Ok so I want to know from you if I should continue this. And if you have any ideas for a better title feel free to let me know!
Prologue
The year is 2358, humanity has reached its highest peak, scientists, researchers, and doctors have finally created the perfect genetic code for human life. This code, made the ideal human, it gave them ideal looks, ideal appetites, ideal thoughts, ideal talents, ideal personalities. For example a male would be tall(not too tall though), dark hair, gorgeous eyes, and the creamiest skin. He would be mysterious, intriguing, charming, smart, dashing, level headed. The perfect kind of high society citizen.
It seemed as if humanity had finally found a Utopian way of life… or at least, they were close, all they had left to do was to… exterminate the undesirables, the imperfect race that was still mucking around in the streets of their perfect world. Those atrocious people, hot heads, loud, shy, opinionated people. People who looked strange, like odd colored hair, strange eyes, someone too short or too tall, someone over weight or under weight. People who were…different, they decided that they had to go, they decided that they weren't good enough for their perfect world and they were getting rid of them.
Even if it had to be done one by one.
It wasn't always this bad though, before the elimination process they used the separation process; which started at birth. Since sorting, and picking genetic codes still wasn't a perfect science, every baby born was inspected thoroughly for physical defaults, genetic defaults, disease, and mental disorder. The infants, who have any of these things, were immediately sent to a separate wing in the hospital to later be sent to one of the holding camps when they were old enough. The ones that seemed healthy and ideal were then sent to the second phase where they tested the baby's personality traits.
If the baby had a short temper, or was lazy, or immature, or shy, or even if they had a large appetite, they were sent to the same wing to join the rest. The ones that passed, the perfect ones, were reunited with their mothers, while the doctors broke the news to the other mothers that their children would be sent to the holding camps.
That's what happened to me. I've never met my real parents. When I was born I was immediately sent to that separate wing when they saw my large forehead and pink hair. I was genetically imperfect.
I've spent my whole life in a holding camp. But I was one of the lucky ones; I got to be placed into a family unit.
See, that's how the camps worked. You're sent to the camps after your first birthday and you're either sent to an orphanage or a family unit. There were also families in the camps that were related. They were the real lucky ones. They were born in the camp and got to stay with their family, unless they were perfect, then they'd be sent out into society and adopted into a family.
The holding camps weren't as bad as you'd think though. We had our own little society, within the guards who were there to make sure we were kept in line and didn't escape, we basically had our own society. Our own laws, currency, and schools. We had a set of leaders, and a justice system. We got along fine and were left alone as long as we behaved and stayed in the camps.
So when people began to mysteriously disappear within our holding camp society we couldn't help but get suspicious.
Extermination a fanfiction story.
Characters:
Main:
Sakura Haruno: 15 years old. Story told mainly in her POV. She has lived in the holding camps all her life with her adopted family unit, adopted brothers Shikamaru and Choji.(You don't really need to know the parents) She has short pastel pink hair, gray-ish green eyes, a large forehead, and pale skin.
Sasuke Uchiha: 16 years old. Story some times told in his POV. He is one of the perfect examples of the perfect humans in society. His father Fugaku, is one of the powerful leaders in the society who make the laws, regulations, anything to run the society more perfectly. His mother Mikoto is very loving and warm towards him and his older brother Itachi. He has jet black hair, onyx eyes, and pale skin.
Naruto Uzumaki: 15 years old. Story may possibly be told in his POV in later chapters. He has been Sakura's best friend since they first met in 2nd grade. He has lived in the holding camp all his life as well. He lives in one of the orphanages under the watch of Iruka. He has blonde hair, pinkish skin, cerulean eyes, and birth marks on his cheeks in the shape of whiskers.
Secondary:
Hinata Hyuuga: 15 years old. She was born into the holding camps and is with her biological family. Little sister Hanabi, father Hiashi, and cousin Neji. Her mother died in child birth with Hanabi and Neji lives with them because his father and mother are both dead as well. She has pearly white pupiless eyes, long midnight blue hair, and pale skin.
Neji Hyuuga: 17 years old. He was born into the holding camps and lives with his cousin Hinata and her family. He has long dark brown hair, eyes like Hinata's, and pale skin.
TenTen Kunai: 17 years old. She was born into the holding camps, but was sent to live in society because she was a perfect baby. She lives with her adopted family. She had long brown hair, chocolate brown eyes, and creamy, slight natural tanned, skin.
Temari Subaku: 18 years old. Born into society and a perfect child. She lives with her biological family, except for her youngest brother Gaara, who was sent to live in the holding camps for being imperfect. She has sandy blonde hair, teal eyes, and olive skin.
Shikamaru Naara: 16 years old. Lived in the holding camps all his life with adopted family.(see Sakura) He has black eyes, blackish brown hair, and normal skin tone.
Kakashi Hatake: 30 years old. Lived in society until he was 12 and was sent to the holding camps. He has silver hair, one black eye, one red, and normal skin tone.
Minor:
Tsunade: 50 years old. Leader of the holding camp Sakura lives in. Lived all her life in the camp. Blond hair, honey eyes, creamy skin, and abnormally large breasts.
Shizune: 29 years old. Tsunade's assistant. Lived all her life in the camps. Purple-ish black hair, black eyes, and creamy skin.
Orochimaru: 51 years old. Leader of a resistance group that wants to take over the perfect society. Long black hair, yellow eyes, white grayish skin.
Anko: 30 years old. (I don't have much on her yet, or if I'll even use her.)
Ino Yamanaka: 16 years old. Lives in the perfect society. Long blond hair, sapphire eyes, tan skin.
Choji Akimichi: 16 years old. Lived his life in the camp. Brown hair, black eyes, fat, normal skin tone. (See Sakura for family info)
Jiraiya: 51 years old. An old friend of Tsunade and Orochimaru, who, somehow managed to escape the holding camp. Long white hair, black eyes, pinkish skin.
Iruka (Don't remember last name!): 28 years old. Runs the orphanage Naruto lives at.
Gaara Subaku: 14 years old. Born into society, and sent to holding camps after birth. Bright red hair, no eyebrows, dark teal eyes, and pale skin.
Pairings: Main, SasuSaku, secondary NaruHina, NejiTen, ShikaTema, minor AnkoKakaShizu(Maybe)
Some minor characters might be changed to secondary, like Tsunade, Jiraiye, Orochimaru, and Ino. Or whoever.
Ok so, please review. Do you think I should continue this?
