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Yep.. this is my first fanfic ever for Harry Potter, and also FanFiction.net I welcome flame's, though I prefer constructive criticism..
But hell, whatever floats your boat.
Like everybody.. I do not own anything in here; a few characters are made up however. Everything else belongs to J.K Rowling. You don't see my name
printed on the sides of the books do you?
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The clear blue sky above signified the perfection of the day. The steam billowed from the train from platform 9 and three quarters. The noise of the student body filled the air, and even through the bits of confusion a smile still came on the young red heads face. Perhaps it was the fact that she now was heading for her true home, maybe it was the fact that she had spotted her three best friends heading towards her, or possibly, it was the fact that after years of hard study she was head girl. Her last year in Hogwarts, she was ready to rock her life the way it should be.
Lily had everything going for her, long flowing hair of crimson that covered her like a silk cloak, while her figure was slightly petite then others, her curves were in the right place. She was one of those girls that when they put something on, it always looked good. Her eyes were emerald green, striking and piercing, yet they also held that shy quality. She was a bookworm, yet this year she swore it would be different, she had made it to the top, and now she was ready to have some fun.
"Hey Lils, you ready for a whole new year of trouble?" The teasing voice came from her friend Tessa, a tall girl with dark black hair and killer blue eyes. Tessa was one of those friends who could never take anything seriously, and was always cracking a joke at something. "We're the top on hierarchy Lils, think of the possibilities!"
A snort of mirth came from Courtney, Lily's other best friend, and a spray of water came with it. A shriek of laughter was followed as the blonde haired girl wiped away the rest from her chin, her grey eyes dancing as she arched a brow at Lily, who had immediately leaped aside from the attack.
Tessa gave a small giggle, her brow imitating Courtney's. "Impressive Court, I think you almost sprayed the Marauders." Tessa gave a nod of her head to the boys who stood not far away. They seemed to define all girls' dreams of 'tall, dark, and handsome.'
"Right, they would probably take it as a signal that you wanted to hop in bed with them Courtney. Everything goes to their head." Lily stated it through another giggle, yet a hint of contempt was in her voice. No, the Marauders she could do without. Peter, Remus, Sirius, and worst of all James were the male whores of the school, or so the rumours were told. It was weird though, that she and her group of friends have never even talked to them even though they were in the same house, and were indeed one of the more 'popular' girls of the school.
"Speaking on the subject of boys and sex." Another snort came from Courtney, yet this time spared from a shower, Tessa smirked and continued. "Who exactly is the head boy Lily? Sharing a dorm with him.. who knows what trouble you'll get up to."
A playful shove of protest was given from the red head yet it was followed with an impish smile a she gave a shrug, hands resting on her hips. "I'm not sure, they never said in my letter.. but we also have to share a compartment on the train so I guess I'll find out then."
"For your sake Lily, I hope he's not Severus." Courtney said, and soon the three girls had their luggage on the train, and climbed on.
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"Hey Sirius, it's your dream girl." Remus gave an incline to his head in Courtney's direction, just as the water sprayed from her mouth.
Sirius, of course gave a fake mock swoon and gave a grin. "Charming isn't she?"
James ran a hand through his shaggy black hair, a smirk on his face as he leaned against the wall, watching the girls. "Why the sudden interest in Courtney, anyway?" Yet as he said this his eyes fell on Lily Evans, a shy girl who was a major bookworm. Yet a flicker of disbelief crossed his eyes, as this was the Lily Evans he had not gone to school with before. She was wearing tight jeans, which were worn out and no doubt comfortable, and a black tank top. Lily had always been pretty in the 'librarian' kind of way, with her knee high socks and skirt with a blank white blouse, yet now she had fully grown to her size, and indeed filled out in places. Damn, how could a girl look that good without wearing make up?
"Oh no Potter, you're checking out Lily Evans!" Remus came up by James, crashing against the wall rather ungracefully yet his eyebrows gave a wiggle.
"Who can blame him? Look at her!" Sirius interrupted as James was about to protest, but he fell silent, a shrug given.
"Yeah she looks different, but no doubt she's still mouse" James used the nickname everyone called Lily with an air of unimportance. She fit it in every description, a goody that constantly kept her nose in a book.
A warning whistle form the train told them that their conversation would have to be saved for later, and together they slowly made their way to the train, winking every now and then at the girls who had no problem sticking their chest out for a bit of attention.
"James, head boy. I can't believe your leaving us for the head girl." Sirius gave a cocky grin as he settled down in his compartment; a mock look of hurt came on his face.
"I will leave you for a girl any day, boys. Remember that." He laughed as he gave a casual wave, heading down to the head boy and girl compartment.
"Remind us why we still keep him around?" Remus cracked shaking his head as a smile crossed his face, some girls from HufflePuff and Ravenclaw sliding in giggling shyly.
--- Lily fidgeted in her seat while looking out the window, arms crossed over her chest as her head tilted, any minute now her curiosity would finally be at ease, and she'd find out who the head boy was. The compartment door slid open and inside her mind gave a squeal of delight.
"Mouse?!" The smooth voice of James came to her, unmistakable and her head instantly jerked to him, eyes widening as her jaw hung open before snapping shut, a glare of contempt given to him.
"Bloody hell!" Her voice hissed to him, and even though his eyes narrowed he had to give a smile at the choice of her words. Maybe this year would be fun, if not interesting.
