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Chapter 1Late in the evening, Sasuke heard a voice saying, "HELP ME!" Then he
noticed that the voice he was hearing was Orochimaru's voice. Then he
suddenly ran through where the voice came from and then he found him
that Itachi captured Orochimaru. Orochimaru said crying, "Sasuke,
leave me here, he'll capture you and make you his servant. Don't worry
about me." Itachi warned," If you won't come with me, he will die
in front of you. Do you like it?" Sasuke exclaimed, "Oh, forget it. I am going home..."
Then Sasuke woke up and it is 7:45 am. "Darn it! I am late. The team 7
have a reunion at 8:00." Sasuke shouted suprisingly. Sasuke take a bath
for 15 mins. When he came out he rushed and put on his clothes and comb
his hair put the forehead protector and go out on the house.
Outside the house, he saw Sakura also rushing too. Then he shouted"Hey, Naruto! " When Naruto heard the voice she noticed that the
voice was Sasuke's. Then he suddenly stop and look who is calling him.
Then, he saw Sasuke waving at him at his house and saw running towards
him. Sasuke ask, "Are you late too?" "Yes" Naruto said. Then Sasuke ask him
again, "Would you like to come with me?" Naruto said "ok,"
Suddenly, Sasuke remembered his weird dream about Orochimaru and his older brother, Itachi.
Well, this is the first chapter…….. Did you like it? Well, is it exciting?
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