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"So shall we start the story?" I asked.
There was Once upon a time in another place called the yellow kingdom. It was so evil that no one had even dared to try to face it. The ruler was me. I'm Alfred F. Jones. I'm only fourteen. I wasn't even remotely the nicest person, if anything I was one of the meanest. There were so many furniture's in my room alone. I smiled as Matthew Williams my twin brother fussed over my outfit. I smiled to him. He was my most loyal servant, he always did what I wanted. We walked to the throne room. I had to listen to the annoying townspeople talk of their issues. After that long boring interval we finally got ready for bed. I went to Josephene my horse. I began petting her and rubbing her nose. I always got her the best of the best, because all the riches were mine naturally. I gave her one last kiss on her nose. "Sleep well Josephene." I whispered. I set out to my room for a good night's sleep. When I woke up it was a normal day. Until I heard something that made my anger boil. I called an emergency war plan.
"My Prince what about the money, we are short of it?" One of the people around the table told me as I came into the room.
"That's not a fearful thing in the least." I told them walking to my seat. "We could just take it from the townspeople." I hadn't met eyes with any of them yet. I looked up to them. I looked super frightening. I held a knife in my hands. I turned toward them, raising my knife. I plunged it straight into the green country. "They have defied me, so make them tidy up my castle." I declared my hand over the picture. My face was grim. I left the room. I went to my bed, since it was rather late.I fell asleep. I dreamed of my memory's.
Mattie and I were about 5 and the adults thought it would be funny to dress me up as a girl. "Mattie, stop saying such things." I ordered.
"But the way they dressed you up like a girl is just so sweet." Mattie replied. I began hitting him, I was holding back a lot. "Al. Stop it." He exclaimed. I looked at him
"Apologize." I declared. Hitting a bit harder.
"Fine. Fine. I'm sorry!" he exclaimed. "Good." I stopped hitting and smiled. I hugged him.
The memory shifted. We were now 13. I was getting fitted for my regular outfit. When the door cracked open.
"My prince... Um..." I looked over to Mattie's stuttering face. He was bright red. I looked down.
'Oh.' I thought. My face was equally bright red. I heard the door shut.
I remembered a time when I was very little. I sat on my mothers lap as she introduced me as the Prince. I awoke to noise. I was instantly on guard. What happened next I expected not. "Prince Alfred F. Jones, you are being arrested then executed as you have so many before you. You shall soon be where you belong in hell." the red Chinese swordsman declared.
"So disrespectful." was my reply. I sat in the jail awaiting my death at 3 o'clock. I had no loyalty anymore. I was brought out. My crimes were read in front of all the townspeople.
"For destroying the green kingdom, making our people suffer for so long, killing the boy of green that was to be wed to the Prince of Blue, and killing so many innocent people, your penalty is death by the guillotine." I got pushed to my knees by the red man. "Do you have any last words?" the red man asked me.
"Yes I do, It's tea time." those were my last words. I said them with a smile.
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