F A K E
The disclaimer: We don't own the characters of the show but I own the plot as well as the new characters that do so appear. This is a preview of something that ZuZu and myself wrote for fun last year. This is a bit of the first chapter-review and tell me what you think and I'll put the rest up. It just seemed a waste just staying on a floppy disk.
I hope this is satisfactory.
It was said that their dwelled another being within my blood.
Sometimes I wonder who I really am…
The blood doesn't matter, I have blonde hair, blue eyes-perfect features…nothing dwelled in me.
Who am I?
Even as I stare into crimson eyes so much like my own.
Those eyes see me.
Even though I see that form, covered in blood.
Is that me?
I am me-blood does not define me.
I am me-the mistress of blood.
Our swords cross in an everlasting struggle, steel hitting steel in an ceaseless dance that seems to prevent time from running it's natural course. In this night, this moon that gives it's eerie light I see the real me.
Our sweat and blood fuse on our skin as we dance atop the monument, all innocence drains as we continue in this movement. Is this what I am? Is this what we are, a portion of the other?
What am I
What am I
Who am I if not Ino?
Who am I if not Hinata?
Her hair descends in ripples, fading away from view as the choppy midnight blue pieces fall below the monument-short hair now like my own. My sword sliced cleanly through as she twisted and dodged my attack again, however, I see the annoyance etched in her now crimson eyes. She is angry with me now-not like it matters.
We are not here to be friends. We are hear to end this eternal struggle of Yin and Yang-finally.
Tit for Tat? She's cut off my hair like I did hers…interesting is my other half.
Hinata gracefully jumps back and lifts her swords high, smile on her face.
"It seems that this is indeed and end to it all, is it not Ino?"
Ino lifts her swords as well, the steel glistening in the moons light.
"So it is, Hinata."
In the distance familiar obsidian eyes watched as the two silhouettes charged at one another, as though they were the wind itself.
Steel hit steel.
Who am I if not me?
What am I?
In their last battle they could not help but remember what had truly been and what would never ever be. Their lives leading to this very pinnacle-
It all started one sunny day four years prior when Hinata's father died.
It's a bit strange in the beginning but you'll understand. It's a POV thing.
Yin and Yang they are, both two sides of a coin what a lovely hyperbole.
I didn't post the entire first chapter up either, this is a preview to see if you all like it.
I haven't exactly told ZuZu that I put this up, as she is on vacation, but I don't think she'll mind too much.
This was actually written for our writing class last year…yes I know how dorky could we be but we got a passing grade on it so there!
It gets better I assure you. Before we placed their names I bet you were thinking the blonde was Naruto right?
Did the whole Ino thing throw you for a loop?
Hinata is way OOC-well you'll see why soon enough, there is a reason why she is the way she is…a bit crazy and dark.
And blood? Well you'll understand if I get the chance to put it up.
I'm hoping on more then one review though so we'll see. And the familiar figure? It is not any one person you are thinking of. If you guess right-just e-mail me I don't want to give it away to everyone, then I'll tell you, how about that?
I hope you liked this.
No flames please.
If you don't like it then just get on the page and never read it again.
