I'll always come for you
'I'll Always Come for you' has been improved. There is a little perfectionist in me that like to come out now and then and this was one of those times.
So I took off the first draft and armed with the reviews, I went back and highlighted the good points and bad points made in the reviews and began to form a plan of action.
So here it is the new and improved (I hope) Version. What I have done is taken bits out, written new scenes, made it longer by adding a couple of new chapters and made some grammar and spelling changes to.
Another point is that spoiler- I looked into Suicide in Ancient Greek before I put it in
Thanks you guys for the reviews keep them coming so I can improve.
