Hey Guys! I decided to return and make myself comfortable after not having to write for like… months maybe? Or a year? Anyways, I'm back to writing again because I've reread my story in this and can honestly say that the first few chapters are…horrible I know. The plot there is very confusing, not to mention the grammar. I guess because I've like Momoko being in the spotlight so much and made me write a story like that. Even though I knew some of you really like the story, we all can't deny the grammars and the flow of the story there.

That's why I'm back! I'm here to rewrite this story once again and this time, I'll do my best to get the flow of the story right and understanding for all of you! This will be very challenging to do and a lot of hard work! But I'm sure it is worth it because I am writing it for you guys! Anyways let's not take this longer and go on with the show! (Story, I mean)

Bold: Flashback or Dream. Can be places (For future references)

Italic Bold: Thoughts in a dream or flashback. Can also be places

Normal text: Narrating

Italic:Thoughts


The Prologue

Unknown Place

A dark abyss swimming around a young girl. A young girl with long orange hair and milky white skin. Darkness…She hated that. She hated the loneliness that comes along with it. She hated the cold creeping through her body like she is their prey. She especially hated the pain in her head. The throbbing pain like it was about to split her head into two. No one was around the young girl as she is by herself and with that she tried to will her body to move yet again.

''Dark…It's so dark and cold. Why can't I move?'' The girl thought and started to try opening her eyes but can't.

''Why can't I open my eyes?! I'm so scared…Someone please…help me…'' The girl thought and started to tear up. ''I don't want to be alone…Anyone please…''

There was silence in this strange darkness around her. ''Silence…Am I truly alone?'' She was about to cry until a voice…a motherly voice made her way through her ears.

''Wake up…'' The voice said. That surprised her as hope began to fill her very being. ''Someone is out there…Someone is out there for me?'' She questions herself as if she couldn't believe that someone is out there for her. Maybe she was hearing voices? Is it really possible for someone to be there for her? After all she has been in the darkness for so long that she might be imagining them...

''One more please…I need to hear someone is really out there.''She thought as she waited for the voice again in anxiety. She waited for a minute as every second is dashing her hope. She was about to give up but then felt a warming sensation at her hand

''Don't give up! Wake up please!'' The voice sobbed.

''Someone's holding my hand…It's so warm.'' The girl smiled as confidence filled her very being and struggled to move and open her eyes. '' I won't let this voice cry because of me…I will fight!'' And with that, she desperately struggled against the darkness and started to move.

''I think she's waking up!'' A man's voice suddenly pointed out the twitching fingers of the young girl.

''Momoko! Come on, wake up!'' The soothing voice she heard and with those words, she successfully saw a ray of light. ''A light!'' The girl smiled and reached for it and her world began to be covered in light.


She groaned and groggily opened her eyes. ''Where…am I?''

A sudden hug made her broke out of her musing and there she saw the owner of the voices, a man and a woman. The woman hugging her and sobbing has short orange hair. She also has creamy white skin and looked around that of the early thirties. Beside her is a man soothing the crying woman, he has brown hair and looked around that of the mid thirties.

He sent her a small grin and asked ''Are you ok?'' Momoko was about to speak but realize she can't use her voice due to the dryness and instead nodded to the man. The man realized she can't talk and started to bring her a glass of water. ''Dear please talk to her while I get her a glass of water.'' The crying woman finally stopped her falling tears and nodded to the man. ''I-I will. Thanks Hachizou'' The man smiled at her and left.

''Oh Momoko…I'm so glad you're awake and ok. I was so worried.'' The woman choked and held her cheek.

''Momoko? Is that my name? Who are these people? Where am I?'' So many questions filled the young girl's mind but can't speak due to her dry throat. She was about to try and speak again until the man came back with a glass of water and gave it to the young girl now known as Momoko.

She drank it and tried out voicing her thoughts. ''Wh-who'' She croaked out, really struggling to speak as if she's been out for quite a while.

''What is it Momoko?'' The man asked. Momoko swallowed and said

''W-who am I?''


Author's Note:

Andddddd that's wrap it up! The New Momoko Rewrite version has officially started! I hope you guys like this and this is where we are all gonna start! Fear not! (Always wanted to say that) I'm already writing the next chapter and you will not all wait long. Don't forget to Read and Review guys! Also please favorite this story so you are alert of my very updates if you really like this story! Till the next chapter guys! Love you all!

P.S Sorry if all of them are in bold but it is needed to let you successfully find the difference.