Note: my comments are bolded. The Erins own Warriors, and xdarkrosesx can have all the credit for Starkit's Prophecy.

ALLIANCES I believe these are allegiances, not alliances, but I'll let it slide

ok so like i said this iks my first story be nice plz I read this story before I read any commentary or warnings, so I was practically scarred for life

btw its set afte rsunset so I never heard of Rsunset, is that a new book?

ThunderClan

Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt

Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Medicine Cat: JayFeather-gray tom My biggest pet peeve is capitalizing letters in the middle of a warrior's name; also, this must be set after Sunrise if Jay is the medicine cat

Warriors:

Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Foxpaw

Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom

Sandstorm - pale ginger she-ca What's a she-ca? Is that a bird or something?

Cloudtail - long-haired white tom

Apprentice DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace Why would Daisy be an apprentice? And of course she has to be Cloudtail's apprentice *groans*

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom

Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes

Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom

Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches

Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes

Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Icepaw

Birchfall - light brown tabby tom

Graystripe - long-haired gray tom

Berrynose - cream-colored tom

Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat

Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom

Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat

Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat

Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom

Hollyleaf - black she-cat

FoxHeart-reddish tabby tom Ok, weren't Foxpaw and Icepaw literally just apprentices up at the top? And also, Foxheart? Seriously, this name needs to stop being used

IceFire-white she cat Oxymoron central, here we come

ToadRibbit-black—and-white tom I can't anymore

RoseFlame-dark cream she cat This is actually a cool name, but try to keep it canon

BriarStorm-dark brown she cat with paralyzed back legs

BumbleFlower-very pale gray tom with black stipes This name really makes no sense at all

BlossomWind-pale brown she cat iwth a dark stripe along her spine Why this description? BlossomFALL is a tortoiseshell

Apprentices:

Fox DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace This is definitely my favorite character...FOXDAISYPAW, ATTACK

FlamePaw-firecolored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye I want grnee eyes too. And this is called heterochromia (fun fact of the day)

LakePaw-bright blue gray she cat with blue eyes

The last 2 r starKits siters So they're her baby-sitters?

JazzPaw-red she cat with blue eyes and a black tail This name kills me

Queens:

Ferncloud - pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat with green eyes mother of Dustpelts kits which remain unnamed and unimportant

Dawnsparkle-bright tortishell she cat with garguntan blue eye's mother of Jayfeathers' ktis, formaly of Shadowclan Ok there are so many things wrong with this cat. 1) gargantuan blue eyes belong in an anime, not on Mary-Sue's mother 2) JAYFEATHER HAS KITS?! He's a medicine cat...basic rules apply 3) She's from ShadowClan? Of course, it's also a forbidden love *rings cliche bell* 4) DawnSPARKLE is not a warrior name in any scenario

Kits:

StarKit-graysh-blue-and purple she cat with molting orange eyes and a white star on her forhaed Why does every Mary-Sue have some shape on their forehead?! And also, are her eyes dropping feathers or something because they're molting?

Elders:

Longtail - pale tabby tom with dark black stripes, retired early due to failing sight

Mousefur - small dusky brown she-cat

Weaslepelt-big red tabby he cat with bight yellow eyes (hes Rowanclaw's dad, he came to Thunderclan when Dawn- did0 I'm going to start using he-cat instead of tom from now on. Also, this character actually seemed cool: SPOILER ALERT: he never is mentioned, ever

LeafPool-brown tabby she cat Why is Leafpool an elder? Are they punishing her for having SPOILER ALERTS kits? If so, why isn't Jay an elder, too?

ShadowClan

Leader: Blackstar - large white tom with huge jet-black paws

Deputy: Russetfur - dark ginger she-cat

Medicine Cat: Littlecloud - very small tabby tom

Apprentice, Flamepaw (ginger tom)

Warriors:

Oakfur - small brown tom

Apprentice, Tigerpaw (dark brown tabby tom)

Rowanclaw - ginger tom

Smokefoot - black tom

Apprentice, Owlpaw (light brown tabby tom)

Ivytail - black, white and tortoiseshell she-cat

Apprentice, Dawnpaw (cream-furred she-cat)

Toadfoot - dark brown tom

Crowfrost - black-and-white tom

Apprentice, Olivepaw (tortoiseshell she-cat)

Kinkfur - tabby she-cat, with long fur that sticks out at all angles

Ratscar - brown tom with long scar across his back

Apprentice, Shrewpaw (gray she-cat with black feet)

Snaketail - dark brown tabby tom with striped tail

Apprentice, Scorchpaw (dark gray tom)

Whitewater - white she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye

Apprentice, Redpaw (mottled brown and ginger tom)

Tawnypelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes

Flamewind- flame color tabby tom with green eye's Is this Flametail? Why is he listed twice, and why isn't he a medicine cat?