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Read and review.. I'll love you forever? [lures you to the reviews with a cookie]
Yep.. this is my first fanfic ever for Harry Potter, and also FanFiction.net I welcome flame's, though I prefer constructive criticism..
But hell, whatever floats your boat.
Like everybody.. I do not own anything in here; a few characters are made up however. Everything else belongs to J.K Rowling. You don't see my name
printed on the sides of the books do you?
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------
The clear blue sky above signified the perfection of the day. The steam billowed from the train from platform 9 and three quarters. The noise of the student body filled the air, and even through the bits of confusion a smile still came on the young red heads face. Perhaps it was the fact that she now was heading for her true home, maybe it was the fact that she had spotted her three best friends heading towards her, or possibly, it was the fact that after years of hard study she was head girl. Her last year in Hogwarts, she was ready to rock her life the way it should be.
Lily had everything going for her, long flowing hair of crimson that covered her like a silk cloak, while her figure was slightly petite then others, her curves were in the right place. She was one of those girls that when they put something on, it always looked good. Her eyes were emerald green, striking and piercing, yet they also held that shy quality. She was a bookworm, yet this year she swore it would be different, she had made it to the top, and now she was ready to have some fun.
"Hey Lils, you ready for a whole new year of trouble?" The teasing voice came from her friend Tessa, a tall girl with dark black hair and killer blue eyes. Tessa was one of those friends who could never take anything seriously, and was always cracking a joke at something. "We're the top on hierarchy Lils, think of the possibilities!"
A snort of mirth came from Courtney, Lily's other best friend, and a spray of water came with it. A shriek of laughter was followed as the blonde haired girl wiped away the rest from her chin, her grey eyes dancing as she arched a brow at Lily, who had immediately leaped aside from the attack.
Tessa gave a small giggle, her brow imitating Courtney's. "Impressive Court, I think you almost sprayed the Marauders." Tessa gave a nod of her head to the boys who stood not far away. They seemed to define all girls' dreams of 'tall, dark, and handsome.'
"Right, they would probably take it as a signal that you wanted to hop in bed with them Courtney. Everything goes to their head." Lily stated it through another giggle, yet a hint of contempt was in her voice. No, the Marauders she could do without. Peter, Remus, Sirius, and worst of all James were the male whores of the school, or so the rumours were told. It was weird though, that she and her group of friends have never even talked to them even though they were in the same house, and were indeed one of the more 'popular' girls of the school.
"Speaking on the subject of boys and sex." Another snort came from Courtney, yet this time spared from a shower, Tessa smirked and continued. "Who exactly is the head boy Lily? Sharing a dorm with him.. who knows what trouble you'll get up to."
A playful shove of protest was given from the red head yet it was followed with an impish smile a she gave a shrug, hands resting on her hips. "I'm not sure, they never said in my letter.. but we also have to share a compartment on the train so I guess I'll find out then."
"For your sake Lily, I hope he's not Severus." Courtney said, and soon the three girls had their luggage on the train, and climbed on.
---
"Hey Sirius, it's your dream girl." Remus gave an incline to his head in Courtney's direction, just as the water sprayed from her mouth.
Sirius, of course gave a fake mock swoon and gave a grin. "Charming isn't she?"
James ran a hand through his shaggy black hair, a smirk on his face as he leaned against the wall, watching the girls. "Why the sudden interest in Courtney, anyway?" Yet as he said this his eyes fell on Lily Evans, a shy girl who was a major bookworm. Yet a flicker of disbelief crossed his eyes, as this was the Lily Evans he had not gone to school with before. She was wearing tight jeans, which were worn out and no doubt comfortable, and a black tank top. Lily had always been pretty in the 'librarian' kind of way, with her knee high socks and skirt with a blank white blouse, yet now she had fully grown to her size, and indeed filled out in places. Damn, how could a girl look that good without wearing make up?
"Oh no Potter, you're checking out Lily Evans!" Remus came up by James, crashing against the wall rather ungracefully yet his eyebrows gave a wiggle.
"Who can blame him? Look at her!" Sirius interrupted as James was about to protest, but he fell silent, a shrug given.
"Yeah she looks different, but no doubt she's still mouse" James used the nickname everyone called Lily with an air of unimportance. She fit it in every description, a goody that constantly kept her nose in a book.
A warning whistle form the train told them that their conversation would have to be saved for later, and together they slowly made their way to the train, winking every now and then at the girls who had no problem sticking their chest out for a bit of attention.
"James, head boy. I can't believe your leaving us for the head girl." Sirius gave a cocky grin as he settled down in his compartment; a mock look of hurt came on his face.
"I will leave you for a girl any day, boys. Remember that." He laughed as he gave a casual wave, heading down to the head boy and girl compartment.
"Remind us why we still keep him around?" Remus cracked shaking his head as a smile crossed his face, some girls from HufflePuff and Ravenclaw sliding in giggling shyly.
--- Lily fidgeted in her seat while looking out the window, arms crossed over her chest as her head tilted, any minute now her curiosity would finally be at ease, and she'd find out who the head boy was. The compartment door slid open and inside her mind gave a squeal of delight.
"Mouse?!" The smooth voice of James came to her, unmistakable and her head instantly jerked to him, eyes widening as her jaw hung open before snapping shut, a glare of contempt given to him.
"Bloody hell!" Her voice hissed to him, and even though his eyes narrowed he had to give a smile at the choice of her words. Maybe this year would be fun, if not interesting.
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