AN/ This would be my first published story. I know it's pretty awful but do bare in mind that you don't have to read it. if you do i would love constructive criticism and tips in reviews, but please no plain insults i wish to improve not feel bad about myself.
Hope you like it. will try to update regularly. but might not happen. Let me know if there is something you wish me to add or that i wrote wrong.
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'thoughts'
Writing
Unforgettable Eyes
Prologue
When Riki was thrown out of the Orphanage he realized very quickly he had a low chance of survival.
Very quickly after that he decided to make sure his chance of survival rose to 'high chance of survival.
It just so happened at the moment he decided that he was sat in the cold with a stab would in his chest cursing the fact that he did not yet know how to survive. His blood was running through his fingers and his heart was racing with adrenalin, yet Riki knew it was pointless. It was just instinct to try to survive. He could feel himself getting weaker as spots came appeared in his vision.
Not that he could see much anyway hidden in the alleyway all he could see was the brick of the opposite wall to which he was leaning on. 'Oh well' thought Riki. 'No one will care about a mongrel on the street anyway' and Riki welcomed the darkness, wondering why it appeared to have a green tinge to it.
Harry Potter was having a bad day. Having been woken by Seamus and Ron having and argument, ventured towards the great hall, tripped over peeves' foot straight through nearly headless nick he sat down to recover on a step to discover it was the vanishing step. Only to be discovered by Malfoy and laughed at.
Yes. Exceptionally bad day. And he hadn't even made it to breakfast.
Wanting nothing more than to change into something small and fluffy to curl into a ball and go to sleep harry eventually make it to breakfast and managed to eat some toast and jam.
Harry discovered after his duel with Voldemort that he was a natural animagus. He needed no potion to change into an animal and was not limited to one animal. This was particularly handy to escape from Dudley as this magic was not recognised by the ministry. His new found healing ability was useful for the times where he did not escape Dudley. Yes harry was happy for his talents. But confused as to how suddenly he acquired them.
Harry had planned to question Hermione when he came back to Hogwarts but had been informed by Ron at head quarters to the order of the phoenix that Hermione had left for the Merlin Academy of Arts in America. Harry was happy for her but still mourned her loss at Hogwarts. Surprisingly he managed to improve his grades without Hermione. 'Maybe that was another newfound talent' harry absentmindedly thought to himself.
"Urgh" harry groaned to himself when Seamus and Ron made it to the table. "How can you still be arguing? What is this about?" he snapped at them. 'Can't anybody eat their meal in damned peace? Great I'm snapping. Just call me Moody.'
Seamus and Ron exchanged a quick look and then fixed their gaze on harry.
"We found something."
Harry looked at his breakfast and had the sudden urge to bang his head onto it. He resisted the urge and looked up at Ron expectantly.
"We were following Malfoy…" Seamus started.
"Not here!" Ron and Harry quickly spoke to Seamus. Harry grabbed his remaining toast and strode out of the hall, hearing Seamus and Ron behind him. They followed harry to an empty alcove where harry seated himself and once again looked expectantly for answers.
"We saw him looking all sneaky like usual and decided to follow him and he went into the room of requirement." Ron started.
"What was weird was that we could enter after him," stated Seamus. "I mean you can't normally can you?"
"No." harry agreed suspiciously. "It suggests either he knew you were following him and it's some sort of trap, but judging by your health it wasn't that. Or maybe he knew you would tell me and it's a trap for me…" harry broke of thoughtfully as he gazed at the entrance of the alcove.
"and the other option?" questioned Ron suspiciously.
Harry turned to gaze at Ron seriously. "He did the most unslytherinly he could think of. He forgot and didn't notice."
"First option then?" questioned Seamus.
"I don't know." Stated harry. 'Do I go and look and walk myself into a slytherin trap. Can I stop myself? It would keep the others out of trouble if I looked by myself. And I can heal myself if I get hurt. I can escape by my secret animagus forms. Yes. I will go alone.' He thought quietly to himself as he watched the approaching frazzled looking Dean.
"Wha-" Seamus spoke before he was yanked to the side by Dean.
"Are you mad? We have 5 minutes to get to Snape's lesson." Dean exclaimed loudly.
"5 minutes?" Ron turned green and quickly hurried after dean and Seamus. Harry's green eyes watched them leave as he contemplated plans to himself thoughtfully.
Harry stood biting his lip outside the room of requirement rethinking his decision to enter repeatedly. After going through the pro's and con's for 5 minutes it was footsteps coming from around the corner that decided it for him as he quickly glanced in the direction of the footstep and then opened the door, entering the room.
Harry quickly shut the door and pressed his ear to it, and hearing footsteps passing the door without stopping relaxed slightly. Slightly being the key work. Wary green eyes scanned the room continuously, lingering in shadows and the corners. Not wary enough it appeared as from one second to the next Harry was bound and gagged in the middle of some sort of circle.
'A ritual circle' Harry realised to himself in horror. Green eyes locked with grey eyes as the old language came out of Malfoy's mouth and Harry's world was reduced to struggling in robes and then struggling in nothing but green mist which invaded his very being.
Malfoy Watched in fascination as his school enemy vanished with the green mist. He sighed and turned to a book on the table.
The ritual has been completed. He wrote clearly. Where did he go?
The ritual sends the being to another dimension. One which they can never return from. He is now the living dead you could say. Dead on this world, living on another. You have done well new servant of mine and I will mark you soon. V.
Malfoy shuddered in disgust and called a house elf to clear the mess away. He ran a hand stressfully through his hair. 'Good luck Harry' he thought quietly. 'I may not like you and I don't know what your new world is like but hopefully it's better than this one.'
Little did Draco know that sometime in the future Harry would search his world and exclaim "Run by Blond aristocratic pratts? Malfoy would love it here why would he send me?"
Harry landed in an abandoned alleyway. Or so he thought. To the side was a small teen scrunched up with blood surrounding him. Harry tilted his face up and saw the boy was breathing.
'That could've been me.' He though silently. 'Is this going to be my fate?'
Harry gently removed the teens hand and replaced them with his own. His healing magic entered the boy and healed his malnutrition and knife wound. He gently laid the boy on his side and transfigured a blanked from a pebble.
"Good luck little boy" he whispered quietly before turning into a bat and leaving to explore the new world he had arrived on, for he could easily see it was different than his own, he only hoped there were animals so he could blend in. He didn't realize that when he healed someone they were aware of his magic entering their body. But all they remember are soulful green eyes. A green colour that was out of their world. Literally.
Minutes Later Riki is found by Guy and started his journey towards leading the bison gang.
He always remembered the unique green eyes that saved him. The only reminder that it wasn't a dream. Even though Guy didn't believe him. At the time.
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