Hiya people!! This is my first chapter to my first story so umm enjoy! Please R&R! Thanks^^
SPECIAL NOTE: This is my REDONE chapter 1 so the plot kinda changed...
"I'm sorry Ash." Said May with sadness in her voice
"You don't like me!?" Cried Ash with tear-filled eyes
Ash ran far into the night, sobbing his head off before May could say anything else to him. May was so confused. She thought she liked Drew but now that Ash told her he likes her she looks at it with a new perspective.
"Heh... I guess it's better to just go back to the camp for now, I mean it's pitch-black out and not to mention it's well... pouring!!" May said aloud to herself
"Nice Maple you really screwed this one up big time" May scolded herself
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"Mmm! What is that delicious smell" Asked May
"Ah, good your up!" Brock said
"Say umm May have you by chance see Ash?" questioned Brock
"No! Haven't seen him! So sir!" May replied nervously
"Tacos" Exclaimed Max "Where in the world could Ash be?"
"First of all Max, that was quite arbitrary, and that is defiantly not like Ash to go anywhere without his friends" Brock stated
"OK!! FINE!! I rejected Ash so he ran away!" May exclaimed rather loudly
"Wait, what?" questioned Brock and Max in unison
"look last night I couldn't sleep so I went for a little walk, and guess who I saw... Ash! Any ways Ash said he needed to speak with me, so I said o.k. Basically Ash told me that he liked me and I said I was sorry so he dashed off into the night" May explained gasping for air
" So what your saying is Ash ran away at night, in the rain, with no pokemon!!" Max basically yelled
"Ash didn't have his pokemon!?" May asked
"Umm yeah May they are still in Ash's tent, and so is Pikachu" said Max
"Oh no we gotta find him" May said sounding extremely worried
"Calm down May" said Max I mean I thought you didn't like him like that?
"Shut up Max. Im just worried that's all" May exclaimed
May was giving Max such a glare it was as if she was actually using the attack
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"Max could you please go get some more water?" asked Brock politely
"fine. Be right back guys." Max said kinda downcast
"May do you like Ash?" questioned Brock
"BROCK!! Haven't we been over this already?! I don't know if I like him!" May said obviously annoyed
"Three simple questions. 1 who are you thinking the most about right now? 2 who do you look up to the most? And 3 who always cheers you up when your down?" said Brock
"Umm I thinking the most about Ash, I look up to Ash the most, and Ash is the person who cheers me up the most. Wait one second! How's this supposed to determine if I like Ash or not?" May questioned with disbelief
"If all of the answers are the same person, than you like them! It's as simple as that!" Brock explained to May
May looked redder than a lump of coal that just got hit by a blast burn, to say the least
"I-I-I like Ash?... Wow... um... but now what I mean he thinks I don't like him but I guess I really do" May asked dumbfounded
"May I was kidding that doesn't really mean you like Ash. If you really want to know if you like him you must look inside to determine that for yourself" Brock remarked
"Well it will probably take me a while to figure out if I like him or not" May concluded
GRUMBLE...
"Brock what was that" asked May
"So Ash how long have you been there?" questioned Brock
May instantly went a deep shape of red
'Huh? Why am I blushing? I never blush when i'm around Ash, weird'
" I don't know I just woke up" Ash, very drowsily replied
"Hey guys umm.... im sorry for running away earlier.." Ash told his friends
"It's all good Ash" Brock told Ash making him feel 100 times better
"Yeah we forgive you Ash" May told him
"Tha-thank you guys!" Ash said
"No problem Ash" Brock replied
"Well I think we should go try and find Max" suggested May
"sure" Brock and Ash replied in unison
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"Gosh, where in the world is Max?!" May said sounding irritated with the situation
right then the heroes heard a particularly familer shriek
"MAX!!" The three said in unison
"I think he's over there!" Ash confidentially said
"AHHHHHH!!!!!" shrieked May
Ash looked on in horror as three houndours surrounded May cornering her escape possibilities
"May no! GO PIKACHU!!!!" Screeched Ash
(A/D uh.. this is the first pokemon battle iv'e written so it's probably not good..)
" All right , first off Pikachu use rain dance (a/d: yeah I know he can't really learn that but it's my fanfic so.. he can learn it)
The clouds completely covered the area and opened up. In a matter of seconds it was pouring, absolutely pouring.
"Pikachu use THUNDER!!!!" ordered Ash
BAM the houndours were weak from the rain but the thunder bolt caused them to instantly faint on impact
"Nice combo Ash" Brock told Ash
"Thanks Brock. Hey May are you o.k.?" Asked a worried Ash
"Umm yeah I am, thanks Ash" May reassured Ash
"Hey it's Max!!" Brock pointed out
"Hey guys thanks for getting rid of those Houndours" said Max
"So, Brock, where is our next destination?" asked Ash
"Fortree (eh, I think that's how you spell it?) City, your 6th badge if I'm correct?" Brock stated
"ah.. yeah it's gonna be my 6th badge, I'm definatly gonna win!!" Ash roared with confidencee
"Well It's been a long day and i'm tired, so how 'bout we head back to camp?" Brock suggested
"You bet!!!" The others agreed in unison
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"Night everyone" Ash said yawning
"Night Ash" May replied also yawning
"Yeah night guys" Max joined in
"We better go to bed now 'cause we have to leave early tomarrow morning...that includes you two, Ash and May" Brock stated
Ash and May both started to blush lightly
'OH MY GOD!!!! Why do I keep blushing when ever Ash's name is mentioned?! I better sleep on it'
END OF
CHAPTER
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