Hey guys it's me again but instead of me, me. This story is written by a friend of mine, WordFairy237. She wrote this and I'm putting it up for her.
So uh I guess tell us if you like it.
Chapter 1
My name is Talon. I don't know my last name. Right now all I can think about is finding my twin brother, Fang. I don't know where he is but I only have two leads and both are from the tabloids. One said he might be in NEW YORK, the other said that he might be in Arizona.(I hate the tabloids!) The both said he was with the Flock. I was on my way to Arizona, because I already looked through out NY. Wish me luck.
It took me 8 hours, but I finally got here. The only reason it took 8 hours was because of turbulence. I landed in some small town; I didn't know the name of. The town was big enough for three schools (elementary, middle, and high), a vet clinic, and about 2-3 miles of houses. Nothing much, but I kinda like it. I decided to start my search in the stores, but of course always watching out for a tall, dark haired and eyed 16 year old boy. After going in every store but the doctor's office and the vet's clinic (I didn't go in yet because it smelled like the School, nightmarish.*shudder*), and just as I was about to go into the vet's I ran into him, or at least a really close look alike, into Fang.
"Uhm... I was wandering if you might have seen my brother, he's my twin, and he's about 16 and tall, about your height actually, with dark hair and eyes. His name is Fang." I said in about 2 breathes. I looked at him and saw that he looked like someone had just smacked him upside the head. This time I said more slowly,
"My brother's name is Fang, and my name is Talon. I would really appreciate it if you could help me, but if you can't I understand. Thanks for listening, anyway." I was only 3 ft. away when he said in a deep husky tone
"My name is Fang and I have a twin sister, too. I know this might sound weird, but when is your birthday?" he asked softly and carefully
"To be honest, I don't truly know, but I feel like it should be the 18 of November, why do you want to know anyway?" I replied just as softly.
The way he responded is what shocked me the most, not the words that he uttered, but the look of sorrow, relief, longing to know the truth, but most of all happiness mixed with love all packed into the look in his eyes and leaking out through his voice as he said,
"I don't know when my birthday is either, but I always felt like it was November 18, too. Although, it is little proof, if any at all. There is only one way to know if you're my little sister or no-"
I cut him off, "2 and 1/2 minutes, it's not like it's 2 and 1/2 years, now is it!"
"No, I guess not." Is all he said. Then I realized that this is what he was going to ask me. Then I did something really sibling like, I punched him on the shoulder and then (this is the part I really can't believe I did) I gave him a hug. (F.Y.I I don't give hugs. I don't know what came over me.)
We didn't talk much on the way there. Actually, that was the only thing we did talk about. He only told me where we were going, to Dr. Valencia Martinez's house. (She's a veterinarian.) I kinda found that funny, because we're 2% bird and all.
I found out that she is Max's mom and that she had a daughter about Gazzy's age. I also found out that Fang had a crush on Max. (People, I was in the School for 14 years of my life give me a break. Needless to say I have issues with Jeb Batchelder.) Even though we didn't talk, it wasn't awkward, it was that comfortable silence you get from being around people you love and trust.
We finally got to the house and then it hit me, I smelt freshly baked chocolate chip cookies and I heard about 8 or 9 voices.
"I'm nervous about meeting your family, Fang."
"There's no reason to be nervous, Talon." He replied putting a hand on my shoulder
"Okay, Fang." With that we walked in and everyone, almost, stopped talking.
I could see Max seething with jealousy and rage, but then she saw my dark golden/brown wings ruffle a little and any emotion except for annoyance was gone. I could tell that she wasn't annoyed with me, so I let out a silent sigh of relief.
One avian down four more to go.
I was still nervous, but not nearly as much as before.
" You never told them that you had a twin did you?" I asked Fang, but only loud enough for him to hear."
"No, I never did." he stated calmly.
"I should have guessed it," " I mumbled to myself. I gathered my act up and took a deep breath in.
"My name is Talon and I'm Fang's twin sister, you see I only just escaped the School 2 years, Jeb knew where I was, he apparently decided that I wasn't important enough to save, and now you know who I am and why I wasn't with you from the very beginning."
Then they stared at me like I was crazy (I might just be), but only for a few seconds and then Angel said "I can't read her mind, but I can tell that she is telling the truth."
Then they all turned to Jeb who was sitting in a chair in a corner staring at me in disbelief and confusion.
So that was chapter one. Tell us what you think and all. So we can think to continue or not
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