The re-write of My Cinderella!

I do not own Kingdom Hearts!

I hope it sounds ok!

I'm sorry to all those who we're really waiting for chapter 5,

but I had to much writers block and I messed up the story . _ .

anyways, hope you enjoy!

"Watch out!" cried the young prince to his princess. The young boy swung a wooden sword at the dressed up pirate as they battled.

"Ha ha, you missed Roxas!" teased the pirate. Watching to two boys go at it, a little girl giggled happily as she acted out her character; the damsel in distress. Dress up in a long light blue and sparkled dress with a perfectly tied pearl bow, was a little girl about the age of seven, same as the youngest boy. She may had been the same age, but she was a few inches shorter, with light platinum blonde hair that hung to one side, shaping her pale, blushing cheeks and dark blue eyes that shined. Laughter filled the room mostly with the loud voice of an older red haired boy with emerald green eyes, and in a captain Jack Sparrow costume.

The red head laughed and ran over to the little princess. "Looks like I got little Namine!" he announced proudly and put the fake wooden sword to her neck. Gasping at the fact she didn't see the pirate coming she wiggled, trying to get away from him.

"Let her go!" The prince called.

"Not a chance, I get the Princess this time! Muhahaha" Axel said, doing his evil pirate laugh.

"Let me go Axel," Namine tried once again to wiggle away from the wooden sword and looked over to her prince, "Help Roxas!"

Getting angry, Roxas charged at Axel, only to be stopped when the sword pushed closer to her neck tiny fragile neck. Sweat trickled down her forehead. If he cut her throat, she'd be dead! Slowly backing away, Axel pulled Namine and her fearful eyes, towards his ship, which was a box. Namine began to wiggle more, trying to get free, only to be held in place be Axel.

"Let her go evil pirate!" hissed Roxas.

"Roxas!" she began teary eyed. Namine wanted her prince.

Axel pushed lightly, knocking the girl into the box, or the ship and stood proudly.

"Now let's go princess to my homeland and get married!" Grinned the red haired boy evilly and turned around.

Roxas saw his chance once Axel had turned around and sprinted towards him. Opening his arms, he wrapped them around the older, taller boy and pulled him down to the ground

"What the- ohff!" Axel fell and waved his hands in the air trying to grab something, as he was tackled by the young blonde male.

"Yay!" happily giggled Namine as Roxas crawled over to her and pushed her out of the box.

"Eep!" the blonde female screeched and she fell and crashed to the floor laughing, standing up and headed towards Roxas.

Roxas held onto Namine's hand once they reached each other, tightly so she never lefted.

"The prince always wins!" Roxas yelled proudly but was tackled by Axel as they began to wrestle on the floor. All three laughed together as they played in the play room of the real stone castle. After a few minutes, Namine got bored. Raising an eyebrow as both started to get back up again, only to see Roxas was about to get revenge and tackle Axel back. Running up behind him, Namine wrapped her arms around the prince and held him still as he missed his chance.

"Looks like the princess is betraying her prince!"Axel laughed and tackled both of them to the floor.

"We found Terra's candy storage run!" Running into the play room was a brunette haired boy that happened to be Roxas's twin, and a girl with short red hair that was Namine's best friend.

"Sweet!" yelled Roxas as he helped Namine up and left Axel to help himself.

"SORA, KAIRI GET BACK HERE!" boomed a voice from the hallway getting closer. The five little kids gasped and began to run.

"To the tree house!" Screamed the twins and ran towards a doorway. Sora held onto the red haired girls' hand, as she was dressed up in a yellow dress, exactly like Namine's. Her haired was red and to her shoulders, framing her fair skin and light blue eyes.

"Kairi when did you get here?" asked Namine gasping for air as they ran down the hall lit by sunlight from the windows.

"When Sora began to run for his life! We're all so dead!" Kairi laughed as they ran.

Kairi and Namine had been best friends before they even meant the two princes of the Kingdom of Light. Kairi had rescued Namine from other kids picking on her. The young amber head was her very first friend. About two years later did they actually meet the two princes and befriended them. That's also when at first, Roxas couldn't get Namine's name right, so he gave her the nick name Cinderella, until he figured it out.

Running towards the biggest, oldest, tree in the royal garden that was filled with rainbow after rainbow of colored flowers, in the distance, they were blocked by two boys. One was a very tall compared to the five little ones. His hair was a chocolate brown, starting to be built with muscle and with the same eyes as Sora and Roxas. Next to him was a kid, Axel's age, with silver hair and aqua eyes.

Sora stopped in horror seeing who stood next to his and Roxas' (grammar check anyone?) older brother, Terra.

"Riku you traitor!" Sora and Roxas yelled together.

Riku stared at both and answered innocently, "He made me Sora," he glared at the blonde prince and he got a glare back. Riku and Roxas never liked each other for one simple reason, they both wanted Namine to play with them. Terra snatched a crimson candy box away from the boys and began to walk off leaving Riku behind.

