Death of Sanity

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Slowly departing from my mind

I'm trying not to feel

People falling everywhere

The pain is all too real

My loves are expiring

And I am left

Watching and forced to endure…

Sickness devouring my sanity

I crave for it to break

Curled up, shaking, wide-eyed, and scared

Despair, my only fate

On stress alone I cough up blood

Like dread from my heart tapped

I revel in it silently

Then realize I've finally snapped

Laughing amid their bodies

I delight in my newfound freedom

Loving every minute of it

Not caring I look quite fearsome

Craving more I bite my tongue

And tilt my head to the sky

Too late I find it was Armageddon

Then I finally die

The first part kind of applies to Sasuke if you think about it. But if the ending were to fit, Itachi would have had to kill Sasuke too...

W/E; I needed to write it and now I'm trying to apply it to anime characters...