Saw some grammatic things, Sorry my english isn't so good, but I'm trying to do my best on it.
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Olivia 40
"Mommy, mommy, wake up, up" Jolena jumped on her mother's bed. "It's my birday. up up" Olivia yawned and looked at the clock beside her bed it was 5 in the morning.
"Sweetheart its too urly for jumping on mommy's bed" She looked at the girl and saw the sadness in her eyes. "but you can lay with me in mommy's bed, would you like that?" Jolena nodded and crawled to Olivia.
"Presents mommy?" she looked at Olivia.
"Yes honey you get your present when we have breakfast, how sounds that" Jolena yawned and nodded. After 5 minutes her breathing became quieter and Olivia knew that she was asleep now.
3 years ago on this hour she was in the delivery room. It took 28 hours before she was wheeled to the operating room for a caesarean, because the umbilical cord was wrapped around Jolene's neck the needed to do an emergency caesarean or she had died. Luckly on 5.46 she heard her baby cry and hold her in her arms. Now
3 years later she was a beautiful young child who had been Always happy. Olivia on the other side wasn't happy everyday. She had left Manhattan for a while when she was 8 weeks pregnant. Didn't told anyone that she had slept with her partner. She thought about that night very often. Who could she be so stupid to think that he loved. Nobody loved her, now somebody does. Jolena is the only one who loved and still loves her in a way nobody can. She was so blessed with this little girl.
"Mommy now up" Jolena asked her mother again. Olivia looked at the clock and saw it was 7 am. It was still a bit early, but it was better than being up at 5 am.
"Okay, lets make a breakfast birthday girl" Jolena giggledand jumped out of bed. Olivia took her hand and walked to the kitchen. "Tell me, what do you want for breakfast... To day is your day so you can choose"
"I want.. uumm , uum, pamcae mommy. Whit stauwberry mommy." she said excited. "Okay pancakes with strawberry it is" Oliva made breakfast for the both of them and after they finished she cleaned the table and the kitchen.
"Now present mommy" she asked hopefully. Olivia laughed
"Tell me what did you ask for again" she knew what her daughter had asked. But to hear it again made her happy.
"Um, a doll mommy, the one with my name, and an poppy, and shoes the pitty one. And I did not ask you, but I want to have daddy" Olivia was surprised. How was she gonne explain to her 3 year old daughter that it was impossible for her to call Jolena's real dad. The last time she saw him was longer than 3 years ago. After the shooting with Jenna he had put his papers in.
"Please mommy, can I have daddy" she asked again and put a puppy face.
"Honey I already have a buyied a present for you. I can buy an other one, but than you need to wait till we get to the mall and you can choose a present you want" she said in the hope that I will distract her.
"No mommy, I want present" she held her hands open, and took the present from Oliva. Olivia looked at her daughter while she unwrapped the present. "Look mommy It is baby me" Jolena looked at the doll."This is one with my name. Look mommy, she has the same eyes, one bown and one bue, Thank you" Jolena kissed Olivia.
After that and some more presents Jolena walked to her bedroom. "We need to have a shower, after that, you can put on your new dress and shoes honey" Olivia said. She stood by the doorway.
"Kay mommy, fist I put baby in bed, so she sleeps" she laid her new doll in the bed "You sleep baby Lena, I do shower" she kissed the doll on her head like Olivia did when she need to sleep.
After an hour they were finished and ready to go. She carried Jolena to the car and put her in the backseat. "Where are we go to" Jolena asked.
"First we go to momma's work, were uncle Fin and auntie Manda will be, and after that you will see what we gonne do sweetheart." Olivia started the car and drove to the 1-6th
"Yeah unle Fin and auntie Manda" Olivia was happy that afterall Jolena had a family. " and we see grandpa to?" she asked.
"Honey, grandpapa don't work with momma anymore" Jolena looked at Olivia. Jolena had tears in her eyes."But maybe we can meet him after dinner"
"Kay" Jolena said and looked out of the window. They drove right through the city. Jolena loved it, the big billboards, the colors, the lights when it was dark outside. They got out of the car and Olivia carried Jolena into the bullpen. When Jolena saw Fin she struggled out of Olivia's arms.
"unle Fin" Jolena shout. Fin turned around and saw that Jolena was running to him.
"Hey, princes." he said and kissed her on her cheek. " Look how beautiful you look. Is that your new dress?" he knew it was, Olivia had shown the dress. Jolena nodded "Turn around princes and let me show you dress" Fin smiled. Jolena laughed and turned around a few times.
"Do like it unle Fin" She asked and smiled when he nodded to her. She turned to Olivia "Can I play in a room" she asked.
"Yes honey, I willget you when we go okay?" she asked. Jolena nodded and run to the playroom.
Now they are alone so they could talk about the case. "What did you found out about that 3 year old girl in the hospital Fin" Olivia asked. The night before they caught a case. There was a 3 year old girl in the E.R with bruises all over her body. No parents, only thing they knew was that the girl named Olivia was 3 years old.
"We found the mother of the child, She is on her way to the hospital. Said that Olivia did sleep by her father for the night. She had to work. Didn't came home till this morning"
"So your telling me she had no idea that her kid was in the hospital. This is strange Fin".
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