Silence filled the garden as Terra disappeared back into the huge castle of sliver stone and a cream colored brick. "So…. what you guys playing?" Asked Riku.

"None of your business-"Roxas began to spit at the older boy, but was cut off quickly by Sora.

"'Prince and Princess'." He explained.

Riku nodded, signaling he understood perfectly what they we're playing. "Can I be Namine's Prince?" The silver haired boy asked. Namine stared at him with her big blue eyes and slowly moved closer to Roxas. Truth be told, she never liked playing with Riku as her prince charming. He'd push her around and order her around. If she did anything wrong he'd yell at her to the point she'd cry. Not only that but he'd always start fights with Roxas over the littlest things.

"Sorry, spot taken by me," quickly steamed Roxas, taking the little blonde princess's hand in his, earning a light blush and a gentle smile from his Cinderella.

"No one asked you Rock sack "the silver haired boy spat back.

"You asked," the blonde prince replied.

"Why don't you just go be another pirate? You're always the price for Namine!"Riku rolled his eyes.

"Because I don't want to be! Plus, she doesn't want to play with you, she wants me!" Roxas began to blush at his words and gripped Cinderella's hand tighter," and I want to play with her too," he admitted and glared.

"You always want to play with her. It's like you-" Riku stopped and a smirk formed on his face," You have a crush on her,"he finished, sticking his hands in his black shorts.

"I do not, she's my best friend," Roxas blushed bright red.

"I bet you wanna' marry her too!" Laughed the silver haired boy.

"Ew!" Hissed Namine and Roxas at the same time.

"He's my best friend Riku! We can't marry each other!" replied Namine.

"So? He still liked you," busted out in a hysterical laughter.

Although deep down inside, not realizing it at her age, she really hoped Roxas did want to marry her someday.

"Do not!" cried Roxas.

"Do to!" as the two boys fought back with words, like playing catch with a ball. After a few more times of tossing the word ball at each other, Riku changed it a bit.

"Well if you're not going to marry her, I will" he yelled proudly and smiled at Namine, who only glared in disgust.

"Take that back!" screamed Roxas not liking Riku's comment. Both of the boys began to build up in rage, hating each other's guts.

"Make me!" Riku challenged and pushed Roxas onto the soft healthy grass. The blonde boy rounded his fists on the ground, scooping up some dirt and swung his arm, letting the earth cover Riku's aquatic eyes.

"You little-"as Riku began to speak he was tackled by the blonde prince. Both began to roll all over the dirty floor, being covered in grass stains and brown earth. Gaining control, Riku sat on top of Roxas for a second and punched his sapphire eye. "Roxas!" Screamed Namine, terrifed once the wound was inflicted on her prince. Tears began to roll down the tiny girl's blue orbs as she stood there and watched. Thankfully, Roxas recovered and had the silver haired boy back on the ground, as the blonde prince took control.

Kairi cried softly in the background from the fighting, being comforted by the brunette prince. "Riku stop!" Sora yelled, but only to be ignored, as the older boy gained control and was about to punch the blonde boy once again.

"NO!" Screamed the little Cinderella and quickly grabbed the silver haired boys arm and tried to stop him as Axel pulled Roxas out from Riku. Not knowing who was holding onto him, Riku turned around delivered the punch meant for Roxas and hit the girl clinging to him.

Everything went silent as silver haired boy realized what he just did. Behind him, hiding away her eye with her small pale hands, drops fell from her other eye that was seen.

"Leave Roxas alone" she whispered in a hurtful voice, almost pleading, while slowly backing away. She was scared to be hit at again.

"I'm sorry Namine! Roxas started it-"she back away even more with more tears running down her small angelic face, and also cut off by an adult voice.

"What is going on here!" spoke a sharp female voice.

A tall woman with long brown hair the laid gracefully around her shoulders and with one sky blue and one emerald eyes, stood high above them all. Staring at all of them she asked what happened running towards Namine and her injured eye, calming her down. "Riku wanted play with us and wanted to be Namine's prince, but Roxas was already, and then started to tease Roxas and he and Roxas started fighting, your highness," Axel started to explained. The queen hearing the red haired boy looked around the scene. The young amber haired girl was Kairi from being scared and Sora trying to calm her both her son and his friend both showing the signs of a black eye and Axel staying clear from Riku and glaring at him.

"Riku Kinzo, I think you should head home. As well as all of you, it's been a long day and you all look tired." The queen spoke gently and took Riku's hand as he began to sob.

"But Mom, Namine and Kairi are staying here the night." Replied Roxas as he picked himself off the ground and walked over to the crying Namine and held her hand. Once he did, the little princess began to calm down even more. Sora and Roxas's mother only nodded. "Alright, as long as there is no more fights. Now go get your selves cleaned up, dinner will be ready soon" she smiled and walked away with the hiccupping Riku as he cried being led away by the queen.

