Hey I got chapter one fixed up a little thanks to my beta reader, but he says he isn't finished yet so he doesn't want any critic for this chapter so I will not do so, I hope this new version will do ok
-KPKP-
Kim and Ron climb into the rocket and take off when suddenly, the image freezes and the view pulls outward to show the scene on a monitor in a dark room.
"So the heroes finish High School and it looks like their bad guys are turning over a new leaf. Well, just the main one is turning good, and everything is just so peaceful and nice now... the perfect time to start my business." says the man who stopped the video.
He slowly stands up, letting a small amount of light fall upon the bottom of his face from the monitor to reveal a smile. He turns to see two other figures in the dark room and together, they give a dark, sinister smile.
-With Ron and Kim-
Kim and Ron sit at Kim's table surrounded by paper.
"Kim, it seems no one wants the Ron-man and his Bon-diggit} skills at their college!" Ron cries frustrated, looking at his girlfriend in exasperation.
"Come on, Ron... It's just that no one recognizes your talents," Kim says, looking at her boyfriend and best friend-in-the-world with sympathy.
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"...I got nothing, Kim. Nothing!"...
"Ron, I know that {you'll} find something that you'll like to do...I'm sure you'll get in."...
"You think so?" Ron questions, looking at Kim, his eyes doubtful.
"I know so," Kim says. They lean in towards each other and, just as they were about to kiss, the Kimmunicator went off. Kim rolls her eyes, mouths: "Sorry, Ron," as she pulls out the Kimmunicator and, with the press of a button, reveals the third member of their team, Wade.
"What's the sitch, Wade?" Kim {asks} as she moves a stray strand of hair out of her face.
"Was I interrupting something?" Wade inquires teasingly, seeing a faint tinge of redness on Kim's face.
"Wade!" Kim shouts.
"Okay, okay! ...It seems that a Mr. Bronze worth, owner of a big company, has left you a message. Here, I'll patch you through," Wade says as he quickly types at his keyboard.
The Kimmunicator screen changes to show a man balding in the middle with only some brown hair on the sides. He was wearing a fancy blue suit with a brown tie that had an intricate pattern on it.
"Miss Kim Possible," the man begins, "I got a most... unusual threat from a man threatening to steal the largest diamond in my collection. He said that he wants you personally to be there to try and stop him. So please, Miss Possible, will you come and protect my precious diamond?"
"Strange... I wonder why a thief would want me to try to stop him... wouldn't it be easier for him if I wasn't there?" Kim ponders aloud.
"Maybe it is an initiation for some kind of evil group."
"We'll leave that as a 'maybe'," Kim says to Ron.
"I'll send you the co-ordinates." Wade again starts typing and within moments the co-ordinates are sent both to the Kimmunicator and to Kim's car.
Kim and Ron get into the car and, while driving, Kim pushes a special button in the car. Instantly, the trunk of the car opens and three rocket engines rise up with a soft 'click' as they lock into place. They took no time igniting, violently thrusting the car into the air, granting Kim and Ron flight.
They arrive at the building in no time flat with a very nervous Mr. Bronze worth there to greet them as soon as they step out.
"Miss Possible and... um...?" Mr. Bronze worth says with a blank gaze at Ron as he tries to figure out who he is.
"Mr. Stoppable, if you please, but you can just call me Ron if you like. I'm Kim's partner," Ron answers, far too used to this by now.
"Can you show us the diamond you mentioned earlier, if you don't mind, Mr. Bronze Worth?" Kim inquires, getting straight to business.
"Ah, yes, right away. I will take you to the vault containing my most precious diamond." With that he turns and starts walking off with the two crime fighters following him at a respectful distance.
Mr. Worth leads them to a large vault door that he opens using a code that he takes care to hide from even their eyes, and then into the vault with secondary lasers that he also turns off.
"Here is the largest, absolutely flawless diamond in the entire world***. {It's} said to not even have a single scratch on it."
"It's beautiful," Kim says in awe. "Ron and I will stay in this room with the lights off and, if you could, could you keep the sensors off so that we don't set them off?" Seeing the worried look on Mr. Bronze worth's face, she adds, "Don't worry, we'll be right here when he comes."
"All right. I'll leave it to you."
A soft chuckle. "Too easy. I guess Kim Possible didn't show up."
"Guess again. I've been here waiting for you."
"Ah, excellent. I'm just starting up my own business of stealing, selling merchandise, and possible mayhem and destruction. Since we're around the same age, I wanted your opinion on my outfit. The goggles are a bit much, aren't they?"
He takes off the goggles and hat, revealing his messy brown hair and brown eyes.
"I took your look from the past and added my own flair to it. I changed the colour and added a button-up shirt to make it look like a cape."
"Well, I give you a zero for originality, but an 'A' on moves and entrance," states Ron.
"I didn't ask you Stoppable."
"You know my name?" exclaimed Ron, excitement filling his voice.
"Heh. Of course I do. I studied Kim and all her friends, even if they didn't seem important." You can hear the sneer in his voice.
"HEY! I'm important! I'm Kim's boyfriend, and who are you trying to be all smog"
"Oh i forgot to introduce myself I'm Perfects, Stan Perfects, and just for tonight entertainment I'll be leaving with this diamond now to show my... future clients that I was able to steal right under the legendary Kim Possible"
"We'll just have to see about that."
Stan takes out a metal pole, extending it as he shows off by twirling it. Then Kim does a jump kick and Stan quickly avoided it by cart wheeling away he tried to get to the hole in the ceiling but then Ron attempts to jump him and he twirls his pole and strikes him in the face. Then Kim jumps next to him and does a backwards roundhouse and kicks him and the diamond falls out of his shirt and Ron quickly grabs it and Stan attempts to get it back but Kim pushes him out of the way and he jumps to the hole and says "It looks like you win this time Kim, see you soon."
