I am a slowing heart beat.

I wonder how long I have left.

I hear him whispering my name.

I see his watery eyes.

I want him to be alright.

I am a slowing heartbeat.

I pretend that we still have time left.

I believe I will see him soon.

I feel the cold start to engulf me.

I touch his warm hand.

I cry his name.

I am a slowing heartbeat.

I understand his love.

I say my love for him.

I dream of his charming smile.

I hope God will keep us together.

I am no longer a slowing heartbeat.

A/N: Today I got this back from my Creative Writing teacher,. So I thought "Hey post it!" Tada it here. But I'm very depressed some chick said I suck really badly and put me on her C2. But she didn't have the guts to say it to me. Grrr…

Very tempted to give up fan fiction writing. Maybe