Hey guys! this is my first story so don't be all grouchey about it! I'm Shimmerkit in the story
and welcome to Warriors The Quest by me! (no der) CHAPTER ONE! yeah, getting progress! ^^ It has no charaters from the book (exept firestar and scourge and tigerclaw and tigerclan and lionclan and bloodclan, but thats later) so charaters are mine, and so is the book BUT WARRIORS FULLY BELONG TO ERIN HUNTER! Did you know erin hunter is four diffrent people?
onto the story!

WARRIORS
The Quest

By: Spottedpath

Chapter 1

"When will she open her eye's?" Shimmerkit heard a she-cat say worriedly, Shimmerkit guessed she was her mother.
"Calm down, i'm sure there's nothing to worry about. Besides, Gingerkit didn't open her eye's as soon as she was born either, Silvernose." another she-cat soothed."Okay, Spottedtail, I'll calm down," her mother said as Shimmerkit stummbled to her.

She kept hearing that name, Gingerkit. she guessed that was Spottedtail's kit, she heard the name Berrykit too, she wondered if she was gingerkit's sister. Shimmerkit wanted to open her eye's and see the world, but she was happy with her eye's closed, she didn't have to worry about anything, her life was peaceful that way. of cource Berrykit and Gingerkit both wanted her to open her eye's and play with them, but she didn't want to . She suddenly heard pawsteps from outside, she guessed it was Gingerkit and Berrykit about to try to make her open her eye's. She liked them and wanted to make them happy, so she decided to open her eye's this time. Beside's, maybe they would show her around.
"Hey, Shimmerkit! Open your eye's and play with us!" Berrykit squealed. "Yeah, plea-" Gingerkit was cut off by Shimmerkit opening her eye's. Then Berrykit screamed, "She opened her eye's! She opened her eye's! Shimmerkit finally opened her eye's!" Berrykit was bounceing around excitedly and got a silver she-cat's atention, Shimmerkit wondered if that was Silvernose, the one she thought was her mother. The silver she-cat looked at Shimmerkit, then said in a gentle voice,"Welcome to Thunderclan, little one. I'm Silvernose, your mother. This is Spottedtail, that's Gingerkit, and that's Berrykit." she said, pointing to them with her tail. Shimmerkit took some time to look them over. Silvernose was a pure silver she-cat and had a white muzzle, Spottedtail Was a beautiful white tortiseshell she-cat, Gingerkit was a ginger colored she-kit with a white under-belly, and Berrykit was a brown she-kit. Then Shimmerkit wondered what she looked like, she looked at herself, she was a beautiful silver she-kit with a white under-belly,and tail-tip." what does my head look like?" she wondered out loud." You have light blue eye's and a white ear," Her mother replyed.
"Are there any other kit's?" Shimmerkit asked. Berrykit opened her mouth to speak but Gingerkit spoke first," Yes, there are but there mother took them to the dirt place tunnel. Whenever they came in or were talked about you were asleep, so it makes sense you wouldn't know if there were." "Oh." Shimmerkit mummbled.

