This is my first story, harsh or not harsh i would love criticism, and feedback sorry it's so short, it is just a teaser the other ones will be much much longer thanks for reading. 3
"JAKE SWITCH OUT," Finn says as he rolls away and his
brother jumps in slashing at a opening, but right before it
connects the large cucumber monster blocks the attack, and slams
his spear into jakes giant sword hand. "Jake you ok,?"
"yeah switch out," Jake says as he stretch's away and Finn runs
in with his signature battle cry, throwing his sword at it and turning
his hand into a grass sword, as he thrusts forward he sees hes
made a grave mistake. the cucumber rolls and kick's Finn down the Canyon. "AHHHHHHHHH," finn yelled.
