10/06/09-

Hi! I am sure that you are ready to kill me for not updating the older version of this story, but I decided to make a revised copy and keep the old copy for people to see the original. My cheap excuse is that I was attacked by the combined forces of lazyness, no motivation, writers block, and distractions.

I am deeply sorry for the fact that I haven't updated for months and I am glad to say that you will see a chapter 5 and 6 soon because I am currently just editing Chapter 6. If you wanted to know when I will be adding more chapters chapter two will be here tomorrow and chapter 3 the next and etc. till chapter 6.

Also for the pairings the maximum amount of girls for Naruto's harem will be 4. Fem. Kyuubi is already automatically in so that makes the rest your choice. Here are the girls you can choose for the harem-

Anko, , Kurenai, Temari, Tayuya, Hana, Tsume, and Yuago.

Those are the girls I will allow for the harem. Remember when you are finished reading the chapter please review!

On with the story!


Inside the village of Konoha you can see a seven-year-old boy running from a group of ten angry villagers and five ninjas. They each held a weapon of some sort from katanas to broken beer bottles. All of them seemed to be angry at the boy; he was their main target.

The boy's name was Naruto Uzumaki. He had blond hair that seemed to defy gravity and cerulean blue eyes that looked worried. He was wearing a hideous orange jumpsuit with goggles on his head for no reason at all. If you were to ask someone who had never seen Naruto, they would say he sort of resembles Minato Namikaze when he was younger.

Currently little Naruto was running from the villagers having no clue to why they always chase him on this day.

Today was October Tenth, Naruto's birthday, and the day that the Yondaime (4rth hokage if you didn't know) had supposedly killed the Kyuubi, or at least that's what the academy taught him. For some strange reason a small group of villagers/ninjas would chase him down. On any other day they would just ignore him.

Even though Naruto knew they were catching up to him every minute he kept on trying, despite the things they were throwing at him.

The mob moved in a drunken fashion. The chase went on for nearly fifteen minutes longer than normal leading outside the gates of Konoha, and unfortunately the guards at the gate took a break inside of Konoha.

"Kill the Demon!" and "We'll finish what the Fourth started!" could be heard occasionally during the chase to get Naruto.

The chase went on forward away form Konoha until Naruto attempted to hide in a small cave on the outskirts of Konoha.

While running Naruto started to cry knowing that he was getting dangerously tired, and the mob was getting closer.

What did I do to deserve this? Why are they doing this to me? I've never done anything to deserv-

Naruto's thoughts were cut off as the group of attackers filtered into the entrance of the small cavern.

Then one of the villagers shouted, "Hey guys, the demon is in here! Lets get him!"

Naruto curled into a ball, fresh tears falling down his dirt encrusted face, as the mob rushed forward to attack.

The blond Jinchuuriki couldn't help but scream in pain as the full force of the civilian's wraith fell upon the poor boy. Naruto's screaming did nothing to deter his would be attacker. He was a horrible sight to look at; some of the wounds looked permanent. A small, but insane, laugh began to ripple among the mob.

Naruto screamed again and again, even though he was beaten he managed to squeak out in a weak voice,"Please... Stop... Someone... Help me..." Then a tall, dark haired, muscular ninja moved to the front of the mob; sent a swift punch to Naruto's already bloody face.

He said, "Shut up demon! You killed our families!" "Did you listen when they begged for help?!" A wicked grin filled the man's face. "Now, We're gonna do the same to you."

After a long beating the poor child was cut in a lot of places, bleeding almost everywhere, and had a most of his bones else would have died from such wounds. Luckily Naruto wasn't exactly a normal, he had always had extradinary healing. Despite his horrible lasurations.

"Naruto! Where are you!" It was a worried voice from the outside, the voice of the current Sandaime; He was looking for the boy.

The attackers froze. "Shit!" someone said, "The hokage is looking for the demon! We better end this quick!" Looking down at Naruto the man grinned despite all the blood on his clothes. "Just remember Demon, You deserved this!"

''Well this is it then...' thought a barely conscious Naruto. Then one shinobi took a kunai and slashed his throat open without mercy; just watching the child suffer. The group left in hurry soon after, leaving the heavily bleeding Naruto in the cave.


After a few hours Naruto woke up, but the cave he awoke in was not the same one he was in before. Somehow his wounds were healed, though he still felt a heavy pain all over his body.

'Oh great. They threw me in a sewer. How original.' He started walking around the place until he heard a terrifying voice. "Kid... Over here..."

Naruto then said in fear "Who said that?!"

"Brat... In here..."

Naruto followed the deep and mysterious voice, leading to a giant cage with two glowing red eyes staring back at him.

"Who are you, and where are we?!" demanded Naruto

The voice started to laugh at him for a few moments and then said "Kid, I am the great Almighty Kyuubi No Kitsune, the strongest of the bijju!" Kyuubi paused for a while and then said. "To answer your question, we are in your mind."

"But the Yodaime killed you! Everyone knows that; so why are you here in my mind?!" Naruto said while slowly backing away from the cage doors.

