Hello everyone Cherucha here with my very first fan fiction I really hope it's good hard to tell when you are writing know what I mean XD!Anyway Please Just enjoy this short first chapter and I would like critiques as well Thank you now on to the story!
It Was an early summer night though even in the darkness of the night in the sky there was still movement from a huge Black Jet that was around 100 feet long and 60 feet wide black the way it was designed made it look more like a flying fortress than anything else,though with the huge canon's and missile launcher's and a symbol that looked like a gold reef with a huge blazing phoenix over it you could just see that this flying fortress was dangerous and that inside something sinister was going on.
Now Inside the fortress computers lined the walls with people in black suits with the same insignia on it running about or working on the computers and controlling this mass fortress.
Standing at the head in the middle of the Ship was the Woman in charge she had dark smooth yet slightly curly red hair,pierce cold green eye's that were very stern,and her outfit was that almost of a military general only black and dark gold and white baring the same Phoenix insignia just staring at her would send shivers down your spine.
Even than that did not deter one of the men who ran up to her and spoke with a loud clear throat
"Sir we have located the map at the moment the head of the research team is taking it to a place in Montana called Deep Ridge to where we assume he lives."
As the man looks at the rest of the reports to continue even if she appeared that she is paying no mind to him he still went on with his report.
"Are spy and Away team has told us that it is a small town with a total of 31,052 residents,but we have confirmed that he lives right out side the town in a 2 story house with a surrounding 14,000 acre's Sir!"
Even if it did not seem that she was paying attention even if the darkness shadowed some of her face you could still tell she let out a small but satisfied smirk.
"Excellent Jarred we will have what the boss wants soon enough and then with the map we can finally get what we have desired for this long time" Even her voice was cold and harsh,even still it sounded very smooth and nice to listen to even if you could feel the venom in her voice.
Jarred even with her small speech did not flinch an inch though even if he did not show it he knew one wrong move and he would be dead with that thought in his head he decided to speak up once again.
"Sir!What do you want us to do"
With that she turned to him quickly narrowing her eye's and glaring Jarred instantly got a quick glimpse of fear in his eye's and posture hoping that he did not step out of line by saying what he said.
However she quickly let out another smirk and a small chuckle and spoke again only with a bit of happiness and exasperation in her voice how she made that combination work no one will know.
"Simple send Team A to collect are prize from him he is only 1 man it is not like he will be much of a challenge to steal from"
"Yes Sir" Though as Jarred was Turning to leave she stopped him with another small chuckle.
"Jarred how long will it take are team to get to Deep Ridge and apprehend the map from "
"Around 2 days to make the extraction sir!" He quickly replied
At this info her eye's lit up with a sick sense of joy.
"Well that will give him too much time to study and find out too much about the map I would say 2 days gives him too much time"
With a Confused Look Jarred decided to try his luck and ask what she was thinking "Umm Sir?"
"When making the extraction make sure to Kill the Docter!"she let out another small sick giggle as if she had been always wanted to call that order.
"But Sir!Is that necessary I doubt he will be able to figure out much of anything that can hinder us in anyway"He Replied just hoping he would not regret it unfortunately he would within a moment regret what he just said.
Within what seemed like less than a second she had him by the collar her green eye's that almost seem to glow glaring daggers into his own fearful eye's.
With a loud and harsh voice she yelled at him
"Do not EVER QUESTION MY DECISIONS I will not tolerate any loose ends that could threaten are goals,and he might become a lead or a witness,and both of those are very big loose ends."
"So Unless you want to see the pearly gates tonight I suggest you do not question me again!Is that Understood!"
"I...I I understand Sir I will get the team ready for the mission at once Sir!" He replied fast as he was scared for his life and with all right he should be as he knew that she was not afraid to end him as she could always find a new lackey for herself.
However that answer and fear seem to satisfy her enough to calm her down somewhat.
With a low but venomous voice she spoke to him "Good I am glad you understand I hope this will not happen again"
"It will not Sir!"
"Good than your dismissed"
With slow but shaky steps he turned to leave still scared out of his mind but feeling thankful that he was still alive what he did not see was a shadow of a perverted smile of glee on the Womans lip's"Oh and one more thing your fired for questioning my authority"
As she reached down to her belt and pulled something from a holster hooked to her belt revealing a Small silver pistol as fast as she took it out the woman highered the gun took aim and fired.
It happened with the speed of a cheetah the bullet fired and pierced the man right through the heart as he fell to the ground in agony he never had a chance to even Commander never once moving from her spot looked satisfied and smiled at what she did.
Turning around she looked to one of the shocked men at the controls and calming spoke
"You get my order to the Away Team to retrieve the map and get rid of the loose ends... oh,and Get rid of that pathetic mans body I have looked at it enough."
With quick reflexes he quickly answered out of fear of ending up like the poor fallen man
"Sir!Yes Sir I am contacting the Away Team Now"
His quick and clear response satisfied her once again as she turned to face the head of the flying fortress with the smirk on her face she whispered one more thing before returning to silent starting once again
"Soon once the map and the holder are ours we will achieve are goals."
With that the black monster took off and disappeared with the night heading to who knows where,and for what reason unknown.
Wellp I know the first chapter is a bit short however they will get longer around chapter 5 it is just so hard to tell how much is there when writing.Well I have to say if all the chapters are this fun to write I will write them very often XD!Anyway yes the first chapter kinda set's up the plot and introduces us to one of the main villains her name will be revealed later but as you can tell she is not the type to mess around,and to be honest I absolutely love writing her.
I find it fun to write how much of a horrible and evil person she is. Also I know its not mentioned but the animal the woman is well is a deer as this is a Mickey and the gang story as a it would be kind of ironic in that sense that a deer being so cruel.I am sorry that these first few chapters may seem a bit slow,but I need to set up the plot and Characters
I promise after chapter 6 things will really get underway at least more than the introductory chapters Alas nothing can be done about slow beginnings it usually works out in the end.
