A New Hero is Born, AGAIN

I was taking a stroll in Daisy's Garden. Peaceful, quiet and beautiful. A butterfly landed on my nose. I chuckled and put my finger under it. Then I gently swung it into the air.

BEEP! There was the intercom thing.

"A Cog invasion has begun!" Said the announcer, "the Big Wigs has taken over ToonTown!"

"Uh oh." I said, "better go!" I took out my trusty teleporting hole and jumped into it.

ToonTown Central Playground.

I jumped out of the hole. There were a bunch of sad toons. I swung my arm.

"Toons of the World," I started. I threw a fist into the air. "Unite!" The blue pixie dust went everywhere in the playground. I was surprised. The Toons kept thanking me.

"You're welcome, you're welcome." I returned the thanks. I headed into the Punchline Place. I rescued the Toons who were stupid enough to fight those Cogs. I mean really, why would fight those Cogs when you know you're to weak? I decided to give them another chance. I emptied out Loopy Lane and Silly Street.

"Looks like my job is done." I told myself.

Meanwhile at Lawbot HQ.

The CJ was looking into a crystal ball. He was furious.

"I hate him, I hate him, I HATE HIM!" He yelled. He was turning red.

"Calm down sir, we could come up with another plan to stop him." The CFO said. There was a moment of silence.

"Why don't we kidnap one of his loved ones?" The VP finally offered. The CJ smiled.

"Brilliant plan. Since you're the first and the one who came up with this plan, why don't you go do it?" Asked the CJ.

"Sigh, fine, I will." The VP asked. He sadly used his giant propellers and flew to Sellbot HQ.

"Come face your doom, Tas!" Said the CJ evilly. "Muahahaha- cough cough. Excuse me, I need some oil."

Here's the first remade chapter of Toons vs. Cogs. If you would like to, try comparing it with the original one and see the enhancements/detractions of the story.