This is my first beyblade fic, and I haven't seen that many episodes, so
please don't flame me if it sucks. Although I'm a "Kenshin #1 fan", I have
an even bigger obsession with Ray. Ray in my wallet, Ray on my wall, Ray on
my computer, Ray on my fic!
Disclaimer: I don't own Beyblade, and I especially don't own Ray (oh man!) or Kai (bummer...) All I own are 5 beyblades and a Mariah figure, soon to own a Ray figure.
Broken Hearts
Chapter 1: Hurt
Ray sat darkly in a corner hugging his knees close, his raven-black hair obscuring his eyes. He wouldn't look up for anything, and he didn't seem like he would listen to anyone either.
"Dude, what do you think's wrong with Ray?" Max asked the rest of the Bladebreakers, who sat concerned in the living room of their hotel room. He only received clueless expressions from his teammates.
"I don't know. He's been like that ever since... I dunno...yesterday?" Tyson commented, and it was true. Ever since Ray had gone out somewhere yesterday, when he came back he was like that; sad, dark and ignoring everyone.
"Do you think we should ask him?" Kenny asked, but the others didn't know what to answer.
"I'll talk to him." Kai offered, and the others nodded. Although Kai didn't seem too friendly with people, he had come to be like a brother to Ray, and Ray was about the only person to who he would say more than four words.
"We'll leave the room, if it helps." Max said, as he pulled Tyson and Kenny out the room, leaving Kai and Ray alone. Kai went over to Ray and sat next to him.
"Hey. What's wrong, buddy?" Kai asked, but Ray only turned to face away from him. "Come on. You know whatever it is, you can tell me." He said, putting his hand on Ray's shoulder.
Slowly, Ray turned to face him. Kai was shocked at what he saw. There were gleaming tears in Ray's eyes. He didn't remember ever seeing tears in Ray's eyes.
"Whoa, Ray, what happened?" he asked, but Ray hugged his knees closer to him, and his hair obscured his eyes once more.
"Why would you care?" he said bitterly. He sounded weak and feeble compared to when he was in a battle.
"Because I am your teammate and friend, and everybody else is really worried about you too." Kai said calmly.
"So?" Ray replied in his sour tone, and Kai sighed.
"We care about you." He said, and suddenly, Ray quickly turned to face him.
"Yeah? Well she sure as hell doesn't!" he yelled, his tears spilling from his eyes. Kai evaluated the situation. Well, he hadn't gotten very far, but on the bright side, he had found out something. Ray went back to his original position.
"Ray." Kai said firmly, but Ray ignored him. He was once more thinking about it, and how it all happened...
Flashback
"Mariah, I-I've been trying to tell you this for a very long time, but I couldn't. I.. Mariah, I...I love you." Ray had said softly, looking down. Unexpectedly, a hard slap hit him square on the cheek. He looked bewildered at Mariah, while putting his hand to his now swollen cheek.
"How DARE you!" Mariah yelled, tears forming in her eyes. It was like Ray had lost his tongue, he couldn't mutter a word. Mariah was looking at him angrily, the tears that had formed now spilling down her soft cheeks. "How dare you say you love me after everything that's happened? You abandoned us, Ray! You left us, and you sure as hell found quick replacement for us!" she said angrily.
"Mariah... I..." he started, but she didn't let him finish
"You left the team, you left us, you left ME, you traitor! How could I EVER love someone like you?" she screamed, then turning around with her arms crossed over her chest. Those last words, they wounded him deeply, they broke his heart. Not only had he been rejected, but she had also stepped all over his heart, and it was like Mariah had sent her Galux to rip his poor heart apart.
"I...I understand." He said weakly. Not able to stand it, he walked away, his eyes obscured by his hair. And even in that darkness, you could see shiny glimmering drops appearing in the corner of his eyes.
End of Flashback
"Ray, I need you to tell me what's wrong with you!" Kai said, getting desperate.
"It wouldn't change a thing if I told you or not." Ray answered back, looking at him once more.
"Would you tell me if I said 'please'?" Kai asked, his tone of voice sounding genuinely concerned for his friend.
"Tell me, how would YOU be if the girl that you love, after you tell her your true feelings, slaps you, calls you a traitor and screams at you that she could never love someone like you?" Ray said softly, and Kai's eyes went wide.
"Damn, Ray. You don't mean to tell me SHE did THAT to YOU!" Kai exclaimed, unable to believe, to process those last words Ray said. Mariah? Doing THAT to Ray?
"Hell yeah, she did. Now leave me alone." Ray said as he got up and disappeared into his room, leaving Kai behind, still dumbfounded.
