So I was reading some KHR poems and wanted to try it myself. I don't actually really know how to write a poem, so creative criticism would be really really nice.


Embody your element.

Sometimes the sky will look in your eyes,

Sometimes the sky will seem to die.

Storms are really scary all flashing and sound,

Storms are really scary all silence around.

Cleansing rain a grinning, soft pitter patter,

Cleansing rain a screaming horrendous roaring clatter.

When brilliant sunlight blinds you it's true,

When brilliant sunlight is gone you want it's renew.

Clouds are pretty all strange violent new shapes,

Clouds are pretty bringing raging storms and rains.

Flashing and smiling an innocent thunder,

Flashing and smiling towards its own blunder.

Swirling mist always there always not,

Swirling mist will cause you mind to rot.

Rainbows above glimmering with colour and light,

Rainbows above with promise of fortunes not right.

Sometimes the sea, so gentle and true,

Sometimes the sea will try and destroy you.

Embody your element and heed the words,

Embody your element and let truths be heard.