I'm Baaack! ...Wow I got soo much support from my story it made me want to write sooner than planned.

I changed the ages to make the story better. Elliot and Olivia have also been partners for ten years instead of eight!

Maureen-18

Kathleen-15

The twins- 13

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The situation was anything but simple. As a thanks for being detectives for ten years both Elliot and Olivia were given two first class tickets to Hawaii. Elliot traded his ticket in for two coach tickets and Liv immediately agreed to do the same. Elliot then bought two more tickets and planned on bringing his children, a decision he now regrets.

They are stranded on an island that appears to be deserted. How they got here is the even crazier story.

flashback

They all thought it would be a fantastic trip to go and sightsee the reefs for the day. It had been, they were all smiling and enjoying themselves when it turned for the worse. They were starting up the boat to head back to the island when it made a cluck and didn't start. Normally this situation would've been just fine with a simple radio to the headquarters. Unfortunately the captain of the boat didn't tell them he had taken them to several reefs which were not on the scheduled route and out of reach of the radio tower.

Although nobody seemed to concerned Elizabeth said, "That didn't sound too good"

"Oh its ok all he has to do is radio another boat to come and get us." Elliot explained receiving a guilty look from the captain who was not much younger than him. Noticing this look he turned to him and said, "Right?"

"Normally yes, but I thought you guys would enjoy it more if we went to look at some of the bigger reefs that are not scheduled on the tour so we aren't exactly in range of the radio tower." The man said quietly.

All the children got worried expressions on their faces and began to ask questions all at once. They were silenced when Elliot began to yell, "You What!, How could you be so stupid!?!" He began to walk closer to the man backing him into a wall. Olivia then placed her hand on Elliot's back and caused him to turn around, "Elliot calm down...think about the kids" she whispered

His expression softened considerably and he went and sat down next to them, wrapping them all in a hug. He stroked their hair and whispered comforting words to them.

"Ok how are we gonna get outta this?" Olivia asked

"Well they know I was scheduled for a tour, they'll notice if I don't come back, they will send someone I am sure of it!" the man said

"Until then?" she said

"Well the sun is setting so there isn't much we can do. There are a few snacks down below." he said directing the last part at the children

The kids went down below and began to eat the few items that were down there. They were scared but confident in the idea of getting rescued. Elliot and Olivia were still up above with the captain.

"I swear to god if anything happens I am holding you responsible." Elliot said through gritted teeth

"Make that two of us" Liv added

"Hey!, I thought you were on my side?" he asked Olivia

"Oh no I just didn't want the kids to see their father commit murder but their not here now are they." she replied

"Listen I get it I screwed up I just thought you might enjoy seeing the larger coral, I liked your family and I wanted you to enjoy your day." he explained on the verge of a breakdown

"Well a lot of good you are." Elliot said before heading down to see his kids, Olivia hot on his tail.

Unfortunately, help still hadn't come by late that night. All of the children fell asleep on the bed in the cabin below. The captain had been searching for a boat for what seemed like hours using binoculars. Olivia had fell asleep on the floor next to the bed and soon Elliot also allowed himself to speak.

Nobody knew how long they had been asleep but they awoke to the shrill scream of Maureen. "Land! Land!" she yelled. Elliot and Olivia began to run upstairs and investigate.

"Do you have a smaller boat?" Liv asked

"Of course a safety kind" he said

"Kids get things you think you might need we are going to land." Elliot said. The kids scurried off grabbing the food and other choice essentials.

end flashback

They are now on the island. They of course hadn't known it was an island, nor that there was nobody on it, nobody except for them.

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Ok its not too awful long but it is only the first chapter!...Let me know what you thought...love/hate...continue/not...and for you shippers dont worry the EO will come later!