Disclaimer: Don't own the Inheritance Cycle. Period.


Hey guys. I know I haven't posted anything in forever. Sorry.

This is going to be a little messy. I'll try to have some actual plot, but it's mostly going to be whatever I want it to be at that moment. But I'll just say this. I'm redoing the whole Inheritance Cycle. From the very beginning. The idea is going to be the same, but it won't be that close to the original. For example, the Ra'zac will be dead before the battle of Farthen Dur. Just so you know. Don't like: don't read.

Also, if I leave out a part, and make reference to it in this, assume it happened the same as in the books. Arya's capture for example.

Thanks!


The flash of light was blinding.

He didn't pay it any attention. His prey was startled: on the run. he jumped up and closed one eye, for he was seeing double. Aiming down his arrow, he saw the doe running. But she wouldn't get away. Not this time.

He fired.

The arrow flew from his bow, toward the deer. It hit her square in the chest. As she fell, she knocked over her Fawn, sending it flying over a small ledge. He heard the crack as the fawn's head hit the rock below. No sound came from it.

However, the doe was making as much noise as she could. He quickly went over and put the deer out of it's misery.

Only then, did he turn around to see what had caused the bright flash.

Sitting in a blackened crater was a blue stone.


That's the beginning. Yes I know it was short. Get a life. What I really wanted to demonstrate was his focus. Not bad. Eh?

Anyways, this is pretty much the intro. Don't review if you're gonna say it was too short. I might even post the next chapter later today.