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For all you fans out there of "Twitch Twitch", that I had here at fanfiction before it was removed. Here is a poem from it. The story is posted and continues on at fanworks .org if you're interested in continuing to read it!
Please look under the Yu Yu Hakusho sections and make sure you search with "All Ratings" selected or it may not pull it up!
Ok peoples, as a added bonus (since I'm in the mood!) Here is the chapter "Blanket Of Regret" in poetic form. It's not suppose to be an epic of the chapter, but just the distilled feelings of Hiei and what was really going on in his head as this last chapter's events played out.
This is, however, a very simplistic form of poetry. My best friend tells me it's too simplistic and does not do Hiei justice. She may have a point. Would you guys like to see a poem that is more complex with euphemisms? If I get in the mood I probably will. At any rate, I'm just screwing around so critique as you please.
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Blanket of Regret
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You had taught me
something
As you stood before me
Without any real fear
A
human
A mere human
Was all that you
were
Was all that you'd ever be
And I hated you
As
you persumed to
Touch me
Liked I had
invited you
As if would accept you
With all that I
am
With all that I'll be
And I resented
you
As you latched on
Tight
When you held
me too close
So I could hear your heart beat
With all that
you had
With all that you knew
And I recoiled
When
you invaded my
Space
When you spoke
to familiar
Like you would ever know me
As though you
had telepathy
As though you could love me
And I chained you
to me
When you broke your
Promise
When you turned
to run
No longer wanting me
As if I was the
weak one
As if I was the nothing
And I pursued
you
To the corners of your
Mind
As you tried to
escape
To hide from me, your pursuer
As if this is
all that I was
All I will ever be now
And you taught me
something
Dragging me back and forth
The Chaism
Of my choking
love for you
The ceaseless depth of my hate
As I argue with
you
As I argued with myself
And I didn't want
to be alone
As you looked at me
Softly
When you
reached out
To gently touch my hard face
I am powerless
before
I am enraptured by your words
And I was
broken
When you pulled away
Translucent
You must've
hated me badly
To whisper 'I love you'
When you knew
you were leaving
When you didn't care enough to stay
And still I was
haunted
With the ghost of your
Voice
You whispered
passion in my ear
And danced before my eyes
Like I would
finally have you
Like I could touch you once more
And I am me
Like
I was long before
You
The being I had
forgotten
The being you had changed
As though I was
only dormant
As though this was a empty dream
And I don't know
you
As I'm perplexed by the
Smell
The female
scent on my clothes
A mate's mark on my body
But there's no
one here
But there's no one I can remember...
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So here it is. As it is. Tell me how you like it. And it is what is..... unless.... I tinker with it. Which I love to do.... eh he he he
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