I know I said I wouldn't rewrite it for awhile, but I lot interest in Shadow, so aren't you happy? I'll make it longer and try and add more detail. I was happy with the idea just not execution.
It was a nice morning in Hollywood, well, as nice as it gets with all the people around, when a young woman with strawberry red hair came tearing through the side walk. She earned glares from people who where unlucky enough to be standing in her path. She was screaming excuses as to why she was late, they had to do with "reality TV" and how it was addicting. She was dressed in a gray skirt and shirt with a red ribbon on the front that matched the ribbons tying her hair in pig tails and she was carrying a chocolate brown school bag. Yes, it was none other than Zoey Hanson, and she was very late for school, as usual.
After her dash to school, Zoey must have been tired, for she had fallen asleep during her first class. The teacher was writing equations on the board and explaining how to solve them when a yell interrupted her explanations.
"No! I'm not a freak! I'm a Mew Mew! Stop laughing!"
"Zoey. Zoey!" she yelled at the sleeping Mew.
When there was no sign that Zoey had woken up, she walked over to the desk the sleeping Zoey was at, with her book in hand, and tapped the sleeping girl's head with it.
"Ow! Huh?"
With that, the whole class erupted into a roar of laughter.
"I can't believe you fell asleep again Zoey, and you where yelling stuff again" Zoey's blond friend Meg informed her. It was now the end of the day, and they where strolling home along with their brunette companion. Well at least Zoey's friends where, she had to go work at Café Mew Mew.
"Oh how embarrassing…" Zoey mumbled
It was not a nice evening at Café Mew Mew. It was packed and Zoey was doing all the work. Bridgett was too busy breaking plates, Kiki doing her tricks, Corina drinking her tea, and Renee was no where to be found. Zoey was running from table to table taking orders, then dashing to the kitchen, dodging flying plates, getting some fresh pastries, and then running them to the tables. She did not look very happy. Some of the customers even feared that she would throw the delicious sweet treats at them to vent her anger. Though as tempting as that might have been for Zoey, she didn't.
Finally it was the end of the work day, and Zoey was looking forward to going home and sleeping. They just had to sweep and wipe down the tables. Luckily for Zoey, Renee had decided to show up and things where going a bit faster, when Elliot decided to come out of the cave known as "The Lab" or simply "the basement of Café Mew Mew"
"Well finally you show up, why you couldn't come to help earlier?" an angry Zoey demanded.
"I didn't come to help. We need you in the lab. There's something we need you guys to check out"
Zoey sighed, and followed Elliot into the basement along with the others. Well there went her evening of sleeping at home.
Well it's a lot better isn't it? Please review!
