Hi its me Dachschaden. I promised to make a different story but I couldn't handle myself and did the sequelae to 'Creatures.' It plays two months after my last story and in First-person perspective of Jonas. Next five chapter are done and ready to upload. So grab your popcorn and read until your death. :)


Months later...

I remember two sentences and I don't know what they mean. Someone told me to protect someone and the other was that I lied about something. When I woke up, this vixen came. She told me about the storys we had but I didn't believe in them. She told me I promised her to go to the academy with her.

Well even when I don't remember, I promised her and that mean I will do it. Today was the 43th day at the academy. We just finished our mornings exercises. "Hey Smith. The instructor wants to talk to you again." a cadet said. "What could it be?" I asked him.

"Don't know." he answered. I just shocked my head. We went back to the academy and as we arrived the instructor was waiting for me in her office. I gave her a salute and didn't spoke. "Come with me, Smith." she said. As she ordered I followed her.

"Is something wrong, Ma'am?" I asked her. "Two things I have to speak with you. The first thing is: how are you doing?" she asked. "I ask because of you hospitalization few months ago." She added. "I'm fine. My memories are still away but my body and mind is fine." I answered. "Why did you join the academy after your hospitalization?" she asked. "Because I promised it a friend before I got hospitalization." I answered. "Okay than I come to the next thing." she said.

"You and Mrs. Fox are the best cadets we ever got in the history of our academy. Even better than the former cadets Wilde and Hopps." she said. "Good to hear. I'm proud to be a cadet on this academy." I said with a proud smile. "Than there comes my question. The ZBI needs good agents and they read this records. They asked me to transfer you to their academy. I got some papers. When you sign it, you are going to be an agent of the ZBI." she said.

I stood there in thoughts and a flashback came to my mind. "I wanted to be a cop as kid too." my own voice said. "No, I'm sorry. It was my dream to become a policeman." I told her. "Well your friend told me the same. But you have time until tomorrow morning for this decision." she said. "Now I come to a third point when I thought about Mrs. Fox." she added.

"How can it be that you two got nearly the same score in every test we gave you." She asked. My body remembered things that helped through physical tests but I can't remember where I trained it. "It's simple. We trained together." I told her. "Even in the theoretical tests?" she asked. "We learned and trained together." I corrected myself.

"How close are you two?" she asked. This question confused me. "Wait this question don't fits in my ears. What do you mean, Ma'am?" I asked. "I asked if you two were in a relationship?" she asked. I just shocked my head. "No, we are just friends. Maybe good friends but it stopps there." I told her. "Okay this was everything I need to know, Smith. she said. "Dismiss." the instructer ordred. "Ma'am." I said and gave another salute and went out of her office.

As I closed the door I heard a familiar voice that asked me a question. "She asked you the same things she asked me, did she?" a vixen asked. "Yes she did." I answered. I looked to the clock. "We got a hour before next class." Mia said and I could hear her stomach snarling. "Did you ate dinner yesterday?" I asked her.

"Nope, we had to run extra rounds because our team lost the soccer match yesterday evening." she told him. "I thought you can't lose." I said and grinned. "Well soccer is a team sport and not for single players. My team was very bad." she said.

"Hey I don't blame you even when I didn't was there. Everyone lose sometimes. Even the best ones." I told her. "Now let us get some breakfast." I added. Mia mouth went upward into a smile and I smiled back.

"Come on, Red-Eye." I told her and walked along the corridor. She surely followed me. I liked to be her friend. Even when I don't remember how we met first. She did and told me about how nice it was. I told her that I didn't believed in her stories. It was nice to hear, but how it sounds. I'm a soldier and the last of my species. I fought against brainwashed people that attacks the persons they love and kill them in the end. Then there comes the important thing in her story. I am the creator of evolved mammals.

After we ate something we looked at the clock again. In five minutes we got next class. I took our empty trays and brought them away. In the meanwhile Mia was waiting at entrance of the canteen. Then we walked together to next class but before we reached the meeting point, we got stopped by our instructor.

"Smith and Fox stopp for a minute." she said. "What is Ma'am." Mia said and we both gave her a salute. "This is the test we are doing five times in three months you are here." she said. "Yeah, that must be the fourth time." I said. "You two solved it three times and that faster than a normal cadet. I got something else for you." she said. We followed her into the basement. I wasn't there before. "This summer the police gets new standard equipment. Every cop is it allowed to wear a tranquilizer or a taser." she said.

