Disclaimers:
I do not own Yuyu Hakusho or any of its characters.
The character Lorraine is created by myself, so NO STEALING!!!!!!!
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"But Koenma sir!" Lorraine protested, "I cannot do that! He's way too strong!" Koenma just ignored her and explained once more: "That's not the point, I know that you are capable of winning and that's what you're going to do! You're my Spirit Detective and it is your duty to obey me!" "Fine!" Lorraine said crossing her arms. She knew she couldn't win to the world- famous thief Kuronue, but she was going to give it a try before saying a definitive no. "But I want a good payment for that!" She finally accepted Koenma's request, but she just won't let him win that easily. "We'll talk about that after you bring Kuronue here" Those were Koenma's final words. Lorraine got out of his office and went outside of Reikai into Makai, looking for the dangerous thief.
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She looked everywhere for him. She then felt a strange presence behind her. She turned back and saw the demon she was looking for staring at her. He knew why she was there. He knew what was her mission. So, without any words, they began to fight, they were not willing to waste any more time than the one they had already wasted staring at each other. The battle was equal. Both of them were very good and extremely skilled fighters. They used their fists as well as their powers. With him making untouchable tornadoes and indestructible twisters, and with her creating all kinds of armor such as shields, swords, poles, even barriers between the two of them with water, for she was the princess of the seas. They both cast great spells, but the other just undo it with another enchantment. They fought for over an hour by now, and they had moved their fighting place three times now. They were fighting first in a small village of humans, then they kept running and chasing, until they were at the middle of a deep forest, and finally they were at the edge of an immense cliff.
"Do you surrender now?" Kuronue asked in a very annoying tone. "Never!" the princess said with a very confident voice. "Is that so?" he asked mocking her answer. "Yes, have a problem with that?" she replied in a very challenging tone. He didn't answer. Finally the battle was over, for when the princess was dodging one of the great tornadoes of the thief, she fell off the cliff, with one of her hands hanging from the top of it. When Kuronue realized what he had done, he ran as fast as he could towards her to see if he had done any harm to the beautiful lady. He didn't want her to get hurt, for he was just playing and messing around a little. When he saw her hand hanging out the cliff, he walked closely to where she was and when he got there, he looked down and said joking in the middle of a chuckle: "Need help?" "What do you think, raven boy? That I like hanging down here with one hand, waiting for it to keep slipping down and down until I'm completely on the bottom of this immense cliff? She asked him expecting him to help her. But he did not, he just answered in the same joking tone, with the same annoying look: "You seem to enjoy it!" the look on the lady's face was so serious, Kuronue decided to leave the goofing off for another day. But not the messing around! "I'll get you out of there only if you surrender" Kuronue challenged. "I will never surrender!" she said that at the same time the rock she was hanging from slipped and fell down. She then hangs from another one below the one that just fell. "Do you surrender now?" Kuronue asked for the second time. "I told you, I won't su -" her words were interrupted when she fell again, but this time she didn't had enough time to hang from another stone, for she instantly fell down the cliff. As soon as Kuronue noticed it, he jumped down to save her. He grab both her hands in the air, and when he felt that she were well caught his wings opened wide as he began to fly. "Do you surrender now?" he joked when their were flying above the forest they were just fighting in. "I won't" she said with a smile that Kuronue couldn't see. Suddenly, Kuronue let one of the girl's hands in the air as he once again asked: "Now do you surrender?" "Okay, okay you win, I surrender" she said as she caught once again the man's hand.
When they finally landed, they did in a place near the village they just fought in. "Are you ok?" Kuronue asked with a concern in his voiced that made the beautiful princess noticed that he might be a thief, an extremely skilled fighter, and a master of all the wind techniques but that deep inside of him, his just a normal man, with a great gentle heart, and a huge sense of humor. "Yes, I am fine, thanks to you". "Nonsense. I was the one that pulled you towards the cliff in the first place". They kept walking until they reach a small river, where they drank some water. "Thanks" the lady said while the raven knight was drinking his water. He didn't replied. After a while he said: "So, what are you going to do?" "About what?" she asked him. "About your job. Prince Koenma told you your job would be catch me and bring me to justice." He explained to her. "And you surrender" he added hoping to make her smile and he did. "You made me surrender," She answered back with a happy smile. "I will just go back and tell Prince Koenma that you was stronger and faster, and that I couldn't beat you." She said. "Which is true" Kuronue added.
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So, that is for chapter one! Kind of short. Hope you like it. Please, please, please R&R. I will appreciate all singed comments and/or suggestions (reviews).