She pricked her ear's "Are they coming? I hear paw steps!" this time Berrykit got to speak,"Yes they are! You finally get to see them! they're almost as tall as apprentices!" Shimmerkit thought about that for a while, wondering how tall apprentices are. she saw three large cats',"what are your name's?" She asked as she trotted up to them. She saw two were tom's and one was a she-cat, they all had kind looks on there faces. The tom in the middle spoke," I'm Brownkit, this is Ravenkit, and this is Dovekit. So you finally opened your eye's?" "Yes," Shimmerkit replied proudly. Brownkit was a brown tom, Dovekit was a white she-kit, and Ravenkit was a dark brown tom. A she-cat came in behind them. That must be thier mother! She thought to herself. She was a brown she-cat. then Dovekit said,"This is Cherryfoot! Can we go outside please?" she asked Cherryfoot,"Shimmerkit opened her eyes!"
"That's Silvernose's decision."
"Mother can I go outside please? i want to see the camp!" Shimmerkit pleaded.
"Please can she, Silvernose! We want to show her around!"Berrykit and Gingerkit said at the same time.
"Okay, but I'm coming with you!" Silvernose said.
"Yea!" the six kit's shouted togeather.
"But no rough playing with Shimmerkit!"
"Okay" Shimmerkit said and they all left togeather
"Wow! It's so big!" Shimmerkit looked around. She saw so many bushes and brambles a trees! "There are so many cats'! How do you remember all the names?"Shimmerkit asked,"You just do." said an unfurmilier voice. Shimmerkit turned around to see a handsome white large tom with blue eyes. then her mother said,"this is your father, Whitestar, also the leader."
"That's right," Whitestar said. "And you become an apprentice in only 4 more moons!"
"Wow! I'm realated to the leader? that's so cool! I'm about to see the whole camp! will you come with us?" Shimmerpaw asked."I'd love to show my kit around." Whitestar purred. she was so excited to finally see the camp! there was so much to see! She wondered if she could eat off of the 'freashkill pile'. she didn't know what the freash kill pile was exatly but she heard of it. but it was obviously a pile of things killed freashly. She looked around again this time more closely so she might see it. that must be it! that's a pile a killed things! Shimmerkit looked a her father,"Is that the freash-kill pill?" she asked, pointing with her nose.
"Yes." He replied, and nodded
"Where are we going first?"
"How about my den?"
"Your den? I've never been there!" Berrykit mewed. Gingerkit, Dovekit, Ravenkit, And Brownkit all nodded in agreement. Whitestar snickered
"Well, you're about to!" Whitestar replied
While they walked over to Shimmerkit's father's den, Shimmerkit took some time to look around. She noticed many cats stairing at her, she guessed they have never seen her with her eye's open.
When Shimmerkit looked forward she was at some rocks that lead to a ledge. "Is this your den?" she asked confused. "No, not yet, it's up there," he pointed with his tail."Will you need help getting up there?" he asked,"No I'm fine," Shimmerkit replied, jumping up. She grabed the ledge then scrambled up, a little bit embareced with herself for the clumsy jump. She jumped the rest of the way up with only a few more mistakes. the others, since they were bigger then her, made it up easier. Then Whitestar led the way in. It was so big! It only has one nest too, there was some fresh-kill by his nest and fresh moss."It's so big!" Shimmerkit exclaimed while the other kit's were looking around wide-eyed with amazement.
"It is, and i know your wondering about the one nest, there's only one because only I sleep here." Whitestar explained
"Don't you get cold by your-self?"
"Can't someone attack you easier this way?"
"Who comferts you when you have nightmares?
Whitestar had questions being thrown at him but he answered them all. She was impressed that he stayed so calm while he was being questioned.
"Where now?" Shimmerkit asked. Brownkit jumped up and down," The apprentices den! that's where our next nests will be!" This time Dovekit took the lead scence she knew where everything was already. The apprentice den was in the shelter of a bush, when they went inside, Shimmerkit saw many, many nests and a small area. she wondered how they fit so many nests in such a small area. They all talked, but she didn't listen she was day-dreaming. She was in a beautiful meadow and she heard someone call her name, the voice sounded familier. She sat down on a rock for a bit to catch her breath, a brown form stepped out of some flowers. It was Brownkit! He staired at her like he was just as shocked to see her as she was to see him."What are you doing here?" Shimmerkit asked,"W-what are you doing here?" Brownkit stampered. Shimmerkit was glad that he was here, but she hid it." I-I heard a voice calling my name and i rested here, what about y-you?" She asked again."I also heard a v-voice calling my name, but it stopped when i came into this clearing." Shimmerkit just realized the same thing. she was going to tell him but she could tell he already knew."Well, we discovered a meadow!" she mewed excitedly."Yeah, i guess we did!" he began to brighten up."We can meet here secretly now!" Shimmerkit looked at him and nodded, she could tell Brownkit liked her too.

How was that? first chapter so far! and yeah, if you guessed it, Brownkit and Shimmerkit like each other! woo! first relationship in the first chapter! im happy with this, are you? oh yeah, and please review! tell me how i can make it better for you guys!