Here is a better BrambleXSquirrel story. :) It starts on the way back from The moutains exept Feathertail didn't die. Btw school starts monday so I won't update as much.
Brambleclaw's P.O.V.
"I smell cats!" Crowpaw mews from the front with Feathertail. A group of six cats pads out. I see Squirrelpaw un sheath her claws and sink them into the ground.
"What are you doing here?" A gray tom growls.
"Were just passing through." Feathertail meows calmly.
"Atrack." The gray tom yowls and lunges at me. I try to fight back but he knocks me out.
He knocks Squirrelpaw out.
"Leave and never come back. Don't worry 'bout them. Just leave." The gray tom growls and the other four run away, leaving us. The other cats grab us and to their camp. They drag us to a den.
The next day
I wake up and see Squirrelpaw on the ground beside me. She is still knocked out. What if she doesn't wake up? The fear of that hurts. Soon she opens her eyes and looks at me. She sees my worried face.
"What's wrong?" She asks and slowly gets up and sits next to me.
"I was worried about you." I whisper and she purrs. The gray tom pads in and she growls.
"What do you want with us." I growl and he smirks.
"Our leader, Deer, wants to know if you would like to join us. You can either join the pack or you can be killed." He meows and I look at Squirrelpaw. She can't die. She looks at me and nods.
"We will join." I mew and he nods. "I am Storm, by the way. Follow me to Deer's den." The gray tom meows and I follow him with Squirrelpaw pressing against me. Storm leads us across the camp to a cave. Inside there is a brown tabby she cat sitting with a black tom.
"Deer, they have decided to join." Storm mews and the she cat purrs. "Good. The ginger she cat shall now be known as Sun and the dark brown tabby tom shall now be known as Shadow." The she cat meows. "I am Deer and this is my Deputy Night by the way." The she cat meows and I nod.
"Show them to a den." Night mews to Storm and he leads us away. He leads us to an entrance and I see a small den. It is empty.
"This is your den. Friends and Mates share dens. Since you two are obviously at least friends, this will be your den." Storm meows and pads out. "
"Well, Shadow. That is a very good name for you. You blend in well with the dark." Sun meows and I purr.
"Can I tell you something Sun?" I whisper and she slips next to me.
"What is it?" She asks, her eyes full of concern.
"I Love you." I whisper and look at the ground.
"I love you to." She whispers and nuzzles me. I look at her and pur gazes meet. We sit there for a while until Sun's eyes start to water and she looks at the ground, blinking.
"Well, we should make a nest." She meows and we make a nest. She curls up and I curl around her. Soon we are asleep.
A moon later, Sun's P.O.V.
"Hey Pebble, do you and Eagle wanna come relax by the stream with Me and Shadow?" I meow to my Friend. It has been a moon and I am liking life in the pack.
"Yes! Come on Eagle." My friend meows and nudges her mate. The four of us pad to the river and lay on the flat rocks we call the Basking rocks.
"Come on Eagle, lets hunt." Shadow meows after a while and they pad into the trees.
After a while, the scent of cat starts to grow and I smell a lot of cats.
"Pebble, do you smell that." I mew and sit up.
"I do Sun. Get ready. Look at the pine tree. It is coming from that way." My friend meows and I hop onto her rock. We stare at the pine tree until four cats pad out.
"Hey! You two." A Spotted she cat meows and cautiously pads over with a white tom, Black and white tom and a fire colored tom.
"Who are you? Can you show us out of the forest?" The white tom meows, standing next to the spotted she cat and fire colored tom. I see many different colors behind the pine tree and gulp. I see River, Lake, Silver and Golden pad out of the forest on this side of the river. Shadow and Eagle are with them. They each have prey. They drop their prey on a rock and all six cats stare at the cats.
"Um hi, I am Firestar and this is Leopardstar, Tallstar, and Blackstar." The Flame colored tom meows and I freeze. My father! I glance at Pebble. I told her about my father. She seems to realize that it is him. Storm pad out. I see the four cats that I traveled with to find midnight are behind the leaders. Storm pad over to us. They Growl. I see Tawnypelt whisper something to Firestar and he perks up.
"A moon ago, did you attack a group of four cats?" Blackstar meows, looking at Storm.
"Yeah." He mews and pads forward.
"May we speak to your leader?" My father asks and Storm nods. The four clan leaders whisper and Firestar pads foreward with Tawnypelt, Crowpaw, Feathertail, and Stormfur. The other three leaders pad back to the clans.
"Sun and Pebble, go tell Deer and Night to meet us here." Storm mews and we nod.
"Race ya." Pebble whispers as we speed off into the trees. We find Night and Deer padding out of camp.
"What is it?" Deer mews, looking concerned.
"Meet us at the basking rocks. We found some cats whom want to talk to you two." Pebble meows.
"Okay, meet you there." Deer meows and they take off.
"Last one to the rocks is a kittypet." I meow and speed off. I sprint through the trees until I reach the meadow. I am side by side with pebble. I see the other cats all waiting for us. I feel a burst of speed and run even faster. I reach the rocks and leap to the highest one. Pebble joins me and we lay down panting.
"What do you want with us?" Deer meows, calmly.
"I believe you have my daughter." Firestar meows. I see Sandstorm and Leafpaw joined them.
"I might, by why do you think I am going to give her to you." Deer meows and I see her un sheath her claws and sink them into the ground.
"Give me my daughter back." Sandstorm growls and I see her crouched on the ground, tail lashing. I see Leafpaw scanning the cats on the ground. I am glad Shadow is hidding with Eagle in a tree. My pelt has gotten lighter. I am also much nimbler, good at hunting in all terrain and weather. She hopefully won't reconize me.
"River, Lake, Silver, Golden. Please go back to camp with the prey." Night tells the four of them and they pad away. Now is is just me, Night, Pebble, Deer, Eagle, and Shadow. I gulp. They will defiantly recognize Shadow. I see Crowpaw, Feathertail, and Stormfur looking at me. I look at Pebble and she nods. Time for a chase.
