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A little info: I'm still a supporter for sasuOC but I'm trying other options x3 Hope you enjoy my EVER first fanfic and EVER first naruOC
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Chapter one: A Diary Entry
Dear Diary,
School life has been very dull ever since my best friend transferred to another school. We were always talking about Naruto all the time, Mito and me. We were crazy about Naruto.
My stepmother yelled at me right after coming back home. She had yet again made a chore list for me. Sigh. Apparently, I'm living with my stepmother and my two twin stepsisters. My father married her only for her wealth; nothing more. He had been away for five years on a business trip. I've forgotten his face after so many years. Even since his depart from home, my stepmother mistreated me and thought of me only as a maid.
It sounds just like 'Cinderella', don't you think? Think again. There is not going to be a prince with a white horse and a fairy godmother in my story.
My first chore was going to the grocery store across the street. When I exited the house, an antique store was in front of me. It was just recently built without service though.
'Maya's store of desires: Make your dreams come true.' That was the title. I might as well give the shop a try, since I have a whole afternoon. For a first timer around here, the shop was very smoky. Maya was seated at the counter, staring at me with her half-lidded blue eyes; surrounded by wrinkles.
I was shocked when she presented me an old cross necklace and said that this was what I desired. I thought she was out of her mind. In the end, I walked out of the shop, holding the necklace. How could I refuse? She was pleading me and telling me that she was going to die soon and this was her only memento from her loved one. Call me stupid and naïve, but I couldn't just ignore the old lady.
I rushed to my room when I reached home. A minute longer outside my room and my twin stepsisters will take the necklace from my possession. Here I am, seated on my chair writing this.
In the end, today…
"Hey, the diary isn't finished yet!!" An annoying voice echoed around the room, followed by the breaking of objects.
Rising from the bed, the patient immediately coughed due the shock she is having.
"W-what the hell are you doing here??!" Itoe almost screamed at the two individuals sitting in front of her bed.
Her attention was soon directed to the disturbing pulling of her sleeve. She was shocked to see blue eyes staring at her.
"Are you really crazy about me? That's what it said in the diary. How do you and this Mito girl know me anyway?" He said, squatting at the side of Itoe's bed.
As the shock was too intense, she fell back on to the bed, accidentally hitting herself on the headboard of the bed. She felt the pain. It wasn't a dream after all.
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