Hi guys! So I decided to try I different perspective on the jedi…. Hope you like it!

Chapter 1:

"Master I have a bad felling about this." the young man said to the older man.

"I do to." the older man said.

The ship had landed in a big grassy field. The two men walked out and started towards the forest. They had been walking for two hours when they heard a rustle in the bushes. The two men looked a each other and then back at the bush when a white fluffy big-eared thing hopped by. The two men sighed but they had sighed too soon a sharp thing tied to a stick flew by almost taking off the young mans' nose.

"I wouldn't move any further." someone said from behind the trees.

A young girl stepped from behind the trees. She looked like she had stepped out of a war zone, her pants were torn on the knees and her tank top was torn at the side and across the back. Her boots were blood-splattered and her hair was dirt filled but in a long blond braid. Her blues eyes were surrounded by bags.

"Who are you?" she asked.

"Can we speak somewhere more privately?" the old man asked.

"Of, course." she said. They walked for a while when they reached a clearing. The clearing was filled with little kids and teenagers running around. The little kids all ran up to the girl.

"Lane your back!"

"Who are those men?"

"We made soup!"

A older boy walked out and hugged the girl.

"We were worried about you!" he said.

"I know, I know." she said. "And I brought some new friends"

She pointed to the two men. The boy looked at us and asked:

"So who are you?"

"I am Qui-Gon Jinn a jedi master." The older man said.

"I am Obi-Wan Kenobi jedi padawan" the young (and cute) one said.

"I am Lane these are my older brothers Klaus, Max, and Niall." The girl said pointing to her three older brothers.

So what does everyone think so far? Let me know which sith lords to add….