Chapter 1: truths tricks
3rd POV
Smoke hung in the air as Edward transmuted as blue sparks blinded him, there were a few shouts and protests but they were lost in the sound of static. The transmutation circle grew brighter and brighter till Ed was standing in an endless white void. "So I take it you are here to retrieve your brother" growled a white figure illuminated in a black flame. "What's your payment will you even offer your own body "it hissed.
"YEA I got my payment right here" Ed shouted and pointed to his gate. "This is my portal of truth which means I can use it however I want ."
Truth laughed hysterically "So it's come to that but I can't take your offer. As I recall you still need to learn the true meaning of friendship" he taunted.
"THAT MAKES …" Ed was cut off as small hands grabbed him.
"For your toll I will take your arm witch I will replace with auto mail, and I guess I'll need to change you to the dominant spices too" truth grinned. As Ed was pulled further into the gate he felt his body changing but before he saw what happened he blacked out.
-POV: MY OC koinu -
I arrived while Ed was transmuting "no Ed!" there was no time I intercepted the transmutation which sent me with him. I knew something was wrong when I saw Ed going through the gate. Truth looked at me and gave me his scare the crap out of you grin and I felt my self being pulled in the gate to. Before I could react I went out cold.
When I awoke I was lying in a meadow but something didn't feel right. I morphed into a wolf and back when I noticed it a pony lying on the grass with an automail front and opposite back leg. "Ed is that you"? I was answered with sleepy "five more minutes Al" then soft snores.
"Well that answers my question" then the thought occurred to me "if Ed is a pony then does.." I looked down and almost yelped I'm a pony to? My homunculi's symbol was still on my hand or hoof as it was now. Over further examination I found both me and Ed where Pegasus. I was a reddish brown Pegasus (like my wolf form) with a dark brown main/tail and a light brown streak running down the middle. Ed was a darkish yellow pony with a braded main and tail. Getting bored I lean over and shout "fathers attacking!" which earned me a fist to the face.
-POV: Ed-
"In the gates name koinu shut…" my voice trailed away as I saw a reddish brown pony standing over me. I was about to attack when she held up her hoof and in the center was an ouroboros tattoo. "Koinu is that you" I questioned in a confused tone.
I was answered with a sigh and a stern "no I'm the boogey man who do you think".
"Sorry I'm just" I looked down do see I was a pony "WHAT THE FUCK I'm a pony to!"
Authors note: short starting chap. Review and please I'm a noob and this is my first fanfic so please be nice I will only post more if I get reviews
Ed: give canagan a chance she tries her best *coughdogbreathcough*
Canagan: herd that
Koinu: sorry about that (canagan punches Ed "runt") yea so I'll just say it canagan does not own fma or mlp she does however own me as her oc so yea see you next chap. BUY :P
