Hello! Okay this is my first fanfic...ever! I thought I'd try the poetry first and see how that works out. I have an actual story in the works that I might post.(If you guys like this) Anyway, I don't have any kind of clever disclaimer, so let's just say I don't own Yugioh and never will(sigh)Oh, one more thing. This is Ryou to his yami.

This control you have over my body,

Does not reach every part of me.

You can control what I do and sometimes think,

You laugh at my pain, pain that you have caused.

But deep down, the things that separate us,

My memories, my past, my innocence,

My stubborn will that says one day I'll be free,

Those cannot be taken away.

So who is the one with the control...really?

Please review! Also, this is a revised copy of this...I hope its easier to read! And thank you Katia-chan so much for reviewing for this! I've been thinking of removing this for good...but I guess I'll keep it up. Till next time!