Ben 10 Ultimate Alien:
Selena's Revenge the revised edition

This is a rewrite of the original story you can find on my profile. After looking over the original, I decided it looked a little boring, so I decided to do a rewrite. Enjoy chapter one.

Disclaimer: I do not own Ben 10, but the OC is mine.

Chapter One

It was another fine day in the town of Bellwood. Ben, Gwen, and Kevin were at Mr. Smoothies celebrating another victory against the Forever Knights. Gwen being the brains of the team, and the more mature one was reading a book. Kevin being the lovesick dimwit, was watching his girlfriend read while looking completely smitten with her. " Hey Romeo. Can you look away from Juliet for a minute before I lose my appetite?" Ben teased. Kevin glared at him, " How about you put a sock in it Tennyson, before I dump what's left of that smoothie of yours down the back of your jacket!"

Ben decided to tease the already fuming osmosian one more time. " Geez Kev, I didn't realized it was your time of the month already." That really set Kevin off. " That's it Tennyson! I'm gonna kill you!" He roared as he absorbed the metal from the table and began to chase Ben around in circles. Panicking, Ben went for the Ultimatrix, hoping to get Humungosaur or Fourarms. Instead, he got Rath. " Let me tell you something Kevin Ethan Levin! Rath is gonna rip ya to pieces!" Kevin grinned sheepishly as Rath grabbed him by the collar of his shirt.

Hearing the commotion, Gwen looked up from her book to see Ben as Rath strangling Kevin. Groaning, she walked over to the two and used her manna to tear the crazed appoplexian off of her boyfriend before he could do some serious damage. " Alright, who started it this time?" Gwen asked, irritated with her cousin and boyfriend. " Ben started it Gwen. I'm completely innocent here." Kevin said as he walked over to Gwen. She glared at Ben who was now back in his human form. " I may have gone overboard in teasing Kevin again." Ben said sheepishly.

Gwen facepalmed herself. while she loved hanging out with her cousin and boyfriend, the two meatheads couldn't even play nice with each other without one of them trying to kill the other one. " I swear you two act like a pair of three year-olds on the playground. You can't even get along for one afternoon without giving me a headache. I'm gonna to head to karate practice. In the meantime, you two will hang out with each other and play nice. If you don't do it Ben, I'll tell Julie that you flirted with one of the cheerleaders in the cafeteria. Kevin, if you even try to sneak your way out of this, I'll show your mom all the speeding tickets you keep in your glove compartment."

Ben's POV
Gwen could not be serious. She wouldn't dare blackmail me. Because if she even tried, I would threaten to turn into nanomech and pick the lock on her diary and show it to Kevin. Still, she had a point. Kevin and I are supposed to be best friends, and best friends don't try to kill each other. Plus if Julie found out that I flirted with one of the cheerleaders at lunch, I would be in the doghouse for a year. turning to Kevin I saw him rooting around in his car looking for the speeding tickets he usually kept in his glove compartment. " Hey doofus I think Gwen took all of your speeding tickets with her."

End POV

Both boys were horrified. If they didn't get along, Gwen would go through with the threat she made. Ben would be in the dog house with Julie, and Kevin would be in hot water with his mother. " Hey Tennyson, how about we go back to my place and see who can beat who in video games. What do ya say?" Kevin said as he got his car started. " You're on Kev. Loser has to buy the winner 10 smoothies." Ben said knowing that he was gonna win for sure. Kevin groaned, for he personally knew what Ben was like hopped up on smoothies. it wasn't pretty. That was for sure.

And that is chapter one in my rewrite. Leave a review and I will get chapter two going.

-Jedi Master 325