hello welcome to my 2nd story please go check out my other one! tell me how im doin n what I need to improve! one thing you should know about me I 3 CODY SIMPSON so just to warn you! haha jk but there may be some of his songs in here! enjoy! ill update when i get 5 reviews from different people!
~THE RISEN ANGEL
Maximum ride
Max pov.
Hi my name is max, not short for Maxine like some of you dweebs may think but short for Maximum . Now to explain some things about myself, I used to go to high school and used to have a mum and a sister. Now I have neither.
This is all because I can't go to high school and because my father killed my sister and mum and I am still constantly being beat to a pulp all the time but am not allowed to go to help. But we've moved so many times and I haven't been to socialize with our new neighbors either.
I guess that's what his plan is anyways. I need to continue this later because this is hard for me to talk about and I know you are all like the great maximum ride ready to cry? Well yeah I bet you all would cry too! So now to my daily life, I turn to my computer and open up my website I found where I can play a bunch of computer games.(a/n MSN games.)
I am doing so when I hear my father yell MAXINE!I run down the stairs to his office got in his face and spat, "first of all you call me maximum!". As I continued on I got louder," And second of all what the heck do YOU want!He replied,"Well I was going to say get to making us dinner but I now I say go make me the best dinner, the dinner will depend on if you get whipped or not."
He knows I can't even cook a pot of water and yet he uses it against me. So I go to the phone and order Chinese for 5 then set to making jeb some coffee. Surprisingly i don't burn that. It is strange because that is the one thing my mom used to burn. It's been so long.
I still remember seeing her and my sister get beat. i stil remember being my 10 year old self and still trying to shield them. It hurt so much to rember them. I quickly remembered to take to long. Luckly i was thinking of my past for over a half an hour (a/n have never ordered chinese not sure how long it takes.) so I heard a knock on the door and was quick to open it.
At the door was our chinese my appearance resembled a 20 some year old so who looked like a high school didn't ask if i went to his school. but he did say,"Hi miss here is your chinese, oh by the way on the receipt is my name and number, call me." Quickly in case Jeb heard i payed him and gave him 10 dollars to leave quietly.
I shut the door and divided the chinese evenly onto two plates. What! we're big eaters around here. While making sure to remain quiet i got rid of all take out evidence. Quickly and as quietly as possible i opened the door that led into Jeb's room. I wasn't prepared for what I saw.
A/n ok so what did you guys think im kinda newish to fanfiction but hope you check out my other stories. i hope to update soon but there is some family stuff going in so idk when i'll be able to update. Also wish me luck we find out who the alternates are for majorettes tm it means we wouldn't be alound to compete. i just hope i am on the competition squad. Review i do accept anonymous. review and tell me you favorite color!
