Hello strangers of the internet! Welcome to this story. Well hope you'll like it and now time for the story!

Disclaimer: I don't own warriors, the fabulous Erin Hunter group does. I only own the story, clans, and characters.

PS: I have really bad Writers block on ThunderClan's Newest Warrior, I also might rewrite it. Anyway time to shut my mouth.


Chapter 1: Different

Speckledkit's POV

Speckledkit stared at her reflection in a puddle. She was a pure white she-cat with a long, feathery tail. She had brilliant-blue eyes that glittered from the sun's harsh rays. Her tail-tip was black and so was her ears. Under her eyes where a few black freckle-like specks and she had a light pink nose.

One would call her beautiful, inside and out. The young she-kit yawned then got and idea, maybe the elders will tell me a story! Speckledkit then got to her paws and walked to the elder's den. After a few heart-beats she reached it.

"Hello, Speckledkit," purred Harefur, a light brown elder with blue eyes.

"Do you want to hear a story?" asked Leapingtoad, Speckledkit nodded eagerly and sat down.

"Ok, have you heard the story of how PerfectClan, our Clan, was made," Harefur asked.

The white she-kit shook her head and stared at the two elders hopefully. After awhile they nodded.

"Hmmm... Let me think, where should we start," the tom thought for a moment. "It all started with a young kitty-pet named Princess(not Firestar's sister)."

"She heard of 4 Clans by a huge lake, that gave her an idea," Leapingtoad meowed.

"The idea was to make a Clan," added Harefur.

"So she ran away from her twolegs to find cats that wanted to join," Leapingtoad took a gulp of air then continued, "most cats didn't want to join and it seemed as though PerfectClan wouldn't last long until a group of rogues came."

Speckledkit stared at them as if asking 'did they join?'.

"They joined," purred Harefur, then she thought for a moment as if looking back at an old memory.

"After awhile the Clan grew," Leapingtoad murmured.

"But!" Harefur interrupted with new tone in her voice, "they got divided, one was against the code while the rest was with it." Speckledkit looked at the two elders in interest.

Then Leapingtoad said, "the Warrior Code for us is, 1; if a cat is not perfect you get to taunt them and they just do all the work, for imperfect cats would make the Clan weak. 2; Leader's word is law. 3; perfect kits and elders eat first. 4; you must never make friends with imperfect cats or cat's from EchoClan." Then she heard her mother calling her.

"We'll continue this story later," said Harefur.

Speckledkit nodded than ran to her mother, Silverlight. The queen is a silver tabby with emerald-green eyes.

"Your going to be 6 moons in a half moon, your going to need to speak so please say something." Her mother's plea took her by surprise.

She opened her mouth then stopped. Speckledkit didn't how to speak, she never did. She felt as though talking was useless. But if she was going to become an apprentice she'd need to speak eventually. Then she decided.

"Is this speaking?" She then realized it was but there was something strange about her voice.

It seemed to be croaking and cracking. She then realized that her mother flinched.

"S-Speckledkit, s-s-speak again," stuttered Silverlight.

"Is something wrong with m-my voice," croaked Speckledkit.

Silverlight stared at her in horror which made her shiver. Something is wrong with my voice! Silverlight than grabbed her by her loose neck fur and carried her to the medicine den.

"Hey," she said which made her mother wince.

Her mother than set her down and called the medicine cat, "Robinheart! Something's wrong with Speckledkit's voice!"

A red tom came out a few heart-beats later with herbs.

"What's wrong with her voice," asked Robinheart.

"Speckledkit say something," ordered Silverlight.

The small she-kit nodded than said, "What's wrong with me?"

Robinheart blinked in surprise than said, "I think it's because she has never really talked but I'm still not sure, bring her to me."

"I can walk!" said Speckledkit with a strange hiss.

Silverlight acted like she didn't hear anything and brought her to Robinheart.

Speckledkit felt him feel her throat then he asked, "does your throat hurt when you talk?"

"No."

"I just don't know what's wrong with her," Robinheart admitted.

Then the red medicine cat pushed some herbs to her, "eat these." Speckledkit winced as she smelled the herbs.

"Eat," he repeated.

She ate the bitter tasting herbs and cringed at the horrible after-taste. Robinheart then put a leaf with honey in front of her. She quickly shrank the liquid.

"Now don't talk until tomorrow and eat these poppy seeds, you must be shocked and tired."

She yawned which proven his point and then she ate the seeds.