Tigerclaw-huge dark brown tabby tom with long claw's and amber eys OMSC it's Tigerstar! No leader would ever use this name

DawnFeather-cream tabby she cat (shes a different cant then the one in tC ok?) Why would we confuse DawnSPARKLE with DawnFEATHER? They don't even look alike

OlivePaw-bright brown she cat Bright brown is definitely a color. Also, how is Olivepaw a warrior with an apprentice name?

Queens:

Snowbird - pure white she-cat Are there any kits?

Elders:

Cedarheart - dark gray tom

Tallpoppy - long-legged light brown she-cat

Ok, this part is definitely copy and pasted:

WindClan

Leader: Onestar - brown tabby tom

Deputy: Ashfoot - gray she-cat

Medicine Cat: Barkface - short-tailed brown tom

Apprentice, Kestrelpaw (mottled gray tom)

Warriors:

Tornear - tabby tom

Crowfeather - dark gray tom

Owlwhisker - light brown tabby tom

Whitetail - small white she-cat

Nightcloud - black she-cat

Gorsetail - very pale gray-and-white cat with blue eyes Tom or she-cat? The world may never know

Weaselfur - ginger tom with white paws

Harespring - brown-and-white tom

Leaftail - dark tabby tom, amber eyes

Apprentice, Thistlepaw (long-haired white tom) This cat is never mentioned again

Dewspots - spotted gray she-cat

Apprentice, Sedgepaw (light brown tabby she-cat)

Willowclaw - gray she-cat

Apprentice, Swallowpaw (dark gray she-cat)

Antpelt - brown tom with one black ear

Emberfoot - gray tom with two dark paws

Apprentice, Sunpaw (tortoiseshell she-cat with large white mark on her forehead) Is she another Starkit? Is her mark shaped like the sun?

Heathertail - light brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Breezepelt - black tom with amber eyes

Elders:

Morningflower - very old tortoiseshell queen If she's an elder, I think we know she's old

Webfoot - dark gray tabby tom

RiverClan

Leader: Leopardstar - unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat

Deputy: Mistyfoot - gray she-cat with blue eyes

Medicine Cat: Mothwing - dappled golden she-cat

Apprentice, Willowshine (gray tabby she-cat)

Warriors:

Blackclaw - smoky-black tom

Voletooth - small brown tabby tom

Apprentice, Minnowpaw (dark gray she-cat)

Reedwhisker - black tom

Mosspelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes

Apprentice, Pebblepaw (mottled gray tom)

Beechfur - light brown tom

Rippletail - dark gray tabby tom

Apprentice, Mallowpaw (light brown tabby tom)

Graymist - pale gray tabby she-cat or tom?

Dawnflower - pale gray she-cat

Dapplenose - mottled gray she-cat

Pouncetail - ginger-and-white tom

Mintfur - light gray tabby tom

Apprentice, Nettlepaw (dark brown tabby tom) This cat is never mentioned again

Otterheart - dark brown she-cat

Apprentice, Sneezepaw (gray-and-white tom) This is easily the best name

Pinefur - very short-haired tabby she-cat

Apprentice, Robinpaw (tortoiseshell-and-white tom)

Rainstorm - mottled gray-blue tom

Duskfur - brown tabby she-cat

Apprentice, Copperpaw (dark ginger she-cat) This better mean the color copper

Queens:

Icewing - white cat with green eyes, mother of Beetlekit, Pricklekit, Petalkit, and Grasskit She actually has blue eyes

Elders:

Heavystep - thickset tabby tom I love Heavystep, just because he died 3 times

Swallowtail - dark tabby she-cat

Stonestream - gray tom

Yep, Copy and Paste was definitely used.