okay first of all english is NOT my mother tongue so please forgive any mistakes i'm going to make and i am 100% sure there are going to be some. i thought there would be more audience for an english story than a german one.
second this is my first attempt in writing a story, so please don't kill me with your reviews but i had this idea stuck in my mind and i needed to get it out and i'm open for constructive criticism.
and last but not least i sadly don't own anything. i'm just using the characters and play puppets with them in my own mad world.
as a WARNING i have to say that this story is going to contain some serious issues like abuse, rape and suicide so you don't like it don't read it
Bella POV:
I still wasn't able to really grasp the fact that I made it back to Forks. It was one of the worst years of my life but I made it. I finally was home again or at least it felt like home considering the fact that I didn't have any place to stay or even a family to go to. It was weird to feel home again sitting in front of my father's grave. Also sitting here surrounded by woods brought back the feeling of safety. And even the once hated rain that now mingled with my tears while it caressed my cheeks was here to lull me back into the sweetest memories I had. It was beautiful and I drowned in those felling for as long as I could. This town gave me a wonderful gift. Now that the day has come where I chose to die it gave me those feelings back. Feelings I hadn't felt for the last eleven years. Feeling that were replaced by fear and guilt and hurtful memories. But now that doesn't matter anymore. Later today the sun would shine. Later today I chose to die.
okay so what do you think?
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