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Ayy! I know it was short and it sucked! Oh well, please review and let me know if I should continue! This is kinda hard for me, having seen about two or three episodes only, although I've surfed trough many an episode guide. Well, since it's my first BB try, when you review (IF you review. Please do.) please be gentle. ^_^x
Disclaimer: I don't own Beyblade, and I especially don't own Ray (oh man!) or Kai (bummer...) All I own are 5 beyblades and a Mariah figure, soon to own a Ray figure.
Broken Hearts
Chapter 1: Hurt
Ray sat darkly in a corner hugging his knees close, his raven-black hair obscuring his eyes. He wouldn't look up for anything, and he didn't seem like he would listen to anyone either.
"Dude, what do you think's wrong with Ray?" Max asked the rest of the Bladebreakers, who sat concerned in the living room of their hotel room. He only received clueless expressions from his teammates.
"I don't know. He's been like that ever since... I dunno...yesterday?" Tyson commented, and it was true. Ever since Ray had gone out somewhere yesterday, when he came back he was like that; sad, dark and ignoring everyone.
"Do you think we should ask him?" Kenny asked, but the others didn't know what to answer.
"I'll talk to him." Kai offered, and the others nodded. Although Kai didn't seem too friendly with people, he had come to be like a brother to Ray, and Ray was about the only person to who he would say more than four words.
"We'll leave the room, if it helps." Max said, as he pulled Tyson and Kenny out the room, leaving Kai and Ray alone. Kai went over to Ray and sat next to him.
"Hey. What's wrong, buddy?" Kai asked, but Ray only turned to face away from him. "Come on. You know whatever it is, you can tell me." He said, putting his hand on Ray's shoulder.
Slowly, Ray turned to face him. Kai was shocked at what he saw. There were gleaming tears in Ray's eyes. He didn't remember ever seeing tears in Ray's eyes.
"Whoa, Ray, what happened?" he asked, but Ray hugged his knees closer to him, and his hair obscured his eyes once more.
"Why would you care?" he said bitterly. He sounded weak and feeble compared to when he was in a battle.
"Because I am your teammate and friend, and everybody else is really worried about you too." Kai said calmly.
"So?" Ray replied in his sour tone, and Kai sighed.
"We care about you." He said, and suddenly, Ray quickly turned to face him.
"Yeah? Well she sure as hell doesn't!" he yelled, his tears spilling from his eyes. Kai evaluated the situation. Well, he hadn't gotten very far, but on the bright side, he had found out something. Ray went back to his original position.
"Ray." Kai said firmly, but Ray ignored him. He was once more thinking about it, and how it all happened...
Flashback
"Mariah, I-I've been trying to tell you this for a very long time, but I couldn't. I.. Mariah, I...I love you." Ray had said softly, looking down. Unexpectedly, a hard slap hit him square on the cheek. He looked bewildered at Mariah, while putting his hand to his now swollen cheek.
"How DARE you!" Mariah yelled, tears forming in her eyes. It was like Ray had lost his tongue, he couldn't mutter a word. Mariah was looking at him angrily, the tears that had formed now spilling down her soft cheeks. "How dare you say you love me after everything that's happened? You abandoned us, Ray! You left us, and you sure as hell found quick replacement for us!" she said angrily.
"Mariah... I..." he started, but she didn't let him finish
"You left the team, you left us, you left ME, you traitor! How could I EVER love someone like you?" she screamed, then turning around with her arms crossed over her chest. Those last words, they wounded him deeply, they broke his heart. Not only had he been rejected, but she had also stepped all over his heart, and it was like Mariah had sent her Galux to rip his poor heart apart.
"I...I understand." He said weakly. Not able to stand it, he walked away, his eyes obscured by his hair. And even in that darkness, you could see shiny glimmering drops appearing in the corner of his eyes.
End of Flashback
"Ray, I need you to tell me what's wrong with you!" Kai said, getting desperate.
"It wouldn't change a thing if I told you or not." Ray answered back, looking at him once more.
"Would you tell me if I said 'please'?" Kai asked, his tone of voice sounding genuinely concerned for his friend.
"Tell me, how would YOU be if the girl that you love, after you tell her your true feelings, slaps you, calls you a traitor and screams at you that she could never love someone like you?" Ray said softly, and Kai's eyes went wide.
"Damn, Ray. You don't mean to tell me SHE did THAT to YOU!" Kai exclaimed, unable to believe, to process those last words Ray said. Mariah? Doing THAT to Ray?
"Hell yeah, she did. Now leave me alone." Ray said as he got up and disappeared into his room, leaving Kai behind, still dumbfounded.
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Ayy! I know it was short and it sucked! Oh well, please review and let me know if I should continue! This is kinda hard for me, having seen about two or three episodes only, although I've surfed trough many an episode guide. Well, since it's my first BB try, when you review (IF you review. Please do.) please be gentle. ^_^x
