This is the first chapter of the fanfiction The new story, but it is rewritten. I'm certain my English is better than before. Constructive critism is welcome, but no hateful remarks about my writing style or other things. Sorry but i deleted the other chapters and formed them all into this one chapter, i hope you are not angry with me.

Have fun, and don't get a stroke when finding something that is written the wrong way ...


Japanese National Maritime Institute of Technology

Two Girls that most boys would not class as beautiful, but rather as cute were walking down the paved ground of the institute they were attending, while talking to each other and getting some stares.

The girl on the left side had short blond hair, very uncommon in Japan. Her name was Nagori. The girl on the right had long black hair and blue eyes, her name was Akagi. Nobody knew her really, which was good for her, as she was the mental model of a FOG-class Aircraft Carrier, which were very uncommon, near to zero. But that information was only for those of the FOG and the humans knew nothing.

Then Nagori began to speak again, this time about the documents that were hanging out, written on them the names for the future top-officer posts, which were going to see a state secret or something like that.

As they came across the list the, people standing in front of it parted in two halfes allowing them to see the names. At first she saw the name of Chihaya Gunzou, then hers, the one of Nagori and some other names of persons she just saw briefly.

Nagori glowed full of pride as did some others in the crowd.


Driving towards Government Warehouse

"What you will see later cannot be told to anyone", the officer began." As the future top-officers of our homeland however you have the right to know this secret", he continued. " It must not be told that anyone who tells this secret will be punished by a military tribunal."

"What is this secret then?" , asked one of the other girls that were selected too.

"It cannot be told in such insecure environment", the officer told them. "We will not tell you, but rather show you". He ended his sentence and we drove silently towards our goal. When we were told that our goal had been reached, nobody had thought they would see a warehouse, yes it was guarded but it was a warehouse.

As the giant doors opened and the lights turned on, you could see it. It was unbelievable for Akagi, to find a submarine-class FOG ship in an human warehouse. It was the I-401, the one ship missing after the event named "the Great War", by the humans.


I'm very sorry to leave you a cliffhanger, but this is where the chapter ends.

*laughing evilly at the expense of the readers*

Animefan091 signing off :D