Hey guys just a short one shot of how I think the scene where Kim finds out Jack was right about Carson being a cheater should have gone. In my version they are dating right before Jack tried to admit his feelings for her earlier the day he came, but he didn't quite tell her. I'll try to get the diologue somewhat right. I hope ya'll enjoy. Please review! Love!
KIM:
I walked over to my boyfriend, Carson, after his wrap had come undone. (If you don't understand go back and read the AN)
"Hey are you o- What are you doing?" I asked after I saw him putting something in his wraps. He tried to hide them from me and told me to go away.
"Nothing Kim! I'll see you after the fight!" He snapped. I walked over to Jack.
"Jack, you were right. Kick that sorry losers butt." I said. He nodded. "Oh and one more thing." I said. He looked surprised as I pulled his head down to mine and gave him a hard kiss. He kissed back instantly and his hands gripped my green dress, over my hips. I pulled away.
"Wow Kim." He said. I smiled and winked flirtatiously and walked over to Carson, who by now was fuming mad.
"What the hell was that Kim?" He asked, grabbing my arm. I pulled away and slapped him, hard.
"We're over Carson. You're such a cheater." I said. I walked over and watched the fight start, well continue. It went on for about 30 seconds before Carson punched Jack then kicked him when he was on the ground. Bobbi Wasabi lost by default. Jack wouldn't let that happen though. So the fight continued until Jack and Carson both threw a punch and Carson's sandbag burst open. Jack knocked him to the ground and Jack won!
"Go Jack!" I yelled. Jack came over to us and we started talking. "Jack, I'm sorry. I should have seen it sooner." I said
"We all are. We shouldn't have doubted you." Milton said. He smiled.
"Remember when I said true colors are revealed in defeat, not victory? Well Carson just showed his true colors and so did you. Is there any way we could convince you to come back to the dojo?" Rudy asked. I saw him look a little hesitant so I decided to help.
"Maybe this will help your decision." I said. With that I stood on my tippy toes, cupped his cheeks, and brought his lips to mine. He kissed me back and we heard the guys gasp. I kissed him for a little before pulling away.
"I only have one thing to say to you guys. Wasabi?" Jack said. We put our hands in the middle.
"Wasbi!" We all yelled. And with that we walked home where Jack kissed me goodnight. I called Grace and told her everything. The next day Jack asked me out and I said yes of course!
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