~~The Next Day~~

"And that's how EchoClan was made," finished Leapingtoad.

And Harefur added, "now it's time for you to go to the medicine den."

Speckledkit looked at the sky, it was sun-high. She walked to the den and saw Robinheart glance at her.

"Speak," he ordered.

"Umm-" Speckledkit gasped as she realized her voice was still cracking and croaking.

"I'm sorry, I can't waste herbs on an imperfect cat," he said coldly.

"What?!" I'm imperfect? No this can't be true!

"Please tell me this isn't true!" She begged, eyes wide.

The tom grabbed her roughly and through her out of his den then yowled, "imperfect cat!" That caught every cat's attention.

"I'm not Imperfect!" Speckledkit wailed desperately.

"Her voice!" Some cats said while others said, "get rid of it!"

She looked at her mother hopefully, but that hope was crushed as her mother said, "that runt isn't my kit!"

Then a white flash got her eye. It was her brother, Whitekit. He stared at her in sympathy then she glanced at her father. His face was full of disgust. Then she started whimpering.

"Stop whining, kit!"

Her tail drooped then she went into the nursery about to climb in her nest when something grabbed her by the tail.

"Your not sleeping in my nest, runt."

She looked up and saw Silverlight. She then walked into a corner and curled into a tiny, miserable ball.

Then she felt a tail go on her shoulder, "hello little one," the stranger said.

"Who are you?" asked Speckledkit.

"I am Twistedfoot," she answered.

"So your imperfect too?"

The she-cat chuckled then said, "I wouldn't say 'imperfect', I'd say unique."

"Let all cats old enough to walk gather beneath the Moss-Rock for a Clan meeting!" yowled Branchstar.

Speckledkit and Twistedfoot sat down in the clearing.

"Speckledkit, step forward!" She cocked her had in confusion, it can't be my apprentice ceremony, maybe they're exiling me.

"Just step forward," said an impatient Branchstar.

She nodded and stepped toward the brown leader. "We are gathered here today to rename this imperfect piece of dirt!" Speckledkit gasped in shock and heard someone shush her.

"From this day forward until you become an apprentice, you will be known as Brokenkit, for your broken voice." Brokenkit? No t-this is just a dream, it has to be! She thought.

"Brokenkit! Brokenkit!"

No, no, no, I should have never spoken at all! She felt as though her hole world was crumpling beneath her into a deep black abyss.


Poor Brokenkit, anyway if you liked it please review, if you hate it please review. FYI I will answer to reviews.

List of charactors:

PerfectClan:

Leader: Branchstar-brown tom with icy-blue eyes

Deputy: Yellowthorn-yellow she-cat with green eyes and has unusual large claws

Medicine cat: Robinheart-red tom with blue eyes and has a white under-belly

Warriors(toms and she-cats without kits)

Stormleaf-smoky she-cat with blue eyes and bridge of nose is white

Ambertail-white tom with orange patches with amber eyes

Foxpelt-ginger tom with fox like pelt with amber eyes

Splashnose-gray she-cat with blue eyes

Minnowstripe-white tom with black stripe running down his back also has green eyes

Jaylight-blue-gray she-cat with green eyes

Blossompetal-tortoiseshell she-cat with a white underbelly with green eyes

Birchfur-white tom with hazel eyes, father to Whitekit and Brokenkit, mate to Silverlight

Tinyflower-black she-cat with blue eyes

Leafwind- brown tom with leaf-green eyes, mate to Dawnspots

Runningdew- white tom with amber eyes

Grasstail- black and white tom with amber eyes

Queens(queens nursing or expecting kits)

Silverlight-silver she-cat with green eyes; kits: Whitekit-white tom with amber eyes, Brokenkit-white she-kit with blue eyes with black ears, tail-tip, specks and has a broken voice. Mate: Birchfur

Dawnspots-calico she-cat with amber eyes, expecting Leafwind's kits

Imperfect cats/kits(she-cats and toms that has something wrong with them)

Twistedfoot-cream she-cat with a twisted foot, has blue eyes

Brokenkit-white she-cat with black ears, tail-tip, and has black freckle-like flecks under her brilliant-blue eyes, has a broken voice

Elders(former warriors and queens now retired)

Harefur-light brown she-cat with blue eyes

Leapingtoad-cream tom with blue eyes

That's all the cats for PerfectClan I would do EchoClan but I don't have time. Please review!

Edit: Done editing