Hey everyone! Yes, I'm finally back.A very special thank you to all my reviewers who reviewed "Some Poems I Wrote: Chapter 1",and a big thank you to jedigirl2001, who gave me a complete rundown of my poems! I used to give reviews and read how reviewers were always appreciated, but having never had reviewers until now, I never realized how true that was! So, everyone who reviewed, thank you all very much again! These are the first two poems, revisioned. Hope you enjoy! R&R please!
Ode to Sol Sanctum
The sanctum here is the protector
and keeper of the stars.
It also honors Sol and Luna,
Jupiter, Mercury, Venus, and Mars.
The Sol Adept is the gateway,
between Weyerd's death and life.
The sanctum's not the only one
that may bring victory or strife.
With pure intentions and a clear heart,
you may be alive when you depart.
Ode to the Elemental Star Room
If you disturb within this ancient pow'r,
are you ready for the test?
No one can help you in this fateful hour,
that would send you to your rest.
The power that was sealed away
the ancients had both loved and feared.
They never knew there'd come the day
they'd rue the power they revered.
They took the purest essense
from each lighthouse, standing tall.
But felt their power lessen
when they sealed it in a wall.
The Tears of Blood and Blood of Tears,
surrounded the sealers where they stood.
It formed the key to seal their fears,
and hoped that it would be for good.
But with the rising of the dawn,
the Moon wept for his love, the Sun.
Once I fix the other poems, I'll post them up, too. At the moment, I'm working on the Mercury Lighthouse one.(They aresounding SO much better now... :D) Well, later for now!
