Hey guys this is my first fanfic for a book. I love fifty shades, which means I'm not changing anything but filling in the gaps. I love Kate and Elliot and want to explore them as a couple, from Barbados to the Aspen engagement. I love people who tell me what they think of my book. However please don't be mean.
I take the story from the Barbados trip...enjoy and please review.
Chapter 1, the meaning behind Barbados
Kate's POV
As we drove to Tacoma International airport, I began feeling a bit nervous. I looked over at Elliot who had been quiet since we left this morning. I couldn't exactly blame him; I mean I felt exactly the same way when I had to meet his parents a few days ago.
I take his hand as we turn into the airport. He stops at a reserved parking and sighs.
"Hey?" I say, "This is going to be great."
"Your dad is a national media icon." Elliot says looking ahead, "I own a construction company."
"You're the best constructor in Seattle." I say defensively, "I was having lunch with my mom and a few of her pathetic housewife friends, they were saying that their husbands only want the best to build their companies, and they said that the best is Grey Construction, the best is you." I grab his face and stroke his cheek, "I'm proud that I get to call you my boyfriend. If you ever forget that, I'll hate you." I smile at him and watch his frown turn upside down. I plant a small but lingering kiss on his lips, "The great thing about going on holiday with your girlfriend is that you get to see her in a bikini that hardly covers anything and then figure out what you're going to do with me." I wink at him and watch his grin become wider.
"Come on," I smile at him, "Let's go."
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As I walk into first class with Elliot tailing behind me, I see my father sitting with my very blonde mother and very arrogant smiled brother. He is kneeling next to my mother telling her something, since my parents are sitting at a two seater.
I turn to look at Elliot who just smiles at me. I walk up to my parents and see my father reading the Times magazine.
My mother looks at me and grins widely, "I started getting worried." She says.
My brother stands up to look at me and then Elliot, "Ladies and gentlemen, the other Grey." The way Ethan says it, it sounds like a deep sort of resentment.
My father looks up to look at Elliot and then grimaces, "Other Grey?"
"Yes dear," My mother smiles, "Remember I told you that Kitty Kat here was seeing Elliot Grey."
"I thought you meant Christian Grey." My father says with a deep throaty voice.
"No honey," My mother sighs, "Elliot Grey, Christian Grey's brother."
"Either way it's a Grey." Ethan rolls his eyes and walks to his seat.
"That is my ridiculously rude brother," I hiss at Ethan and then look at Elliot, "Ethan, and Ethan-my boyfriend. Elliot Grey." My brother just takes his phone out and starts scrolling across the screen. I sigh and look at my parents, "Mom, Dad- this is Elliot Grey."
"I think we established that." Ethan pipes.
"Elliot," I smile at him, "This is my mother Dallas Kavanagh."
"It's a pleasure." She smiles at him and shakes his hand.
"Daddy," I smile at my father who has a stern look on his face, "Daddy, Elliot. Elliot- Simone Kavanagh."
"Nice to meet you sir." Elliot smiles and shakes his hand. My father just looks at him.
"This should be an interesting flight." My father grumbles and then looks at his magazine again.
My mother nudges my father who looks at her and then sighs, "It's good to have you with us Elliot. I have booked out two of Cobbler Coves best suits; Camelot and…I always seem to forget the other ones name. Kate, you and your brother will share Camelot with Elliot while your mother and I share the other one."
I just look at my mother who looks down at her nails. It's no secret to anybody in Seattle that my parents' marriage is in desperate need of repairs. Maybe that's why they are sharing a suite, because that would be a surprise to both me and Seattle.
"Really?" I raise an eyebrow at him.
"Yes really Katherine." My father says exasperated.
I was always ever Katherine when I stepped over a line; I'm Katherine when I piss my parents off. I'm Katherine when I think I'm allowed to speak my mind.
My mother looks at me with wide eyes. I then turn to Elliot and say, "Let's go." We go to our seats which are located in front of Ethan.
I buckle up and look at Elliot who just grins at me, "What?" I smile at him.
"The worst part is over," He grins, "Now its just bikini's and hot sex all the way."
I smile at him and take his hand.
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We land at Grantley Adams International Airport in Barbados after…only god knows how long.
We drive from the airport to Cobblers Cove in the limo. The air and the weather in this place is warm yet perfect in a way. I sit next to Elliot holding his hand while looking at the beautiful scenery that this beautiful place has to offer.
"I can't wait to get this dress off of you." Elliot purrs in my ear. I look around in the limo. Everybody is occupied so I smile and look at Elliot.
"Why wait." I place my hand over the growing "bump" on the front of his jeans. I can see through Elliot's ray-bans his eyes closing as he stifles a groan.
"So Elliot." My father says looking up as I quickly move my hand to my lap before my father can see what we up to, "I hear your business is going nothing but well."
"Oh," Elliot says shockingly, "Where did-"
"Come now Elliot," my father rolls his eyes, "Surely you know what it's like for a man of my success to know about all the young entrepreneurs that are succeeding. I mean I know your brother, but he is far beyond your success."
"Daddy!" I hiss at him as my mother says, "Simone."
"No it's cool," Elliot sighs, "My brother is a full-time billionaire, whereas I just earned my first million." I smile at him and take his hand squeezing it.
"A million is still better than nothing." My mother smiles at Elliot, "Isn't that so darling."
"Mmm…" My father says and then takes his phone out and answers it. It must have been on vibrate, "Hello…" My father's eyes go wide, "Um…no, no work until I'm back. Yes. Yes. Goodbye." I look at my mother who just blinks a few times and then looks at my father.
"Work dear?" She says.
"Always honey." He smiles and then looks out the window, "Looks like we are here."
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Elliot and I didn't waste any time. Once we got in the Camelot Suite at Cobblers Cove, with Ethan morbidly trailing behind us, we dived into one of the rooms without our bags and made a dive for the bed. However Elliot did slowly roll my dress off of me as I squirmed underneath him.
"If you don't hurry," I pant, "I'm going to come and you'll have no one but yourself to blame."
Elliot chuckles as he quickly takes his clothes off and hovers over me once more, "You are so perfect."
He sinks slowly into me and I groan loudly and say, "You have to hurry, because if my parents come in or Ethan, we're screwed." At that Elliot moved. His rhythm was fast –very fast- but it was mind-blowly perfect.
"Yes…yes….yes…yes…" I moaned and groaned while Elliot moved, "Omigod Elliot, I'm gonna come, I'm gonna come…"
Elliot moved fast and kneaded my breasts while he groaned inwardly as he came and soon, I followed.
Elliot flopped on top of me and looked at me grinning.
"Best vacation ever." I grin at him as he chuckles.
It is a short chapter because I want to see what you all think. let me know.
-Chani
