this's a poem I wrote bout a week ago. Wasnt really thinkin of BB and L, but i after reading it through I realised that it coudl fit them. So, i put the original version and the edited version. The only diference is that its in male rather than female form :) The peom was actually based on a picture i drew, I'd post it somewhere, but i cant so i wont lol XP anyway, this whole collection (if you will) will be all of my poems that i beleive are BB/L realted, k? reviews are always welcome!!!! :D
I do not own death note, but since DN isnt mentioned in the poems, i own them, k?!
(original version)
My bloody kisses.
your bleeding nose.
I drank in the wine leaving so fluently,
the liquid colour like that of a rose
gruesome and monstrously...
a light blush tints you face
as our lips make contact
the scarlet pillows and tongue invade
a knife hidden behind your back
my sister, my lover
my girlfriend, my bride
I see your eyes close in black
as the blade plunges inside
my bloody kisses
move down your neck
drawing pain and your breath
I am you
you are me
bloody kisses
life is missing
my tongue slithers
you die on the bed
bloody kisses
bloody kisses
bloody kisses are sisters
with those of death...
(edited version)
My bloody kisses.
your bleeding nose.
I drank in the wine leaving so fluently,
the liquid colour like that of a rose
gruesome and monstrously...
a light blush tints you face
as our lips make contact
the scarlet pillows and tongue invade
a knife hidden behind your back
my brother, my lover
my boyfriend, my bride
I see your eyes close in black
as the blade plunges inside
my bloody kisses
move down your neck
drawing pain and your breath
I am you
you are me
bloody kisses
life is missing
my tongue slithers
you die on the bed
bloody kisses
bloody kisses
bloody kisses are brothers
with those of death...
