Another story of mine I corrected because the English was just horrible. I hope it's better now and more enjoyable to read. Have fun reading.
I was sitting outside of my house. I was cold. But I didn't care. I looked up at the moon and the stars. It was full moon. I thought about Jack. When I met him for the first time I couldn't imagine that I could care so much about him. I really liked the way he made me smile and the way he said those ironic things. I loved his sarcastic self and how he pretended to be stupid but he was smart really smart he could fool the others but he couldn't fool me. I knew how smart he was. He was just Jack and I really liked Jack. I was in love with him. I tried not to feel what I felt. I tried to pretend that we were just friends but it was impossible for me. We were more than just friends. We have been more than friends for a long time. I loved him. He was the love of my life. I wanted to spend the rest of my life with him. I have known that since he looked at me for the first time with his warm brown eyes. I was lost in my thoughts and I didn't realize that someone had come to my house. I heard a noise and I looked up. It was Jack. Yeah I called him Jack in my thoughts for a long time but I wasn't brave enough to do it in realife it was a way of keeping the distance for me.
"Sir?"
He looked into my eyes and then he sat down next to me. I was still cold. Jack took his jacket and put it over Sam's shoulder. Immediately I felt warmer but it wasn't just Jacks jacket it was his look and his body and everything. His look was warm but still kind of sad. He looked really deep into my eyes. My heart made a jump. Was he going to miss me? Part of me wished he would. It sounded really cruel but I wanted that he missed me.
He smiled at me: "Your last night on earth, Carter."
I nodded.
He took something out of his jeans pocket. It was a casket. It was little and black. He gave it to me and said: "So you never forget where you can find me."
Inside of the casket was a chain with the Stargate symbol of the earth. I was speechless this was the most beautiful thing a man ever gave to me.
It took a while for me to get my voice back: "This is so beautiful, Jack." He smiled at me. He put his arm around my shoulders and I put my head against his chest. For a while we just sat there. After a bit of time I said hesitant: "I should go to sleep tomorrow is an important day."
"I know," he said. We both stood up.
"Thanks Sir," I said.
"I'm going to miss you really much, Sam."
"I am going to miss you too."
I hugged him.
Then he said: "Have a great time in Atlantis."
I smiled at him and said: "I will…I will."
He stopped hugging me.
"Goodnight, Sir."
"Goodnight, Carter."
He went to his car and I went inside my house. Tomorrow at this time I will be in Atlantis. This is going to be a great time. And it was a great chance for my career.