"That weak human!" Kyuubi roared. " You insult me. No he did not kill me, if he did I wouldn't be here right now."

Kyuubi paused and said "Isn't it obvious? He just sealed me into you."

Naruto stared in disbelief before shouting. "I don't believe you! As far as I know, this could be some horrible nightmare; I'll wake up soon."

Kyuubi looked at Naruto and sighed. "Maybe this will change your mind."


Minato Namikaze was holding a baby Naruto in his arms while he began doing a small string of handseals. The Kyuubi was attacking and he had no choice but to use his most powerful jutsu.

"Naruto. I hope you can forgive me for what I am about to do," said, the fourth," But I must get rid of this demon before it destroys the village I know and love"

He yelled, "Summoning no Jutsu!" While a gigantic toad appeared in a giant puff of smoke.

The yodaime yelled, "Gamabunta! I need you to take us to the Kyuubi unharmed!"

The toad responded, "So you decided to use that jutsu eh? Well I got to say kid, it was nice knowing you."

"It was nice knowing you too, Gamabunta" They both fell silent for now.

Not long after, the great demon in the distance, they charged forward; the fox and toad locked in combat while the yellow flash of Konoha began preparing his final jutsu. "Shiki Fujin!"

A few moments pasted in silence before a booming voice filled their makeshift arena. "Whose dares summon death?!"

"I did, I need you to seal the Kyuubi's soul. It's become to dangerous to take any other chances now."

The spirit grinned. "Fine, but I'm taking your soul as payment."

The Kyuubi tried to struggle to avoid getting sealed. It was finally sucked into the Yodaime's prison.

After the smoke cleared you could see a dead Yodaime holding a crying Naruto in his arms.


Naruto's grin faltered slightly. "Okay. I believe you, you stupid fox."

"Who are you calling stupid, brat?!" the fox raged.

"Are you deaf? I just called you stupid! You stupid fur ball."

The Kyuubi growled, "If it weren't for this seal I would've eat you the moment I saw you."

"Yah but you can't, so Ha!"

"Well let's get on subject. The reason you are here is because I called you here. I can sense a great energy in this cave and I think you should find the source. I have a feeling it could grant us power of some sort "

"Okay, so were is it then."

"You can't get it without my help-"

Naruto interrupted him rudely and said," What was the point of bringing me here then?"

"I was going to tell you before you interrupted me" "First tear off part of that seal. It is holding me back. Just tear of about one-tenth of it"

"No way! It will probably just increase your chance of escaping!"

"It won't affect the seal greatly. It will just allow me to talk in your head without the seal holding me back."

"Is there any other side effects?"

"Yes. You will gain a tail and some fox ears, as well as slitted eyes like mine."

"WHAT!!!" Naruto almost beat the world record with that scream.

"I was just joking! You don't need to be so loud! Well, anyways, there isn't any side effect."

Naruto reached up and ripped away a corner of the seal, causing him to wake up in the same cave he was beaten in.

'Few it was just another of those weird dreams I had...'

'That's not exactly what I would call a dream. Now lets find where that energy is coming from.'

After Naruto followed what Kyuubi told him to do, he found himself was already deep inside the cave. After some time, he saw a small, silver orb floating in the air. It had a powerful aura radiating off of it.

'That's the energy I detected.' The kyuubi's voice faltered for a moment. 'Is that what I think it is...'

"What is it Kyuubi?" A confused Naruto asked, but before Kyuubi could answer, a booming voice spoke up.

"Young one. If you want to be blessed with my power you must answer these questions honestly. If you do not then you will suffer the same fate as the others before you. Do you understand?" Naruto nodded, a small bead of sweat trickling down his brow due to the fact the orb was so powerful and Naruto knew it could kill him without trying.

"Which do you prefer, Hero or villain?"

"Second question, Will you use power for your own benefits or for the world's?"

"And finally, Will you use power to defend or destroy?"

"I would be a hero. I personally think if you kill everyone for no reason then you're worse than garbage, I would use all my powers to help the world as much as I could. Lastly, I will use power to defend my village, loved ones and everyone I can, but if the time comes I might have no other choice, but to destroy for the sake of protecting the ones I love."

"You have answered all my questions honestly. For this, your reward will be to become the first holder of the Legendary Dragon Scroll. You will be the first Dragon Warrior in several centuries. You and only you will be able to read it. Once you open this scroll all your abilities will be enhanced; you are now part of the dragon clan."

Then it said" Allow me to introduce myself. I am Ryuuzin, the Almighty God of Dragons."

The orb glowed brightly, then started to take shape; soon it looked like a dragon and began to grow in size. In a large flash, it was replace was a giant, white dragon. This dragon looked extremely powerful, It radiated power from ever inch of its being. Its eyes glowed with an ancient wisdom. There was no sign of weakness as it gave a large, earth-shattering roar.

Then a powerful beam hit Naruto full blast. When it hit him he did not feel any pain, only something empowering him.

In a quick flash of light a scroll appeared at Naruto's feet. On it was the kanji for Dragon. "Farewell...Chosen One..." In a quick flash the dragon was gone.


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