Later, ^_^
Lively
I do not own Yuyu Hakusho or any of its characters.
The character Lorraine is created by myself, so NO STEALING!!!!!!!
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"But Koenma sir!" Lorraine protested, "I cannot do that! He's way too strong!" Koenma just ignored her and explained once more: "That's not the point, I know that you are capable of winning and that's what you're going to do! You're my Spirit Detective and it is your duty to obey me!" "Fine!" Lorraine said crossing her arms. She knew she couldn't win to the world- famous thief Kuronue, but she was going to give it a try before saying a definitive no. "But I want a good payment for that!" She finally accepted Koenma's request, but she just won't let him win that easily. "We'll talk about that after you bring Kuronue here" Those were Koenma's final words. Lorraine got out of his office and went outside of Reikai into Makai, looking for the dangerous thief.
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She looked everywhere for him. She then felt a strange presence behind her. She turned back and saw the demon she was looking for staring at her. He knew why she was there. He knew what was her mission. So, without any words, they began to fight, they were not willing to waste any more time than the one they had already wasted staring at each other. The battle was equal. Both of them were very good and extremely skilled fighters. They used their fists as well as their powers. With him making untouchable tornadoes and indestructible twisters, and with her creating all kinds of armor such as shields, swords, poles, even barriers between the two of them with water, for she was the princess of the seas. They both cast great spells, but the other just undo it with another enchantment. They fought for over an hour by now, and they had moved their fighting place three times now. They were fighting first in a small village of humans, then they kept running and chasing, until they were at the middle of a deep forest, and finally they were at the edge of an immense cliff.
"Do you surrender now?" Kuronue asked in a very annoying tone. "Never!" the princess said with a very confident voice. "Is that so?" he asked mocking her answer. "Yes, have a problem with that?" she replied in a very challenging tone. He didn't answer. Finally the battle was over, for when the princess was dodging one of the great tornadoes of the thief, she fell off the cliff, with one of her hands hanging from the top of it. When Kuronue realized what he had done, he ran as fast as he could towards her to see if he had done any harm to the beautiful lady. He didn't want her to get hurt, for he was just playing and messing around a little. When he saw her hand hanging out the cliff, he walked closely to where she was and when he got there, he looked down and said joking in the middle of a chuckle: "Need help?" "What do you think, raven boy? That I like hanging down here with one hand, waiting for it to keep slipping down and down until I'm completely on the bottom of this immense cliff? She asked him expecting him to help her. But he did not, he just answered in the same joking tone, with the same annoying look: "You seem to enjoy it!" the look on the lady's face was so serious, Kuronue decided to leave the goofing off for another day. But not the messing around! "I'll get you out of there only if you surrender" Kuronue challenged. "I will never surrender!" she said that at the same time the rock she was hanging from slipped and fell down. She then hangs from another one below the one that just fell. "Do you surrender now?" Kuronue asked for the second time. "I told you, I won't su -" her words were interrupted when she fell again, but this time she didn't had enough time to hang from another stone, for she instantly fell down the cliff. As soon as Kuronue noticed it, he jumped down to save her. He grab both her hands in the air, and when he felt that she were well caught his wings opened wide as he began to fly. "Do you surrender now?" he joked when their were flying above the forest they were just fighting in. "I won't" she said with a smile that Kuronue couldn't see. Suddenly, Kuronue let one of the girl's hands in the air as he once again asked: "Now do you surrender?" "Okay, okay you win, I surrender" she said as she caught once again the man's hand.
When they finally landed, they did in a place near the village they just fought in. "Are you ok?" Kuronue asked with a concern in his voiced that made the beautiful princess noticed that he might be a thief, an extremely skilled fighter, and a master of all the wind techniques but that deep inside of him, his just a normal man, with a great gentle heart, and a huge sense of humor. "Yes, I am fine, thanks to you". "Nonsense. I was the one that pulled you towards the cliff in the first place". They kept walking until they reach a small river, where they drank some water. "Thanks" the lady said while the raven knight was drinking his water. He didn't replied. After a while he said: "So, what are you going to do?" "About what?" she asked him. "About your job. Prince Koenma told you your job would be catch me and bring me to justice." He explained to her. "And you surrender" he added hoping to make her smile and he did. "You made me surrender," She answered back with a happy smile. "I will just go back and tell Prince Koenma that you was stronger and faster, and that I couldn't beat you." She said. "Which is true" Kuronue added.
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So, that is for chapter one! Kind of short. Hope you like it. Please, please, please R&R. I will appreciate all singed comments and/or suggestions (reviews).
Later, ^_^
Lively