"Well he was quick to give up."
"Hey when it comes to you and me Kim bad guys have no chance."
"I guess, we better give this back to Mr. Worth."
Kim went to Mr. Worth and gave him the diamond and said.
"Here Mr. Bronze Worth the diamond is safe and sound."
"Thanks Miss. Possible I will have my secretary check and see if the diamond is scratched or any thing like that."
"Don't worry about me and the diamond thief, when we were fighting, made sure we didn't make the diamond any less valuable."
"Will better to be safe then sorry."
Later Kim was back home looking through some of the colleges that she was accepted to wondering which one to pick and wondering what her college major should be.
"Should I look in law, or should I be biology or sciences." The kimmuteacater went of and Kim answered it.
"What's the sitch Wade."
"Kim I just word on Mr. Worth. The analysis came back and it turned out the diamond was a fake."
"What? Stan must have switched the diamond, but who could of not noticed the difference it at the exact shape and weight."
"It's was Cubic zirconium Kim, it really hard to tell the difference." Wade said to cheer up Kim then their was a beeping on his computer and typed quickly to figure out what it meant. And said "I just got a major hit on the site, this banquet for a charity advent and they got a threatening email from…"
"Stan Perfects"
"…exactly and he asked you to attend his so called performance again."
"He would, I smell a trap he may of not set up one in a volt but he could set one a this banquet, be on you gourde Ron we got to be3 read for anything."
"Right, serious mode on, not serious face." Then Ron made his serious face.
At the banquet there are a lot of people eating and talking about the charity event when suddenly there was a crash with a hole in the ceiling and a bunch of men with sticks that glow at the end came in and Stan Perfects comes in with a girl about his age standing next to him, she was a blond-haired girl with red streaks in her hair wearing the same outfit except for the button up shirt she and had some device strapped to her arm.
"Hello every body I'm Stan Perfects and this is my partner, Jane Crafts, she my weapons expert."
"Hello every one nice to meet you and to show you we mean business I am going to shoot someone with this laser."
Then Jane shoots a random passerby with her laser and shocked the man with electricity until he passed out.
"And that was a low setting, mhaaaaa."
"What are you doing laughing at a time like this?"
"I like doing the evil laugh, I mean I just said I got this great laser and that I can cause great pain, I think it deceives an evil laugh."
"I think evil laugh should be only used when you win in a smug way or after you destroyed something, besides you're the sidekick you only do evil laugh if I do."
"But I love causing pain like I did to that guy over there," she points at the fried man on the floor, "If that's not a cause for separation I don't know what is."
"Fine maybe win you get a solo mission but this is the time for discussion now that we have or guest at attention I think we should announce to them what we want," Stan then did a loud cough to get every buddy to know that he is about to tell him what he wants and counties, "now I would like you to give us your bank accounts, your stocks, and the name of all your business friends that have a lot of numbers behind them."
"You and I both know that they won't be doing that now."
"Ah Kim so glad of you to join us, I would like you to meet my sidekick Jane Crafts."
Jane waved and said "Hello."
"OK now that we are done with the introductions, how about you stand there and look pretty while I take these nice peoples' money."
"And why would I do that?"
"Because I placed bombs all over the city and if you don't, I'll give the word to my friends and kaboom."
"That's pretty extreme just to take money." Then Kim quickly turned on her communicator and said, "Wade can you quickly scan the area for booms and disarm them will you're at it."
"I wouldn't bother if I was you, just a hint of scanning from Wad and I'll push the button."
"You wouldn't, you'll blow your self up if your telling the truth."
"I'm willing to risk it, you see Kim from my study of your past mission that I have to take extreme risk to get what want, and what I want is for you to summit, so Kim are you willing to risk the lives of people to stop me or are you going to give up and let me finish."
"Wait I got a better idea."
"And what is brilliant idea Stoppable."
"How about Kim here steals something for you instead of you taking all these people money."
"That's a great idea Stoppable, how ever did you come up with it?"
"Well I was a evil mastermind once before."
"So true, how about it Kim will you steal something for me?"
"Fine, as long as long as you keep your word that you won't take these peoples' money."
"Fine, you will soon find out that I always keep my word, know what I want you to steal is the schematics of the town underground system, and load it to my device." Stan then takes out what looks like one of those flat cell phones with a circle on the top and when Stan pushed on it, the device extends to show buttons.
"Why would you want that, you can easily get that online."
"That's for me to know and you to find out."
"Fine, Wade give the man what he wants."
"Uploading files now, and sending to Stan's hand held device and there you have it."
"Nice meeting you Kim, see you soon."
Then Stan and his men left through the hole and the people cheered. Then a man comes up and says to Ron "You Sir came of with a great idea, you know I one of the dean's at Westborge College in the town of Westborge and I think you would do well majoring in business, and you Kim Possible I say if that guy is telling the truth about running a business you might do well majoring in business too."
"You hear that Ron you got accepted to a college and even better I get to be there with you."
"A BOO-YAH!."
Then the crowed clapped for there savers good news and Kim and Ron left with a smile on there faces.
-later-
The same man that offered Ron a chance to go the college was at a lair of some sort with bunch of other men.
"It worked; they didn't suspect that you and I are working together, but if I may ask why you wanted me to give Miss. Possible and this Stoppable an opportunity at my college?"
"Because my friend Kim works better with Ron and I want her to be at her peak, or this will be little less fun and when Wade gave me the schematics of Middleton I was able to find out the frequency of Kim's communicator, and that my friend is only the beginning."
Then there was a close up to the man behind the voice and it was Stan Perfects.
-The end-