Roxas and Namine hadn't spoken the whole way to his room. Usually when Namine or Kairi spent the night, Namine slept in Roxas's bed and Kairi with Sora. It's not like they were going to do anything at seven years old, plus they had sleepovers all the time ever since they all meant. Once they made it to his door, he opened it and sacrificed it to the world's eyes. A light, creamy brown walled room with pictures taped around a desk he, Namine, Kairi, Axel, and Sora drew. Everything else was black and white, except the oak wood dressers and bed frame and a cream colored carpet, adding a copper color to it. His king sized bed was decorated black and white checkered pattern. It also was covered in blankets. One was a red with keyblades over it and another one was dark blue with paopu fruits covering it. The blue one was Namine's.

"Are you ok Roxas," she spoke in a little voice. Glancing at her he put his hand over his hurt blue eye.

"Yeah, don't worry. Riku's just a big fat jerk, that's all," he complained and stared at her, "What about you? You got hit harder than me." He looked at her in worry.

Namine giggled and nodded in agreement. "I'm fine."

After both grabbed a change of clothes and went into different rooms. Roxas his took his bed room and Namine took his bathroom that was connected to his room, seeing she also had to go potty. The blond haired prince put on a black vest that held his lucky charm for the zipper's end, and black pants. He didn't bother to put on shoes since the castle was his house anyway and it wasn't like he was going outside again day, after what happened. Namine came out of the bathroom holding the blue dress that had been replaced but a white long sleeve shirt and blue jeans with baby pick socks.

"You look pretty Nami!" he complemented to his best friend.

"Thanks" she blushed smiling and dropped the dress as both headed towards the dining area.

The pale full moon began to raise along with the silver stars the coated the sky above. Darkness became quieter as everyone began to get ready for bed and close their eyes, waiting for the next day to light their way. Laugher filled the room as the two blondes jumped on the black bed with ice packed clinging to their eyes, to stop swelling.

"Not you guys too," sighed the king and queen of Twilight, smiling at them both, they just had this problem with Kairi and Sora. All they got in response was a giggling.

"Alright Namine, Roxas, time for bed" said the king as Roxas' parents came to tuck them in. Picking up a black pj shirt, the queen slipped it on her son, finishing his outfit for bed.

"Hold still Roxas," complaining as he wiggled around.

"But Dad we're not tired yet!" he whined and pouted.

"Roxas," his blond haired father said becoming more serious.

"Fine…"the young prince sat down and put his pj's on, like the blonde girl already blue pj's.

Crawling under the covers side by side they received hugs and kisses from both the adults. "Night mom, night dad" "Night King Tidus and Queen Yuna" they said was the lights were turned out, making the pale blond girl jumped.

"You ok Namine?" Roxas asked worried and sat up with her.

"Hows your eye doing?" he asked.

"Mine's good, and yours?" she asked; as she took her's off to sleep.

"Mine's doing better to," he grinned.

Curling into a ball she confessed. "Roxas, I'm still scared of the dark".

The young prince only chuckled and hugged her. "I'll protect you, I promise" he smiled. Namine smiled and cuddled next to the blonde boy as they sank back onto the pillows. "Ok, if you promise," she replied and kissed his cheek making him blush. "Night Roxas, sweet dreams" she yawned to her best friend. "Night Namine" Roxas yawned back and made sure she was tightly in his arms. Next few minutes, Namine was fast asleep in Roxas's arms and him asleep as well.

That was the last time he saw her. Twelve years had passed since Namine had been stole during the silent night at the palace. Only thing that was left was the Paopu Fruit charm that lay peacefully next to his head when his blue eyes opened; stolen from his arms that swore to protect her. Stolen and hidden from his heart that craved her. After his artist had been kidnapped years ago, Roxas finally figured out why he couldn't like another girl in any type of way but a friend. No best friends, no crush, no love. Those all belonged to Namine. He was in love with her till this day.

Sora and Kairi had been happily married for a few months now, one of the only things that would make him smile now. Sora had the choice to marry whoever he wished, so did Roxas. If he could, but it wasn't possible. She was gone. His Cinderella.

Roxas was now betrothed to Princess Selphie, of the Hope kingdom. Sadly enough both hated each other. She was a slut for all he knew. The blonde prince had already caught her with more than twenty other guys. It was fact that Selphie wasn't a virgin anymore. (sorry to all Selphie lovers!)

Roxas looked up towards the light blue sky, wondering if he'd ever see Namine again. Where'd she go. Sighing, the prince closed his bright sapphire eyes and let the breeze take away his spirit to think. Gripping for his life, he held the little golden star fruit, connected with a silver chain. The only thing besides, his brother and his brother's wife, his getting older parents, his friends and people, this was all that matter to him.

OK this was the re-write of My Cinderella first Chapter. I hope it was better since I changed it up a bit.

Hope it's not boring.

Reveiw please? It would make me so happy :'3

No I'm not really happy with this chapter because I've writen better but

I happy with it enough it will work. ...Hope it's actually not wrose than the other one though.

That would suck.

anyways I forgot to mention, I've kind of been grounded for a long time because of

to much computer time (since I'm on here til 2 a.m reading a lot of your guys amazing stories)

and grades...I hate biology ; w ;

-Love passions