this is my first story so please no criticism but i would love your opinion.

thanks.

-xdamnitxretardx

.com


main characters ;

justin bieber - 16 & famous

rebecca smith - lifelong friend of justin, secretly in love with her bestfriend, justin. he doesn't know YET.

pattie bieber - justin's mom, rebecca's favorite aunt in the world.

helen smith tired of her daughter complaing about having such a boring life.

jensen turner ; rebecca's other bestfriend. knows justin's famous !

setting ;

justin's concerts & hotels in those cities.

summary ;

justin is on tour, & his bestfriend who is totally secretly in love with him is going with him. in this story, he's not that famous yet so he stays in the cities of the tour more than 1 day. they fall in love and they're mothers become the greatest of friends. they're really close, bestfriends & now they're together.

please give me your opinions. i don't know if i should continue this story.


please review and give me your opinions.

i don't know if i should continue this story.