We entered a room and saw a shooting range. Then a jaguar who looked like a lawyer turned on the light. Now we saw that it was really a shooting range. "Ten years ago it was on of the basics in this academy. Now it's not import anymore after guns went illegal in our city." our instructor said. She opened two suitcases and showed us the inner. It were two handguns and two assault rifles. One for my size and one for her.

"Serve you." our instructor said. I went closer and took the handgun first. Then I took the magazine and went to the shooting range. I took the gun with on hand took the clip and reloaded the gun. Then I took my other hand on the grip and aimed at my first target.

I put the gun down again and put on the earmuffs before I told them I was ready.

"I'm ready to shoot." I told them. "Okay than fire." she said. I heard a sound that told me to start. I fired at my first target into the middle. Then the next into the middle. And next in faster than I realize the next shoot into the middle. After my clip was empty. I reloaded in seconds. Then I did the same again.

After the next clip was empty, I realized the looks behind me. My instructors and the lawyers mouth hang open. I put the gun pack into the suit case with the two empty clips. "Wow why didn't you let me first." Mia told me. "They were thinking that I were good and you knocked them out with the skills after that." she added.

Mia went over and took a gun. She took a clip and put it into the gun. Then she went to the shooting range. I saw she missed every shoot but didn't looked like she wanted to shoot into the middle. She took another clip and then I turned my head to the instructor.

They weren't impressed about how she shoots. After the last shot rang out she turned to the lawyer and our instructor. "You aren't that good, Mrs. Fox." the lawyer said. "We aren't killers. So I thought I just needed to hit the target, not to shoot into the middle." Mia said. "Why didn't you wanted to hit into the middle?" the instructor asked. "Because a tranquilizer could make much more damage when you hit your target into the face." Mia told her. "You're right." I said.

"Lets get to the bigger guns." Mia said and aimed with the handgun at the target and pulled the trigger. A shot rang out and she hit the middle of the target. My mouth hang open. "You still had one shot?" I asked her. Then she put the gun back.

"I think I saw enough. That means we try it again next week." the instructor said. "What about the assault rifles?" we asked. "I'm so impressed that I would believe you could shoot that gun too." the instructor said.

"Now you two are done here. I got to speak to this lawyer." the instructor said. We gave her a salute and left the basement. "Where did we learned to shoot?" I asked her. "You taught me." Mia said with a proud smile.

We were talking about it until evening. It was the theme of today. Before I went to bed. I was looking into a mirror after my evening shower. I saw the scare were the bullet hit me. Well it was still healing. The doc told me it would take longer for this wound.

When I woke up I didn't had any hairs on my head. Now I got many brown-blond ones. They didn't looked that well but that was because it was evening and I had a shower few minutes before. My grey eyes looked like there was blue before.

"Hey Smith it's late can you please turn of your light." someone said who was lying in his bed. I went to my bed. "Sorry." I said to the tired wolf who wanted to sleep. I got into my bed and turned off the light.


I closed my eyes and as I opened them again. I wasn't in the academy anymore. I saw a white beach. Next to me was a fox cub that looked exactly like Mia and I knew it was her. "Where is mom?" she asked. "I-I don't know." I told her. She was like six or younger. "You told me she will meet us in New York." she said. I didn't respond for minute. "Jonas, where is mom?" she asked again. I took a deep breathe and respond. "New York isn't existing anymore." I told her. Then we both saw glare at the horizon. Then I looked back to her. She wasn't there anymore.

I stood up and looked around and then I saw someone else. He was the same species like me and he looked like me. The only diffrent was his eye colar. I went to him and stopped in front of him.

"Who are you?" I asked him. "Where is she?" he asked me. I didn't answered. "Where is she, Jonas?" he asked again. Then he grabbed me and looked me deeply into the eyes. Then I turned around and saw Mia as an adult. "I'm here Mike." she said. "Jonas please protect her. We need her." Mike said.

Then we both looked to the sea. We both saw Zootopia. "It's to late." he said and pulled a gun. I stepped back and looked behind me and saw Mia who aimed a gun at me too. Then I saw Judy and Nick who looked bad at me. I looked at the City. I saw the city on fire. "It's your fault." they told me. I looked at them.

