Ok you guys go a little easy on me it's my first fanfiction, and please review, review, review. I am open to suggestions and will gladly take idea's.
Disclamer: Ummm...what do i put here again...do i put that i dont own Inuyasha?
Rin's Point of View
Church. Snap. Broken on the floor, lying in front of you at the tips of your shoes. As you kick one more into my side, with the sound of death surrounding me and echoing into the empty sky, "Get up bitch! You worthless piece of trash!" You scream at me, causing my head to pound "I never loved you, you mean nothing to me, why I kept you around I will never know" you shout. You continue kicking me, and punching me repeatedly, until I reach the call of unconsciousness and gladly welcome it. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Sesshomaru Point of View
Walking down the street on this slightly cloudy night, with the stats attempting to peak out and succeeding every once in a great while. And out in the distance is the most a full moon more beautiful then I have ever seen, and it's light seemed to have focused on a particular object far away. Yet in all of this peacefulness there is a tension of hatred all around and it hits my very core. My sense's pick up the distress and hurt of a person. I stay walking down the street and with every step I take the tension seems to build, and in the far off distance the screams of a girl seem to shake my very being. Now I run with a mission to find this person as try to help them. As soon as I turn to the corner I stop in my tracks, the shadows of two figures one of them is on the ground, and the other is slithering away into the ever-present darkness. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Rin's Point of View
Lights as bright as the afternoon sun, blind my eyes to the point where all I can see is the color white. I feel like an angel so maybe I am done suffering this cruel card that fate has dealt me. I am up so high, where no one can ever touch me again. Then a pair of strong arms lifts me up into a sitting position; and they ask me who I am?, what happened?, and all the usual pesky questions. Slowly my eyes are adjusting and I realize that my eyes are open and the bright lights aren't lights at all but long sliver hair. This air seems to shine like the stars and is as soft as a baby bottom, also it hides me safe away from the world. Suddenly the beautiful hair that drapes my face leaves and I look into a pair of eyes, the color of gold with hints of melted honey. These eyes I could get lost in for the rest of my life, then a voice says to me "hold on tight, I'm going to get you to the hospital. And whatever you do, don't open you eyes; keep them closes and take a much-needed rest." I do as I am told and I'm lifted even further into the air, with the wind blowing on my face. And a strange sense of comfort come over me as this man with golden eyes and sliver hair and strong arms take me to a safe place. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Sesshomaru Point of View
I run to the person on the ground and I'm talking back by her beauty. Her skin is the color of cream, which radiates a soft glow. Her hair is the color of night, and her lips are the color of soft pink roses, waiting to be picked. But as distracted by her looks, I kneel down and pick her up in my arms and asked her questions. When I move my hair to get a better look at her I notice the softball bruisers on her arms and a thin whisper of blood coming from her skull. And suddenly a strange feeling come over me anger and hatred. I want to find the person who did this and pound him into the ground, who had the nerve to hurt her. I look over and see that she is awake and I look in her eyes to give her reassurance that everything will be alright, but her gaze unsettles me and I notice that her eye are the most beautiful I have ever seen. They are the color of chocolate, warm and inviting. I stay looking at her and tell her, "hold on tight, I'm going to get you to the hospital. And whatever you do, don't open you eyes; keep them closes and take a much-needed rest." She closes her eyes and I lift her up, and carry her bridal style, and I take off in a dead sprint to the hospital.
so that is chapter one i hope you like it...chapeter two is commin on up sometime this next week.
