the i's in the AN not being capitalized but really who is actually gonna read this thing anyway, eh i should stop rambling now and get on to the story
Elsa: yeah, you really should
Me: HOLY CRAP
Elsa: what
Me: HOW ARE YOU HERE
Elsa: um i came in through the door left wide open, oh and Anna is raiding the fridge
Me: CRAP, well anyways guys you enjoy the story while i go drag an annoying redhead out of my kitchen
Anna: HEY ELSA LOOK WHAT I...um who are you
Me: GIVE ME MY TRIPLE CHOCOLATE ICE CREAM BACK *starts to chase anna around*
Elsa: well anyway enjoy the story, bye
"talking"
"thinking"
"singing"
"Animal speech"
?'s POV
I could feel them.
I could feel all of them staring at me, watching, always watching.
I don't know how long it's been since i last ate, but, I know that i'm hungry, so very very hungry.
i believe it's been 3 days, i don't know for sure but that is how long it feels like.
that means that i have probably been walking for 3 days as well, but, like I said, I'm not sure.
I don't even know where i a-...is that a redhead in a green dance dancing down the street singing ok...weird eh anyways- "Hi! I'm Anna, what's your name" "..." "um, mister" oh right i should give her my name "...my name is Kenshin, Kenshin Kureizan" wait how did she get over here so fast.
3rd Person POV
The girl, now known as Anna smiles wide at the strange looking man, he wore a black cape with a white fur trim that had a hood attached which had no trim, he also wore black skin tight leggings with knee guards that were black with a red trim,they had 3 points at the top and 1 point at the bottom, he also wore what looked to be armor with strange leather looking material squared of at the end and bolted down onto each other, he had chain mail under the leather with gauntlets and on 1 side a shoulder guard with the same design as the knee guards, he had a strange long sword with a curved blade at his side inside of its scabbard, he wore black combat boots with armored plates on them, and he had 4 belts, 1 around his waist, 2 hanging down to his lower thigh on the left, and 1 hanging down to the right. He was tall, about 6'4" with medium black hair falling down to his neck that covered his left eye his right eye, however, was visible so she could see the blood red iris inside of it, he was slim but you could also see that he was very toned.
"Well it's nice to meet you mr. Kenshin, where are you from" "a country called japan"
was his simple answer with that she grinned and said "never heard of it before, anyway would you like a tour of the kingdom" "I don't think I will be staying too long" aww please, please, please let me give you a tour and after that you can meet my sister , but we might have to wait a little while for that since she is the queen" the man could only think "this woman's sister is the queen, I feel sorry for the queen this must get annoying" "ugh alright you can give me a tour" she grins really big again and says "great! oh i can't wait to show you around" "I can though" " um miss anna" "yes" "could we get something to eat first" "oh, sure i know this really great place" and so she led him to a place and they sat down, ordered their food, and began to eat.
After the tour was over Anna started to drag him to the palace."um, where are we going" to meet my sister of course" "oh yeah,forgot, wait how did I forget, her sister is the queen"
while he was internally trying to figure out how the heck to act around royalty, he didn't notice the pole in front of him and well "WHAM" "ouch" he groans as he rubs his head "ohmigosh are you alright" yeah just fine" he winced a little as he gets back up on his feet and says "remember this day pole for you have a short lifespan ahead of you" "well, done threatening the pole " "yes i am done threatening the pole now can we get a move on" he snapped, embarrassed "just wondering, why didn't you move out of the way" "um..uh.." "are you nervous to meet my sister because of the whole her being queen or something like that" "yes" "no" "oh you are aren't you" "yes" "no" "you don't have to be, she may seem a bit cold at first" she giggles for no reason "but she is really nice once you get to know her, oh we're here" suprised he looks up to see they were indeed at the palace doors and gulps "well let's go in" "you can do this, you can do this, don't lose control, don't lose control conceal don't feel, conceal don't feel" the doors opened, he steeled his nerves, and they walked inside.
Well how was it was it good if you have any OC's then send me the info and i might try to get them in the story but i need a maximum of 10 OC's only and 7 of them have to be bad guys sorry but i need more bad guys than good so send them in any suggestions feel free to PM me or leave it in the reviews just no flames if you flame i will lock hans in your house and force him to flirt with you incessantly but first i'll sic elsa on you she gets mad when people hurt my feelings
Elsa: seriously don't flame or you will find out what it feels like to slowly get your fingers and toes froze and then broken off
Anna: seriously don't like flamers
Rapunzel: hey guys
elsa: hello cousin
anna: hey punzie
me: why are you here shouldn't you and flynn still be on honeymoon you guys aren't in this story till later can't figure out how to incorporate you yet
well anyways bye guys this is kenshin signing out
All others: BYE!