"Where are you Jonas." a childish voice said. I had a gun and pointed it at a blindfolded fox cub. "I'm here. It's okay." I told her. I knew it was her again. "Why did you lied to me?" she asked.

"What did you done, Jonas?" a female voice asked. I turned around and saw someone standing in a dark corner. "Mom?" Mia said. Then a shoot rang out. I fired the gun. "JONAS!" the female voice screamed.


I woke up it was in the middle of the night. I couldn't breath. I stood up and ran out of the room and shut the door. The sound was so loud that my roommates woke up. I ran outdoors and stumbled over a stone and hit the ground.

It started to rain. The pain in my body was strong enough to hold me on the ground for a minute. I heard foot steps coming closer. "Well done, Jonas." a voice I known from my dreams said. Then I felt someone pull me into a seating position. "Who are you?" I asked him.

"You know who I am." he said. "No, can't remember." I told him. He wore a mask and had a rifle on his back. "They call me M." he said. "M?" I asked him. "Agent M." he said and helped me up.

"Not you again." a female voice said. He turned around and we both saw Mia who had a knife in her paw. "You two met before?" I asked him. "We three met before a many of times." M said.

"Mrs. Fox. You didn't read my message." he said. "I don't need to. You are a murder." Mia said to him. "I'm not a murder. Jonas is still alive and I kept my job. Mia, I'm not your enemy." he said.

"I don't want to hear it. You hurt him." Mia said and attacked him instant. He dodged her and grabbed her arm. He unarmed her and pulled her to the ground. "I don't want to do that." he said.

Then we heard an alarm. The light in every building turned on. "Mister put the knife away." our instructor said. He pulled a handgun and shot out instructor into the knee. I tried to get up and grab the gun, but he pushed me away. "Wow, that escalated quickly." he said. "Shut up you are under arrest." I told him.

"I'm not Jonas and I never will." he said. Then something pulled him into the air. We looked up and saw outlines of an aircraft. The camouflage painting of the aircraft turned into black. Now we saw it was a kind of a jet.

As the jet disappeared. The other cadets and instructors came to look out for us. "What happened?" they asked. I lied down again. The pain in my legs were to awful to stand up. "Smith, what happened." someone asked.


"Five minutes before they arrive. Our ammunition is low and our radios are nearly dead." someone said in the past. "Backup is close. What should we do, Jonas." my brother said. "Mike. I know. I'm thinking." I told him. "Hey young boy. This is your first mission as squad leader?" an old squad member said. "It is." We told him. "We are doomed." he said.

"No we aren't." I told him. Then a blue light lights up in the inside of my body. "Hey I can survive this." I told him. "Wait in position. I act as I would surrender and then you kill this idiots." I said.

I kicked the door open and held my gun into the air. "This is sucide." my squad member said. "Don't shoot. I surrender!" I yelled. They aimed their guns at me. "Now!" I yelled and pulled a pistol out of my back pocket and shoot the first. I ran at the tank and crawled under it. Then I place a C4 into the the chains and crawled out of it. Then I blowed it up. I got knocked out by some parts of the thank that flew against my head.

As I woke up Mike sat next to me. "Did we made it?" I asked him. "We did a successfull sucide mission." Mike said and smiled. "The general promoted me." he told me. "What rang?" I asked. Then the flashback ended.


I woke up in the infirmary and Mia sat besides me. She was happy to see me awake. "I can't smile now. Please tell me what happnened?" I asked her. "We both got attacked by this M." Mia told him. I went into a seating position. "You lie to me if you say he attacked us." I said and looked mad at her. "He had answeres about everything!" I yelled and her smile faded away "Jonas, I saved your life. He wanted to kill you before. He was the one who erased your memories." Mia yelled back at me. "Maybe you should let me die next time." I told her.

That shocked her. "You don't mean that." Mia said and looked disappointed now. "Lets stop fighting." I told her and shocked my head. "I would maybe act like you." I told her. "Jonas what happened to you?" she asked me. "I don't know, but he was so familiar. His voice and his anatomy." I said.

"He smelled familiar too." Mia said. "Is he..." she added. "A human? Yes he is." I answered.