Standard disclaimer; I don't own these characters so please don't sue me.
This is my creation please be honest and give constructive criticism.
Thank you.
The characters: Goku; Vegeta; Trunks; Goten; Piccolo and a few characters of my own.
Chapter 1
IT BEGINGS
It was a bright and beautiful day. There was no hint of the trouble on the way. Goku, Goten, and Trunks were enjoying the day and playing games and swimming together. Vegeta was also there being his usual self; standing under the shade of a tree. The only reason he's there is because Bulma made him promise to watch Trunks.
Then Vegeta senses a high power in somewhere in the area. Goku notices Vegeta tense up slightly and stops to concentrate. He too senses the same power plus at least two others somewhere but can't pinpoint their locations.
"Trunks; Goten come here now!" Goku says, "Hurry!
Trunks and Goten come as called.
"What's up, Dad, is there anything wrong?" Goten asks scratching his nose.
"Can't you sense their power?" Trunks ask coyly. "Where are they," he asks looking around.
"There!" Vegeta yells pointing behind them. They turn just in time to see Goku get kicked up side the head. The force of the blow sends Goku flying through four fairly large trees. "Okay their's one where are the other two," Vegeta thinks. He senses the other one just in time to get kicked in the middle of the back sending him flying. Fortunately there were no obstacles in Vegetas way so he was able to catch himself just in time to be hit from above by a giant foot that was at least the same size he was.
"That was easier than I thought" said the big one.
"You said it Bearing" responded a squeaky voice.
"What about the children?" asks the third and smallest of the three.
"What else?" responded the squeaky one; "We take as slaves."
"I don't think so; it takes more than a cheap shot to take care of us," Goku says. Just then an explosion send Bearing flying into the air; followed by a blur that turned out Vegeta; and landing several feet behind him.
"So you think a couple of cheap shots could take care of me did you." Vegeta says as he spits out some dirt.
"One or a dozen it doesn't matter to me" Said the Squeaky voiced one.
"You have but one chance to leave this place peacefully I suggest you do so before I'm forced to send you to another dimension." Goku says.
"Kackarot you are a fool to think I will let any of them leave. They have wounded my pride and now must pay with their lives" Vegeta says sadistically; while blasting Bearing into another dimension without even looking.
"Vegeta there was no reason for that!" Goku yells at him angrily.
" Put a sock in it you bakka, Stop wasting your breath because these fools came her to die." Vegeta says while choosing his next target.
"You'll pay for that runt" says the squeaky voices invader.
"You tell 'em, Sqeks" the small one says, " I'll take on the one in orange; you take the other one.
While all that was going on Trunks and Goten were forming their own plans. "Man at this rate there won't be anyone left for us to fight." Trunks say disappointedly."
"I know," responds Goten kinda pouting, "We never get to do anything fun."
Just then Bearing gets up. "Ouch, that hurt who hurt Bearing? Now Bearing mad!"
"He he he he heh," Trunks and Goten laugh in unison as they power up and charge Bearing head on, "Party time!"
In aditional chapters I will probably be adding more characters stay tuned!!!!!!!!!
This is my creation please be honest and give constructive criticism.
Thank you.
The characters: Goku; Vegeta; Trunks; Goten; Piccolo and a few characters of my own.
Chapter 1
IT BEGINGS
It was a bright and beautiful day. There was no hint of the trouble on the way. Goku, Goten, and Trunks were enjoying the day and playing games and swimming together. Vegeta was also there being his usual self; standing under the shade of a tree. The only reason he's there is because Bulma made him promise to watch Trunks.
Then Vegeta senses a high power in somewhere in the area. Goku notices Vegeta tense up slightly and stops to concentrate. He too senses the same power plus at least two others somewhere but can't pinpoint their locations.
"Trunks; Goten come here now!" Goku says, "Hurry!
Trunks and Goten come as called.
"What's up, Dad, is there anything wrong?" Goten asks scratching his nose.
"Can't you sense their power?" Trunks ask coyly. "Where are they," he asks looking around.
"There!" Vegeta yells pointing behind them. They turn just in time to see Goku get kicked up side the head. The force of the blow sends Goku flying through four fairly large trees. "Okay their's one where are the other two," Vegeta thinks. He senses the other one just in time to get kicked in the middle of the back sending him flying. Fortunately there were no obstacles in Vegetas way so he was able to catch himself just in time to be hit from above by a giant foot that was at least the same size he was.
"That was easier than I thought" said the big one.
"You said it Bearing" responded a squeaky voice.
"What about the children?" asks the third and smallest of the three.
"What else?" responded the squeaky one; "We take as slaves."
"I don't think so; it takes more than a cheap shot to take care of us," Goku says. Just then an explosion send Bearing flying into the air; followed by a blur that turned out Vegeta; and landing several feet behind him.
"So you think a couple of cheap shots could take care of me did you." Vegeta says as he spits out some dirt.
"One or a dozen it doesn't matter to me" Said the Squeaky voiced one.
"You have but one chance to leave this place peacefully I suggest you do so before I'm forced to send you to another dimension." Goku says.
"Kackarot you are a fool to think I will let any of them leave. They have wounded my pride and now must pay with their lives" Vegeta says sadistically; while blasting Bearing into another dimension without even looking.
"Vegeta there was no reason for that!" Goku yells at him angrily.
" Put a sock in it you bakka, Stop wasting your breath because these fools came her to die." Vegeta says while choosing his next target.
"You'll pay for that runt" says the squeaky voices invader.
"You tell 'em, Sqeks" the small one says, " I'll take on the one in orange; you take the other one.
While all that was going on Trunks and Goten were forming their own plans. "Man at this rate there won't be anyone left for us to fight." Trunks say disappointedly."
"I know," responds Goten kinda pouting, "We never get to do anything fun."
Just then Bearing gets up. "Ouch, that hurt who hurt Bearing? Now Bearing mad!"
"He he he he heh," Trunks and Goten laugh in unison as they power up and charge Bearing head on, "Party time!"
In aditional chapters I will probably be adding more characters stay tuned!!!!!!!!!
